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SoulofWoods — Let's play... (Simple Trip)

Published: 2014-03-12 18:46:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1587; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 0
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Description Last week ago I read a couple of TMNT fanfics that were in TMNTContests Challenge "Loss". That composed perfectly with the moment when I found "Oswojony przez śmierć". So, I was in the right mood, and there was one fanfic that I liked especially.
It was "Tmnt: Simple Trip" by . The fact I like it, when there's character's death makes it even better one shot. Personaly, I feel that this story has some kind of good ending(for a girl ). I decided to draw the ending, when Don and the girl are going into a forest, but during the work I changed it and now it looks like they coming OUT of the forest into the light, sorry. I think the picture looks better that way.

Now technical things (my view ).
Positive: Well drawn light and the reflexes on the characters. Especially on the bandana Quite good ground. Good shading (from little lower perspective xD).
Negative: The trees. Uh, they're not good :/ The shading of Don's legs looks definitely bad And I'm not sure if the turtle's bag on girl's back was a good idea...
Generally: I'm pleased how the whole picture turned out. But I have to learn more about PTSai.
And I hope you like it
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Comments: 25

FrillyReptile [2014-06-30 19:13:16 +0000 UTC]

This looks so lovely and beautiful 

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SoulofWoods In reply to FrillyReptile [2014-06-30 20:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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BrownieFarie [2014-06-22 20:16:03 +0000 UTC]

That is pretty 

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SoulofWoods In reply to BrownieFarie [2014-06-22 21:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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BrownieFarie In reply to SoulofWoods [2014-06-22 21:34:27 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome 

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Brooke-The-Cat [2014-06-22 13:06:33 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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SoulofWoods In reply to Brooke-The-Cat [2014-06-22 15:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Ikr! Thanks

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Brooke-The-Cat In reply to SoulofWoods [2014-06-23 02:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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xiaoyingchang [2014-05-01 20:46:37 +0000 UTC]

It is good,I can feel the warmth in it

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SoulofWoods In reply to xiaoyingchang [2014-05-01 20:49:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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kumbuu [2014-04-30 10:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Cool shot.

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SoulofWoods In reply to kumbuu [2014-04-30 12:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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quickspace [2014-04-24 00:36:26 +0000 UTC]

aa I love your shading here, the whole thing has a very nostalgic feel to it!

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SoulofWoods In reply to quickspace [2014-04-24 14:17:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you like it You're right, I felt it when I read fanfic "Simple Trip", so I can say I moved some of my own feelings into this picture. I suggest you read it too
And thanks for the Llama

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BlueRoseKelly [2014-03-14 01:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow this looks amazing.

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SoulofWoods In reply to BlueRoseKelly [2014-03-14 07:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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BlueRoseKelly In reply to SoulofWoods [2014-03-15 07:25:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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SewerBunny [2014-03-13 17:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Its really beautiful ^^ 

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SoulofWoods In reply to SewerBunny [2014-03-13 17:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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AprilONeil1984 [2014-03-13 15:25:04 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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SoulofWoods In reply to AprilONeil1984 [2014-03-13 15:35:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to read it

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sampsonknight [2014-03-12 19:05:09 +0000 UTC]

OH my gosh it sooo cute!! Love the way you did it and happy you like my story, yeah the ending is on the light side, originally it was going to dark but decided to give Donnie a good ending that shows his personality, then turning him into some puppet . You did a great job and I never said the forest they entered was still full of darkness , he did promise her days full of fun. The pack on her back looks awesome she did have a bean bag turtle, and never said it can't be a bag. Wow you made my day your are actually the first person that had done a pic on a fic I have wrote thank you, so love it!

 

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SoulofWoods In reply to sampsonknight [2014-03-12 21:20:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much I'm glad you changed your mind about the ending. This way is better And you're very welcome.

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uxv [2014-03-12 18:57:31 +0000 UTC]

I love the light in this one - overall I agree with your own assessment of the picture, I don't even have much to add, just that personally I'd welcome an even stronger contrast, with almost just their silhouettes remaining (not sure if they'd be recognizable though). The simpler images are often more effective than complicated and detailed ones.

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SoulofWoods In reply to uxv [2014-03-12 19:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... indeed, stronger contrast would be more effective, but I think it would be harder to see their expressions, and this is rather important for me in this scene. Besides, it was good training with Sai's options.

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