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pokediginut [2016-03-25 05:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Sam really has to work on his timing and his speech delivery during tense and emotional situations . . . As do you actually XD
Wait there are female prisoners here too?
Also I just realized that a Pokemon runs a prison. Not a human that he's partnered with, a Pokemon!
But at least your almost done.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to pokediginut [2016-03-25 17:48:47 +0000 UTC]
He's based on me. So it makes perfect sense.
No, Calcifer is Bi.
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thesparksbro [2016-02-15 01:21:28 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, execution date bumped up that quickly o.o Damn, that's messed up.
But it looks like Luke and Sam have a brilliant plan set in motion that will hopefully turn things around^^ (Though I wonder what it's gonna be. After all Jenna's Pokemon's lives are all still in danger.)
And wow, I can't believe there are only two parts left. It almost seems like there's so much more waiting to happen. Well I can't wait to see what things you have in store for us in the final two parts^^
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SnowHawk7 In reply to thesparksbro [2016-02-15 01:31:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
I am still working on chapter eleven and as for chapter twelve I am going to do something very special with that chapter.
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thesparksbro In reply to SnowHawk7 [2016-02-15 01:34:59 +0000 UTC]
You're sure welcome! I really do love your works and I can't wait to see what you've got planned^^
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MorphJerme [2016-01-08 09:33:15 +0000 UTC]
The "He's a ghost" and that he wants to see Matthew dead gave me the strange thought of him being Angel, or someone close to her, who wants them both to be united again. This thought is too absurd though.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to MorphJerme [2016-01-09 00:28:18 +0000 UTC]
As interesting an idea that is I'm afraid that isn't what I have planned.
That being said it is an interesting idea.
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Epicminecaft In reply to SnowHawk7 [2017-09-26 09:41:57 +0000 UTC]
That is funny because that is what you are doing for the 13 chapter
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MorphJerme In reply to SnowHawk7 [2016-01-09 08:40:48 +0000 UTC]
I knew that you would have not planned this and this concept would not fit Angels personality. Just an absurd and hilarious idea I had.
Probably Wilson is a Pokemon (or the ghost of one), who had multiple Encounters with Matthew and developed a large grudge against him, but I will just wait for the next parts to reveal the truth.
Story is well written and I am eagerly awaiting the new parts.
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TSEstrada [2015-12-21 12:05:47 +0000 UTC]
I think this is how the gang will react to a situation like this. Either way, the tension is engrossing especially the theory behind Wilson. I can only think of four reasons how a guy like him can be a complete mystery. Either he really is rich and powerful enough to corrupt the system, or he's a hermit (highly unlikely), he might be a hacker smart enough to wipe his digital footprint or he's in covert ops but eventually went rogue.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to TSEstrada [2015-12-21 13:38:29 +0000 UTC]
I hate to inform you it is none of the above. Trust me though you will be shocked.
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BladeSquall [2015-12-18 11:55:34 +0000 UTC]
So we're getting to the finale, here. Poor guys only have a day left with Matthew. And Winston has no real background? Wow. Could he be a spy?
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