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Hoenn-Master [2013-08-13 03:31:22 +0000 UTC]
Well, that sucks for the boys. Oh well, a very good backstory!
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FoolishLittleMortal [2013-07-31 15:07:26 +0000 UTC]
Still had to comment on this.
Dat backstory. I feel kinda sorry for those kids.
I like how you draw Dunmer. <3 His gloves look awesome too. Are those the vampire gloves by any chance?
And the skeever is adorable. :3
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SammaelsFall [2013-07-30 00:04:24 +0000 UTC]
I love the story ;A; Please continue to play, I want to know how it goes on!
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Fallliingmoon [2013-07-28 22:02:58 +0000 UTC]
Whoa... you really thought him through, hmm?
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SlayerSyrena In reply to Fallliingmoon [2013-07-28 23:10:32 +0000 UTC]
Yup, I'm having fun rping the game a bit more.
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rylog9 [2013-07-28 06:22:43 +0000 UTC]
"Hey Dad, you wanna play tag?"
"No, do your chores."
"C'mon, please?!"
"I HAVE WORK TO DO IN THE ENCHANTING LAB!"
"But you already disenchanted everything!"
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SlayerSyrena In reply to rylog9 [2013-07-28 13:39:42 +0000 UTC]
Then he'll go out and find more things to disenchant (or just enchant a bunch of iron daggers to level up faster). XD
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Kwenos [2013-07-28 03:52:11 +0000 UTC]
Nice characterisation there, Damar's but also the kids'.
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LeMattMan95 [2013-07-27 22:45:00 +0000 UTC]
I've just never really role played my characters very well. I always end up with a dragonborn who is the head of every guild and it makes the character seem extremely unrealistic for that world. Seeing stuff like this makes me want to limit what i do in one playthrough and do what I think the character would do. Seems a little more satisfying.
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Sattat6 [2013-07-27 18:36:53 +0000 UTC]
I liked the back story a lot! It was very cool and interesting.Β Β Β
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Sattat6 In reply to SlayerSyrena [2013-07-28 04:27:52 +0000 UTC]
I was happy to read it.
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SlayerSyrena In reply to Shungie [2013-07-28 01:00:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! (It's fun!)
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yzkethrag [2013-07-27 16:05:41 +0000 UTC]
;n;
dat backstory.
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SlayerSyrena In reply to yzkethrag [2013-07-28 00:59:55 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks for reading it! ^^
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Codfish107 [2013-07-27 11:31:36 +0000 UTC]
wow such depth
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Codfish107 In reply to SlayerSyrena [2013-07-28 20:14:37 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes another deviant who's work i always look forward to seeing, commenting back to meΒ Β
Your welcome btw
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the-exiled-muse [2013-07-27 08:50:31 +0000 UTC]
Interesting story. Such poor kids, I wonder if they'll reach out to other adults in the city? That could add an interesting angle to it.
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SlayerSyrena In reply to the-exiled-muse [2013-07-28 00:59:16 +0000 UTC]
I agree. So far Aicantar has allowed the boys to see the Dwemer museum so I imagine they might hang out in the Understone Keep around him sometimes during the day.
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SlayerSyrena In reply to Sanguithar [2013-07-28 00:56:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! I'm happy you read it. ^^
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kupieckorzenny [2013-07-27 07:50:44 +0000 UTC]
Really nice story. I like how he didn't turn into a benefactor, smiling all the time and happy that he left the worse behind and so on. This is much more realistic.
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SlayerSyrena In reply to spruce56 [2013-07-28 00:55:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I love the weathered texture Dunmer's have on their faces. I think it gives them character.
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spruce56 In reply to SlayerSyrena [2013-07-28 00:58:17 +0000 UTC]
Indeed! Β I made an elderly Dunmer bloke just to play with the character creation options, and ended up playing quite a bit - he's awesome XD
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SlayerSyrena In reply to spruce56 [2013-07-28 01:03:25 +0000 UTC]
That's cool! I should make an older character sometime too. :3
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SpacePirate369 [2013-07-27 04:59:03 +0000 UTC]
what a cool backstory, and I enjoyed reading the entire description
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Wildroses2009 [2013-07-27 02:27:23 +0000 UTC]
That skeever being cuddled is so happy at being held by it's owner. It's the only happy face in this entire picture. Though after reading the description I can see why.
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SlayerSyrena In reply to Wildroses2009 [2013-07-28 00:53:22 +0000 UTC]
I like that you noticed that. Thanks for reading!
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AScarletmoon17 [2013-07-26 22:54:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow what a back story :0 amazing really.Β
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SlayerSyrena In reply to AScarletmoon17 [2013-07-28 00:53:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I'm happy you took the time to read it. ^^
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