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Description "you've never heard the Winter Princess?" Ilana asked, unbeleiving.
"no" Brian said simply. Ilana stared at her friend. she knew by now that Brian was VERY different from her, but he had never heard one of the classic Galalunian stories...?


"Mommy!" Ilana called as she ran into the royal lounge, Brian hanging off one hand and sir Fluffington in the other "mommy, could you read me my story a little early today?"
Maria smiled down at her daughter as she ran up.
'Now, Ilana, we agreed that..." she began but ilana shook her head.
"no, no, not for me. for Brian!" she said as she tugged on the young worker's hand 'he's never heard it! ever!"
maria looked harder at the young boy whom Ilana had come to adore, and sighed.
"very well. I suppose we can read a story a little early today." she said as she turned and walked toward a large bookshelf. Ilana squeeled in delight, and dragged Brian over to the window before sitting down. Maria brought a well-worn book over to the two children, before sittign down on the floor, her skirts pooling around her. she opened the book, and began to read.
"long ago, in a distant land, there was a beautiful princess. She was kind and gentle, and beloved by her subjects, and she in turn brought joy to them..."
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a preview of Ch. 3. more to come, soon!

Really!

also, Ilana's mother. good design? yes? no?
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Comments: 12

Anastasia122 [2012-01-25 12:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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Soundwave3591 In reply to Anastasia122 [2012-01-25 17:19:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Janeya [2012-01-14 17:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Sir Fluffington? Lol.

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Soundwave3591 In reply to Janeya [2012-01-14 18:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Ilana strikes me as the kind of kid who, despite being able to have any toy she wants, would have a teddy bear that she just loves the stuffing out of. hence the one eye.

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Janeya In reply to Soundwave3591 [2012-01-14 20:09:16 +0000 UTC]

I noticed that about her too. Ilana is the type of girl who sees wonder in everything.
Now finish the damn chapter :U

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Soundwave3591 In reply to Janeya [2012-01-14 20:57:18 +0000 UTC]

well, if that's not incentive, i don't know what is!

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Janeya In reply to Soundwave3591 [2012-01-14 21:15:18 +0000 UTC]

I hear beatings are coming back in style >

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Soundwave3591 In reply to Janeya [2012-03-05 11:36:44 +0000 UTC]

there. it's done.

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Raygreens [2012-01-14 15:46:42 +0000 UTC]

it's crazy how much ILana looks like her mom.

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Soundwave3591 In reply to Raygreens [2012-01-14 18:26:57 +0000 UTC]

well, i figure she had to get that athletic grace from somewhere...

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Raygreens In reply to Soundwave3591 [2012-01-14 20:01:55 +0000 UTC]

I suppose.

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The-Port-of-Riches [2012-01-14 02:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Poor Brian. Just that expression on his face. It's just priceless..

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