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Published: 2019-09-27 16:49:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1104; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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A new OC! Look at her! Isnt she cute?- wait.. thats not cute, unusual... O.OΒRelated content
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Hello, I found this on ProjectComment and I will review this with "Anatomy" then "Coloring and Shading" then "Background" then "My Final Thoughts."
Anatomy: It's pretty good and it looks interesting to look at! Her three pair of arms is a really cool feature to add to the creepy factor. And the sewed up mouth is a good touch that kinda reminds me of Sallyface and/or Jeff the Killer. But here's some things I can point out to work on. The first thing is that it seems that she only have 3 legs, as their is no indication that their is a fourth legs. If she's supposed to have only three legs then u can ignore this. And I saw people saying that the back is too short, and the I kinda think the same thing. And also the front thigh is so big and meaty compared to the other front leg which looks like a noodle compared to the big thigh. And the side of the foot look a little wonky. Other then that, it's good!
Coloring and Shading: It's excellent! I love the bright shine of the eyes. The color scheme is great, and the placing of the color is also great! Your shading and highlighting is on-point! Tbh that all I can say about it, so great job!
Background: It's really good! The darkness of the color really adds to the creepy feel without the color being bright to point where the color wound take away the creepy facts to it. That all I can say so good job!
My Final Thoughts: Overall this is a great piece and character. I hope for the best for u and ur art! And I hope to see more from u in the future! ~NikyleProductions
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Ah.. I mustve misplaced the ribcage a little, hope its no biggie though
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You sure its not her thicc thigh muscle? lol
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Yes, no mater how THICCCC you are your back should still be pretty long. just please do research on anatomy. PLEASE!
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True, but.. it is a mantis, arent their legs usually set up like that?
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a humanoid mantis. Muffet form undertale is a spider but her anatomy is closer to a human.
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Ah true, this ones sorta half and half, a centaur in a way
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Even a centaur has a normal back.
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Ah true, though.. Im sorta conflicted, like it looks ok for a mantis but at the same time your right XwX
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Hmmmm... I think its ok for a mantis but next time I'll make it slightly longerΒ
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Are you sure you want to pat her?.. shes huge XwX lol
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Huuuge doesn mean dangerrrrrrous <:3
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True lol, but Id imagine she would be grumpy XP, if u do like it as well would loved if you watched me andIll post more of her when I get the chance to draw her more ^^
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Then a watch from me when you'll post another pic with her >;3
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Awww alright then XP, deal lol, say... I got an idea, I run a request board on my dA, and you could request a pic of her and choose the setting how you like ^w^
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I'd more insit on an art trade. Feelin that would be mpre fair, hehe >;3
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Ohh an art trade?.. Sounds good ^^, not done one before but thats like when you draw something that someone else wants you to draw while that goes the same for the other person?
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yup. I can draw your new OC if what
while u can pick any character you like to draw from my OCs ;3
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For A giant centuar killing mantis kaiju whos always angry?... Yup
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