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sliverofciel ā€” if break was music
Published: 2010-07-20 02:06:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 405; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 3
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there is more to be
learned from the rasp of
your spine than a parliament
of owls; in your approval
i glimpse fawn-flecked
moors and

this, in time, becomes
my sustenance: an
autumn-ribbed girl
overdosing on
air.

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you are a monsoon,
i am vases standing
empty. the soundtrack
of our love is cripple
squirting from a syringe
called
l o s sā€”


too late,
too late
to save.

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i was hoping
the other day that your
pupils would turn back
to fall.

(they didn't)
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Comments: 5

DoppelgangerIsI [2010-07-26 05:58:19 +0000 UTC]

I love collective nouns.

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SilverWynd [2010-07-21 02:58:53 +0000 UTC]

This was really interesting, some great lines.

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toxic-nebulae [2010-07-20 22:18:00 +0000 UTC]

this poem cracked me open a bit.

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WanderingHere [2010-07-20 13:45:33 +0000 UTC]

this is my favorite part: this, in time, becomes
my sustenance: an
autumn-ribbed girl
overdosing on
air.

it's perfect.

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IStoleTheDolphins [2010-07-20 02:21:31 +0000 UTC]

Eerie, ribbed feel. Just read it aloud and loved it even more.

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