Comments: 7
Tablet-19 [2013-06-05 22:57:37 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful. That is the only thing that comes to mind at the moment but it is really touching. ^^ It must be really hard for them to have to leave each other for months on end. :/ Anyways, amazing story, I love it! ^^
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pokediginut [2013-06-01 22:10:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow I'm glad I was able to help you out. This was well done, and the fact that the scene before was at night made it en better. Well done now I just gotta read part 2!!!!
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BladeSquall [2013-06-01 11:18:42 +0000 UTC]
Well, this is interesting. What I would like to know is what Sam could have done to be on the run from bounty hunters.
Still, it's a nice little romance between Lin and Ghost.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to BladeSquall [2013-06-02 04:32:45 +0000 UTC]
That little piece of information will be revealed in the final chapter of Matthew's Trial. Can't tell you anymore than that without revealing some major spoilers.
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Axel230 [2013-06-01 07:55:53 +0000 UTC]
This was so sweet . Thank you so much for having done this.
I loved that little race scene, really to be expected from Lin. Man, Faint Attack always comes in handy .
No! Bad Lin! You just don't ask ANY Pokemon to leave its master! Specially Ghost who has gone through so much to finally have a good master. I like the way Ghost talked some sense into her (You can't really blame her for that crossing her mind though, her life has been really easy).
The harbor scene cheesy? How? It's a common scenario even in real life. This without mentioning some animals keep looking the way someone went long after the person is gone, as if waiting for him to come back (Loved that little bit).
Simple, a few typos, but great job with this. For a moment I thought this would be really sappy, but you managed to balance it out.
PS: I'll save part 2 for tomorrow, the anticipation gets my mind going . Oh, and just wondering, which six Pokemon did Sam take with him?
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SnowHawk7 In reply to Axel230 [2013-06-01 14:55:15 +0000 UTC]
Glad you liked the first part so much. For the record the six Pokemon Sam took with him were: Jake, Ace, Shadow, Ghost, Tucker, and Sean. A well balanced team of his most trusted partners.
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Moxxitits In reply to SnowHawk7 [2013-06-13 06:06:55 +0000 UTC]
Can I just say, I would trust Tucker unless there is any woman within twenty feet of the direct area.
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