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tgohan [2015-01-17 00:22:55 +0000 UTC]
Well I read it. It was interesting but kinda confusing. I could tell some war was going om between the two gods which was cool. But you're missing other major ff characters. Like tidus!! And zidane is cool, too. Come on! Lol.
Oh!! And b4 I forget...I'm going to have to kick your ass...I love you so much but your ass has to be kicked...snow does not love lightning...and she doesn't live him. Snow loves serah and she him. Serah does not love Noel and he doesn't love her either. Man, im about to butcher you. XDDD *huggles*
Oh and uh....sora got his keyblade wielding powers fr ventus, not the guy in your story. XD
If u wanted to do that, u should of said sora went to wielder of the keyblade b4 ventus. Lol. Also. I noticed this kinda seemed like a song of sorts...kept on repeating some statements (impressive statements no less) but after a while, it got kinda hard to follow bcuz of all the "not gonna die and dont close your eyes" etc. But I can appreciate it regardless bcuz it brought a different feeling to the story. So, good job for the most part. Just a few minor issues I discussed already. Lol. Dont make me nibble your ears next time! X3
Love you!
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Snowflower--Chan00 In reply to tgohan [2015-01-17 05:22:08 +0000 UTC]
HEY now! I couldn't squeeze in everyone. XD. Whenever I make this War of the Gods story, (Which is the last part to my Kingdom Hearts 3 story. But I might spoil it early, who knows. Totally depressed right now, what with school just around the corner, damn classes!!! I hate college!) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, don't kick my cute ass! Hey, differ opinions. I know its confusing now, but when I expand on Snow's and Lightning's development in FF13. I have a reference to this one great story that does just that. But too lazy to find it. Noel is awesome okay? XD. Noel could love Serah, and she him nothing is set in stone not even engaged people. . . .Engagements can be broken. But I love your honesty and I appreciate it, even though we don't see eye to eye all the time you are still a great friend!
Oh yeah? Kero technically started this whole KH thing, with the keyblade, so technically speaking he did. First Ventus did have it though. I may have to change that error. LOL. Oh did you know Terra's keyblade (May or may not have come from Kero's set of keyblades.) makes people become mad with power and corrupted with Darkness? Just look at Riku. LOL.
I know, that is why there is this link to the song, so it might be less confusing that way, at least I hope so. XD.
Nooo, not my ears!!! ROFL! Please review my FFX-3 story if you haven't seen it already.
I'm having issues with how to develop both Yuna and Yakumo.
Hmm, yeah IDK what they will do about going on this quest.
Yakumo might become her bodyguard, but does she seriously need one?
She is a Priestess as well as Spira's hope, so I'd imagine Lady Yuna is well guarded.
Hmmmmmmm. . .
Tidus: I am so kicking your ass once we got on the boat to go to Yuna's speech.
Yakumo: What pray tell did I do wrong exactly? (coolly looks away like the rich Noble he is)
Tidus: You STOLE my woman!
Yakumo: How so? As far as I know she's still yours and all I want to do is get off this world and go home.
Tidus: You're stealing my moves man! What the hell?
Yakumo: Look we're getting off on the wrong foot. Let's start over.
Tidus: Grrrr!!! NEVER! (eyes on fire)
Yakumo: Hn, I'm not trying to steal anyone's woman. She's the one who insisted I accompany her and become her new guardian. I better get paid after this.
Tidus: You're saying money is more important to you than my woman?!!!!!!!!!!
Yakumo: I'm saying we're not lovers, we're not friends, so why the hell should I protect her for free?
Tidus: I don't care how you feel, you will protect her or I'm kicking your ass even harder!
Yakumo: (chuckles) A commoner like you can't even land a scratch.
Tidus: Wanna bet? (unsheathes sword)
Yakumo: (Does as well) You're going to be sorry you know. (sapphire blue eyes sparkle from the sun's light)
Tidus: This is for you Yuna, you're going to stay mine.
Yuna: (glomps Yakumo from behind) Yakumo-kun!!!!
Tidus: Y-Yuna? . . .SHE CALLS YOU -KUN?
Yakumo: Apparently. . . .What's your point? (oblivious to the new issue)
Tidus: Yuna is mine, you damned Prince! (chases Yakumo) She is the only one for me!
Yakumo: (dodges Tidus's swings like a BOSS) You know there are other girls out there.
Rikku: ^^
Tidus: None of them are like Yuna!
Rikku:
(Poor Rikku, but love will turn around for her)
Lulu: STOP IT! You IDIOTS are going to sink this boat!
Yup, I am bored. ^^ But I love making these two guys as rivals. MUHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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tgohan In reply to Snowflower--Chan00 [2015-01-18 19:57:11 +0000 UTC]
Lol!! Yeah, I will definitely be honest with my replies. Thats what I would want on my pictures. XD
And who is kero? Hes just an oc u made up. Right? And u made him be the very first keyblade wielder or whatever? Oh and also, I dont think u should of had riku on the sidelines. He should of been on the front lines, with his light and dark powers. Afterall, hes becoming more and more popular to fans. Thats why he became the true keyblade master. Not sora. Lol. XD
And I seriously will get your ears if u dont show tidus some love! And I dont mean no rikku love. XDD
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Snowflower--Chan00 In reply to tgohan [2015-01-18 20:19:39 +0000 UTC]
YEA! Yes, but you know the kero from Card Captor Sakura? Yeah, that's his part time job. He was a shinigami who was tricked into helping Clow Reed keep track of these Clow Cards, he is deeply embarrassed by his super adorable plushy form, and the stupid fake 'real' name called Kerobus? (I probably spelled the name wrong.XD)
Correct. Yeah, well don't worry Riku, Sora, and Kairi will get their spotlights as the story continues.
Sora can go cry in a corner for all I care!!! Sorry, sorry, I have issues with Sora. LOL. Riku is way cooler anyway.
Okay, he will, just need to think about FFX-3, since that happens 2 years after the events of FFX-2. And yes, Tidus is still a cool Blitzball player in Spira, if not the best!
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Kaesca [2015-01-15 07:20:39 +0000 UTC]
"When everything you love is leaving, you hold on to what you believe in" I like this line.
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