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pokediginut [2016-03-24 01:13:26 +0000 UTC]
Had a second at work so AT LAST I can read this.
Oh Matthew, u locked up and yet your sticking your nose into other prisoners business ain't the way to survive being on the inside . . Normally anyway, he at least has the strength to back up his act.
Appreciated Feng's ass whoopin.
I kinda wish he wasn't an Arcanine since I love those Pokemon and that you didn't name him Calcifer since I love that character from Howls cause it makes me not 100% hate him XD
The fact that the random condemned Pokemon just rallied around Matthew even though he hasn't been there long was kinda fake to be honest . .
Correct me if I'm wrong but I'm pretty sure that just because a prisoner may be rowdy does not give the warden the power to push forward a prisoners execution date but I could be wrong on that . .
Will u stop belittling your chapter, filler or not. And this was not boring it was very interesting!!!
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SnowHawk7 In reply to pokediginut [2016-03-24 02:07:21 +0000 UTC]
In regard to your complaints about this chapter it is fantasy. Just go with it. Suspension of disbelief.
Matthew was the first one to ever stand up to Matthew and they rallied behind him simply because of him standing up to their tormentor.
Calcifer rules the place like his own kingdom. It's his world there.
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pokediginut In reply to SnowHawk7 [2016-03-24 10:50:49 +0000 UTC]
It's just me analyzing your story, don't think too much of it if you just have given that any thought
Matthew stood up to himself? XD
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thesparksbro [2016-02-14 19:57:10 +0000 UTC]
You sure do a great job describing the brutality of this prison and Calcifer. And man, it's nice to see karma kick Feng's ass^^
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SnowHawk7 In reply to Axel230 [2015-12-17 02:07:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks dude. I'm really glad that you liked it so much.
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TSEstrada [2015-12-07 02:39:53 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering if those two are gonna fight. As always, I'm impressed with the way you depicted it. Also liked the whole buildup to the scene, really goes to show the Pokemon World is not as civilised as it appears to the public.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to TSEstrada [2015-12-07 02:45:10 +0000 UTC]
Matthew and Calcifer. Not...in a traditional sense.
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TSEstrada In reply to SnowHawk7 [2015-12-07 03:06:01 +0000 UTC]
I meant Matthew and Feng. Been wondering since the last few chapters.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to TSEstrada [2015-12-07 16:12:47 +0000 UTC]
Well they fought in this chapter and Matthew broke his leg. So I figured that would be the end of it between the two of them.
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BladeSquall [2015-12-03 00:33:58 +0000 UTC]
Holy shit, this was awesome. Not only did Matthew save that Sandslash, but proved to be the bigger Pokémon by sparing Feng's life. Too bad he pissed off the warden.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to BladeSquall [2015-12-03 02:11:17 +0000 UTC]
Glad that you enjoyed it. Personally I was worried that this chapter was kind of pointless to the story but if a writer as good as you think that it's good then I'm incredibly honored.
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BladeSquall In reply to SnowHawk7 [2015-12-03 02:47:05 +0000 UTC]
It brings a kind of Shawshank Redemption feel to this story.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to BladeSquall [2015-12-03 03:19:26 +0000 UTC]
That was kind of what I was aiming for with that. Even though I have never seen that movie I have heard that it is very good.
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SiltyDog31 [2015-12-02 21:27:24 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work and was this inspired by nelson Mandela's time in prison if not look it up its pretty interesting.
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pokediginut In reply to SiltyDog31 [2016-03-24 00:58:49 +0000 UTC]
Odd comparison but I get what u mean.
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SnowHawk7 In reply to SiltyDog31 [2015-12-03 02:11:29 +0000 UTC]
It wasn't based off of that but I think that I am going to look that up.
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pokediginut In reply to SnowHawk7 [2016-03-24 00:58:33 +0000 UTC]
Wait you've never heard of that!?!?
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