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Vodyanoy1294 [2019-11-17 10:09:07 +0000 UTC]
hohow, Smol, you knew that day will come sooner or later
u. have been. spwotted. with reqwesting. CWITIQUE! uwu (plz don get angry on me and don't send waifus to annihilate me)
So to start with gonna start with plusses and ow boy, first plus spotted is how you drew hips! man those looks juicy and the shading only adds some shining to it and makes viewer think that she just came out of the water
next thing on note is anatomy in general. she doesn't seem to have any critical issues with it
also worth to mention is (as usual) shading. You know how good your shading is and how easily viewer can spot where the light source is so as always adding that reflected light properly
and as last point in pros good work with feathers on her head and tail, makes them stand out more and as a result points viewer's eyes on her happy expression
aaaand now to the cons and yee you also havin them and hope your butt won't burn from it >3
first cone I noted is her head and expression. it looks flat, even with nice shading. problem about it is that you drew it in a profile and also that her head is literally a circle, but something tells me it's how her head designed since the beginning. what could fix that problem is to try draw her face not looking directly on viewer, but looking a bit in left or right, showing volume in her head
next thing to point out is her lizard lines from neck to privates, it more looks like a swim suit while suppose it isn't. what could fix it is to watch references where characters having same sort of line on their body (refs of any shark or snakes can go)
and also hard to find nitpick is her right arm in a stone. hands aren't that long xD so just shortening it in a joint would fix a problem
So in conclusion want to say that your pic of her looks AWESOME, even that having some flaws, which if you'd be able to fix would look even better. hope you don wanna eat me for this cwitique and hope it was helpful for u, uwu
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Burke23 [2019-11-13 04:52:40 +0000 UTC]
ADORBS
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SmolSoviet In reply to ChiptheHedgehog [2019-11-13 18:08:03 +0000 UTC]
Awww ^^ Im very glad you like it and yw, if you dont mind a small favour you could share it show your watchers it share it around as well XP tho up to you
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