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Published: 2012-10-15 13:06:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 4730; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 22
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The End~~~~I tell ya, it ain't easy to do all these 15 pages, took A LONG time to finish all of them.
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Team Winter
+Application: [link]
+Main Mission: MAIN MISSION
Devonshire and Vergil have made it their mission to apprehend a mysterious Zoroark said to be the perpetrator behind the Sorbet incident. Caldera has decided to tag along and help teams see through any illusions this Zoroark might put up in an attempt at escaping. Dr. Quaak is following along to treat anyone who sustains any serious injuries. It appears that only Rescuers are at Devonshireβs side...
+Cameo:
-Felicity - [link]
-Caesar - [link]
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So number two from you i'v read, and i'm sad to say I have a mixed opinion on this (I will await the hate.) First off for the story, the characters were a gas, they have good chemistry and they were fun to watch, but as for the story overall (and connecting to my biggest problem.) it goes way too fast in my opinion, things go by too fast and you don't get enough time to really take it in (the post fight explanation feels vary rushed, and kind of goes against one of my carnal rules of "Show, don't tell!") now moving on to the art, I loved the character art on this, as I do with most of your work, the soft artwork was vary pleasing to look at (I think I read a manga once that had the same style, though for the life of me I can't remember.) but of course there has to be a downside, which for me is the background. Its vary bare, some scenes have no backgrounds and are just one color backdrops (and on a light note, for taking place in the prismatic jungle, it's not vary jungle-e.) Again I hate to have to say all this, mostly because I don't like to be critical of people, but overall I have to say 7/10 (again i'm ready for hate.)
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Ha, he totally did found a friend. Friendship is magic. And I thought those ponies were making that up.
Anyways cool story bro(dette).
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Pretty good comic. I really liked this story, even if it kinda reminded me of a bad anime at times. XD
It's nice to see you do a longer comic for once, it's even better than the shorts!
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This was a fantastic comic. The story was amazing.
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Yay~ That was so awesome Solar! XD Please continue to do stuff like this ^W^
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awesome stuff Summer! I liked this mission!
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I loved this comic, great work!
And the way you draw Fel is just too adorable >w<
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Ahh this comic is so adorable; a great job as always~ ^o^
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Solar-Slash? Hey, I know you. You're that Pokemon that talked to Devonshire.
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Hehe! I loved this. It's a comic without Summer yet it's like he never left...
Your comics make me more pumped to finishing my own faster.
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Do it! I'd love to see more of Muro, she's so cute ;w;
And thank you!
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This was great. Really colourful and you had a great combination of moves. Some real teamwork there. ^^ Very cute.
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I loved the story and the effects and expressions all through this, it was a joy reading! Really looking forward to seeing more of Team Winter!
Great job!!
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That was a very entertaining and interesting story. Quite thrilling in some places and the payoff was very cool. Really like the comic, you did a great job!
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