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SlayerChick17 — Violence Is Your Best Quality
Published: 2005-01-18 02:14:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 219; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 25
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Would you like to taste this flesh?Like all the others have.
Been used so many times
Think I'm all worn out
I trusted you with all my life
My funeral's this Wednesday...
Break me.
Shake me.
Tear me up.
I'm you ragdoll, baby.
No more.
I'll walk out to the beach tonight
Trace your name along the shore
And let the tide take care
Of the rest...
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the blues, the greens, the reds, the words.
they all hypnotyse me
well done
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Wow, than kyou for the loevly comment. I appreciate it.
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Trace your name along the shore
And let the tide take care
Of the rest...
sydney you are pretty much the best writer i know. so..i think i'm going to have to quote this...somewhere...lol. i like the title too...sounds like a good name for a song...that you're going to write..when you get famous. hah
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"I trusted you with all my life
My funeral's this Wednesday..."
My favorite lines in this poem. I love how powerful the funeral line is and yet I hear it phrased in my mind as an offhand remark... it's just brilliant.
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I'm so glad you think so. I was wondering if any one would really notice. Heh. Thanks so much for the comment.
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great job its really good its just you should have added another stanza cuz the way it ended didn't really make much since but its still really good,
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I thought it ended to soon. But ya know how it goes . *shrug* THanks fro the comment though.
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your welcome any time
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Than kyou so much for the fave and the comment! Glad you like it!
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i like! haha really nice job.. this is my fav part...
"Break me.
Shake me.
Tear me up.
I'm you ragdoll, baby."
im fav'in this one!
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Thank you so much for your support and the fave! I really appreciate it.
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no prob! i love the poem!
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