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SlayerChick17 β Scream Them To Sleep --Poem
Published: 2005-06-08 19:21:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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The smoke you give offLooks pink under the sunset
But anythings pretty
If under the right light
The lies you sing are beautiful
Your breath in this hot room, chills
Shot through the heart with a love song
Victims stand dead by your feet
Scream them all to sleep now
Scream them all to tears
You had your second of feeling alive
Time to creep back to your grave
Let's give 'em one last bang.
And we're off.
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Comments: 8
you know how to put poems into motion picetures well done
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Oh, I'm so happy that you like this and I appreciate the fave so much. You're my most important critic because I see yoΓΊr writings as so beautiful and amazing that it makes me feel liek I really did something great when you compliment me. Just thought you should know.
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u write alot like i do lol i bet we think the same 2 ok thx bye.
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too bad i already know what this poem is about and no one else does. maybe. and yeah way to use that sean guy as your picture..
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i like it, it captures a motion picture visual for me
like a slow motion scene, its kinda gothic but just on the right side of it
well done gal.. write more
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"But anythings pretty" Should be "anything's"
I am feeling stupid and can only say that a few metaphors come to mind that this could be and they laregly come up short, but it's very appropriate to the visual on its basic face-value content.
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