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Snowflower--Chan00 In reply to ??? [2014-07-18 15:22:28 +0000 UTC]
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! Yo finally replied. I honestly get depressed when you don't reply soon.
Thank you so much!! ^^ XD I'd say I'm a poet at heart! LOL. I too also adore blood and gore, so extra points for extreme epicness there! Thanks I tried imagining how Beatrice was, granted I barely remember watching a few episodes from the series, then I randomly found her character song and it helped delve deep within her twisted and sadistic personality. I love details, details are the key to great story writing, I think.
Nooo its not disturbing to love gore and darkness at all. I love it, you love it! Some people don't. Although I am weirder than Undertaker, so it might a little disturbing. Who can say for sure? LOL. So happy you totally share the same idea, of someone resurrecting the dead. Its creepy and it is truly the scariest thing ever. Worse than zombies!!! We fear that we will lose control over ourselves and can't stop. I think that applies with being resurrected as well as turning into a zombie. psychological horrors is the best as well as gore!
I knew Watanuki and Asuka were very close and I wanted to portray their friendship, er almost like siblings though. Although to the other people they will look like a couple, because of how deeply they care for each other, and mostly for comic relief! LOL. Asuka did have a crush on him earlier, but later grows out of it respecting the fact that his heart belongs to Himawari. Nevertheless they are always there for each other. Unless the Mokona pair and Yuko want to pick on Watanuki, Asuka wholeheartedly joins the fun! In that aspect, she's like yuko in a way.
I also love Maria as twisted as she is, she's adorable in her evil ways. XD. I swear in the show, we easily see she has a split personality and I tried to hint at that here. For a 9 year old girl, she's quite mature for her age and knows a lot about witches, since she's obsessed with Beatrice. That "uuuu, uuuuu!" Is her catchphrase. XD. Sometimes it gets annoying.
The Happy Halloween" message was part of an episode that was based on my ideas. Including that gruesome dinner party, I just made it gruesomer. LOL.
YEAAA! I actually prefer writing darker stories than light hearted ones. Shocking, I know!!! I guess its because I've grown tired of good always coming out without a scratch, or too many light hearted stuff out there. It over powers the true darkness of men's hearts. And women's. But writing darker stories is a lot more fun and exciting and anything can happen.
For my next evil story I'm using this song:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=jgBz88…
Those two demons are known as: The Demons of Love.
Their names are: Zaper and Furfur. IDK who is really the girl or the boy! O.O
Maybe girlish sounding voice could be the boy, and darker sounding voice is the girl. XD.
It could be true, I mean they are demons they don't have to follow the laws of Human gender. LOL.
I swear that's happened in Anime somewhere.
The Plot:
The Love of Friendship isn't always strong enough. . . To save one's soul from sinking into the darkest abyss of despair.
Just made up that cool quote! I hope you like it! ^.^
The Demons of Love: Zaper and Furfur play with Watanuki, Asuka, and Himawari. First physically toruring them.
Their torture chamber happens to be a beautiful dazzling ballroom. Oddly enough.
Later during the music break: (I wish there were subtitles for that part, because I want to know what they are saying!!!)
The room melts away into a white light, as Asuka, Watanuki, and Himawari become trapped in their memories.
Sort of like a dream prison of sorts.
Still singing, the demons play each victim's darkest memory (Actually it starts out sweet)
For Watanuki: Its seeing his parents again underneath the cherry blossom trees. All is blissful.
He becomes a little boy again, holding his parents hands and laughing.
For Asuka: (She has blocked out this memory so it will take some time for her to remember)
She sees a younger version of herself (around 14 years old) (or 13, or 12. IDK for sure yet)
In her Spira's school's playground clutching a love letter for a boy she has a crush on.
Older Asuka follows her as the young girl runs down the hallway.
For Himawari: She's in her own classroom enjoying a great conversation between: Asuka, Watanuki, and Doumeki.
(Music starts up again)
Watanuki's parents yank their hands from his, and tell him they left him because they simply didn't love him anymore.
He was the cause of their deaths and they resent him!
Older Watanuki watches himself cry and fall to his knees. They throw more insults at him enjoying his pain.
Watanuki also falls to his knees begging them to come back to him, that he will change, etc.
He didn't mean to kill them!
The insults soon leave fresh gaping wounds on his body.
Asuka: She learns that the boy had rejected her, because her eyes were ugly and weird looking. No guy would want to go out with her. That is the root of her hatred towards her eyes. An icy wave hits her, at this realization. She racks with sobs, feeding the twin demons' hunger. He tells her how ugly she is, and she believes him all over again. It worsens her depression.
Himwari: Himawari witnesses the deaths of various people and is reminded of her bad luck. She touches watanuki's sleeve and sees him fall out the window all over again, but this time he dies. Asuka gets hit by a car. Doumeki's house explodes. And its all her fault, because she wanted to be with her friends and other people. In doing so, she brought them bad luck. She cries with her younger self inside her house as her parents argue (IDK if this is true or not, all I know is that she has bad luck and that's why she avoids Watanuki in the first place)
Then it gets worse:
(Still debating on this one part. IDK keep it or not?) Asuka gets so depressed and hopeless, that she gets rid of her ugliness for good, just for one chance at being beautiful. She gouges her eyes out with the sharp knife that the demons give her.
As each victim struggles between lies and truths. Then later Himawari will finish them all off, believing killing them all is the only way to save themselves and be at peace from her bloody hands. She goes psycho!!!
The song ends as the darkness disappears and the candles are snuffed out. The curtains close, and the sunlight reveals a bloody mess all around the ballroom. The three mutilated corpses lie near each other in a huge pool of blood.
The twin Demons of Love smile at their handiwork.
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kaimatsuda [2014-06-27 04:12:14 +0000 UTC]
Immaculate, as always!
I give you 9,001/10. It's over 9000!
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kaimatsuda In reply to Snowflower--Chan00 [2014-07-11 01:56:05 +0000 UTC]
It's amazing!
I watched all 25 episodes, the movie, and all 10 omakes!
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