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pokediginut [2019-03-15 21:27:33 +0000 UTC]
A bit rushed on character introductions but your work is as notable as ever
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thesparksbro [2019-02-12 00:44:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is quite exciting Consider me hooked^^
So, what Pokemon are all the kids again?
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SnowHawk7 In reply to thesparksbro [2019-02-12 03:34:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I'm glad that you enjoy it.
So here are all the kids.
Garth and Zariya have five kids. Julie, Logan, and Abdul are all Zoroark and are all young adults. Cheng is a shiny Lucario and she's a juvenile. Ripley is the newly hatched Riolu.
Astrid is Garth's daughter from a Glaceon he...experimented on when he worked with Team Rocket.
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thesparksbro In reply to SnowHawk7 [2019-02-12 04:15:29 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, gotcha. I understand that now. Thanks for the explanation/clarification.
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RenegadeSpirit [2019-02-09 04:22:09 +0000 UTC]
A rather interesting idea on this. Still, keep focus on certain apposically & sentence. Make sure that you use "Sentence" in order to work.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to RenegadeSpirit [2019-02-09 14:43:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Yeah my grammar has definitely suffered since leaving high school.
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RenegadeSpirit In reply to SnowHawk7 [2019-02-10 02:22:07 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but your flaw wasn't to be o.k. But be better. More importantly, to be who you are.
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RenegadeSpirit In reply to SnowHawk7 [2019-02-10 22:19:00 +0000 UTC]
Exactly. That's why you are now a good person.
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TSEstrada [2018-10-23 11:10:17 +0000 UTC]
This is a nice intro. Healthy blend of seeing the family interacting with each other and a little backstory to set some lore behind behind this series.
Also, thanks for the mention, Sam. It's really nice of you to see me as a friend.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to TSEstrada [2018-10-23 12:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks dude I really appreciate the feedback.
And now problem. I love your artwork and I totally see you as a friend.
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calvacades [2018-09-04 20:41:00 +0000 UTC]
As great as always, a overall darker tone of the story with a few darker moments but not to dark that we couldn't stand it to read. I'm very curious about the Next chapter, I'm quite sure that there will be a lot of potencial conflict with Lucian..
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SnowHawk7 In reply to calvacades [2018-09-04 23:07:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I hope that the backstory of Garth and Zariya was clear enough. I didn't want to go into their full backstory because that would be a hundred page story in and of itself. But I feel like I managed to cover all the important information about them and their children.
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calvacades In reply to SnowHawk7 [2018-09-05 06:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Of course you did that !!!
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