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Published: 2012-06-22 03:39:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 3027; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 18
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Description I really like this quote but I think I could've done better with the design..
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Shockowaffel [2012-07-01 08:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Number one :
Dont ever criticize yourself ! If the artist doesnt like it, why should others ?
And there are so many people out there to criticize you,....let them! Dont help them !

Number two:
Even if you say: I could have done better...well than DO so.
To be very direct on this one, it gives the feeling of "Who wants half-assed stuff ?"

Okay, sorry for the harsh words, but they had to be told.

On the shirt:
The quote is really nice. If it's a quote, why not give credit for it ?...at least if it's from someone many people know.
The picture really doesnt have much to do with the message though. It illustrated music, but apart of that, there isnt much.
what I want to say is, you could skip the text and the gun and it would still be a nice shirt.

Please comment on my music shirt: [link]

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Smokeybred In reply to Shockowaffel [2012-07-01 08:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critic even though I never really asked for it. I could have done better, sure, but I merely entered to inspire other people. And the quote is my own personal thought. As for the comment on your shirt, I'm not getting a real sense of music other than tribal pride or whatnot. Also, I'm sure a lot of people looking this over, that can't take unwelcome critic as well as myself, will believe to see you as an unruly douchemuffin.. Sorry for the harsh words but they HAD to be told.

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Shockowaffel In reply to Smokeybred [2012-07-01 08:56:35 +0000 UTC]

I didnt think that critic on DA could ever be unwelcome as long as it is constructive.

and lol at the "unruly douchemuffin". ^^
I have no idea what that is supposed to mean.

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Smokeybred In reply to Shockowaffel [2012-07-01 09:01:42 +0000 UTC]

In most cases, it's unwelcome when people don't select the "allow critic" button. And the unruly douchemuffin thing is for younger dA persons who think better artwork than theirs shouldn't need to be criticized.

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Shockowaffel In reply to Smokeybred [2012-07-01 09:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Better work than my own doesnt need to be criticized ?
Forget it, I crit everything.^^ Even on really good stuff you might find something that could be better, even though it doesnt need to.
Writing crits actually helps becoming better yourself, because it forces you to define problems and analyze pictures and therefore improves your view on your own work, to see what's wrong.

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cosboom [2012-06-29 13:07:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for using my brushes!

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Smokeybred In reply to cosboom [2012-06-29 18:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Yup!~

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ashtoledo [2012-06-24 05:22:43 +0000 UTC]

why potter font?

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Smokeybred In reply to ashtoledo [2012-06-24 05:24:54 +0000 UTC]

You mean Parry Hotter font?
I thought it looked good.

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IcyWindThePony [2012-06-23 07:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Darnit Smokey stop being good at everything :v

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Smokeybred In reply to IcyWindThePony [2012-06-23 07:39:42 +0000 UTC]

;_; Okay Tyler..

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IcyWindThePony In reply to Smokeybred [2012-06-24 05:15:00 +0000 UTC]

No, wait! Don't stop being good! ;~;

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Smokeybred In reply to IcyWindThePony [2012-06-24 05:27:17 +0000 UTC]

Okay.. c:

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IcyWindThePony In reply to Smokeybred [2012-06-25 00:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Good :>

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KorruptedSky [2012-06-23 01:03:12 +0000 UTC]

loving the design not so much the font for the quote but its getting my vote ;D
share the luv and vote back ahaha [link]

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Smokeybred In reply to KorruptedSky [2012-06-23 01:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~ Your design is awesome!

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MilesPrower374 [2012-06-22 19:34:31 +0000 UTC]

You couldn't have done better with the design because this is perfect the way it is! Nice job!

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Smokeybred In reply to MilesPrower374 [2012-06-22 20:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya~

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MilesPrower374 In reply to Smokeybred [2012-06-22 20:01:09 +0000 UTC]

No prob.

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InTheDeepEnd [2012-06-22 15:49:17 +0000 UTC]

"False! We won't go to war for pizza."
-my brother


anyway sweet design,dude ^^

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Smokeybred In reply to InTheDeepEnd [2012-06-22 17:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Your brother is a cool dude! Give him a hug for me~

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ManamiMarisa-chan [2012-06-22 14:57:58 +0000 UTC]

this is really cool! um is it alright if you can give me the link of the t-shirt template? i've been looking everywhere for it and i would like to participate in this contest even though i have no chance lol

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Smokeybred In reply to ManamiMarisa-chan [2012-06-22 17:43:16 +0000 UTC]

It's not really a link but it's a download. If you go to to the contest's page/browse entries, it should say "View challenge details" and then you'd click "Download assets and Tips" and it should be there. c:

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syth406 [2012-06-22 14:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Design could be a little more splashy but other than that, AMAZONG!!!

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Smokeybred In reply to syth406 [2012-06-22 17:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya~ Yeah I felt it was missing some stuff too. c:>

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Charlene-Art [2012-06-22 11:43:58 +0000 UTC]

That is cool. Although there are silly wars on youtube within the comment section arguing about which artists are better and that good music is dead

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Smokeybred In reply to Charlene-Art [2012-06-22 17:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Bah. Classic /mu/ life style. I meant people who don't argue for stupid things, in which, war IS stupid in all cases but music would just be far too stupid.

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DaelaeyniAnne [2012-06-22 05:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Very badass! Loving the grunge aspect!

I invite you to check out my design!
[link]

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Smokeybred In reply to DaelaeyniAnne [2012-06-22 06:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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DaelaeyniAnne In reply to Smokeybred [2012-06-22 06:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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coffeesoo [2012-06-22 04:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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Smokeybred In reply to coffeesoo [2012-06-22 04:49:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya~

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coffeesoo In reply to Smokeybred [2012-06-22 04:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes!

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Dohmalore [2012-06-22 04:18:03 +0000 UTC]

That is a sexy shirt. @.@

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Smokeybred In reply to Dohmalore [2012-06-22 04:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Bwehehe~

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Fuzzyblaze [2012-06-22 03:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Siiiiick. That's coool (:

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Smokeybred In reply to Fuzzyblaze [2012-06-22 03:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya~

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Fuzzyblaze In reply to Smokeybred [2012-06-22 03:48:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem(:

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PitayaArt [2012-06-22 03:40:53 +0000 UTC]

that is epic i love memo

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Smokeybred In reply to PitayaArt [2012-06-22 03:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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PitayaArt In reply to Smokeybred [2012-06-22 14:55:48 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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