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Published: 2015-05-16 18:50:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1500; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Ilana: "i'm home!"Casey: we're in the Kitchen, I!"
Ilana: "Hey Casey, i can't thank you enough for Picking Cosette up from-What the?!"
Cosette: "Hey mom! Look what Casey did, isn't it pretty?"
Ilana: "....."
Casey: "Angel here went all anime-eyes when she saw my Hair. i had some of my dye, so i thought...a few highlights....maybe...."
Ilana: "........" (mommascorn)
Casey: (sweatdrop) "It'll wash out!"
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a funny scene i thought up when latest upgrade to her SBT OC Casey. majesticreaper.deviantart.com/…
I hope you like it.
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Comments: 10
Haha, funny! I think we've all seen "mommascorn" at some point in our lives.
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omg this is so friggin cute-
I think I my only criticism would be where their eyes are pointing... Casey looks completely absent like a mannequin. Lil bit creepy- I,D And Illana doesnt look like she's looking at them at all either-
I think it would've been better if Casey and Cosette were both looking at Ilana and Ilana was looking down more towards them rather than looking slightly above me as I sit at the computer. It would have pulled the scene together better and would have made them all look a lot less vacant.
Just a small criticism- Hope thats ok. .//.
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Well...its not supposed to be flat....the panel with Casey and Cosette is supposed to be from Ilana's POV, so Casey's supposed to be looking at "you."
I guess I just suck at POV drawings.
The original sketch was supposed to have Ilanas shoulder to help convey that angle of POV, but it practically hid Cosette in final outcome, so I removed it.
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Ahh that makes more sense... for some reason my brain completely missed the fact that the giant red line was supposed to be a divider-
I'd suggest merely changing the divider next time then to make it stick out more??? Like maybe it would have been more effective if it was at a slight angle rather than just straight up and down? Or maybe change the color to just white space or something? Because it apparently doesnt stick out enough to be registered as a divider... I think its because that you use so many bright colors as it is in this picture that it just blends in. So the fact that it isnt at an angle or anything that makes it stick out as a divider makes it blend in with the rest of the image.
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Angling it would probably be easiest...I can fix that.
I also have a follow-up pic in the works.
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Okay cool.
Really? omg thats awesome!
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