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GourmetNinja [2018-01-31 02:23:47 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! This is for ProjectComment: projectcomment.deviantart.com

This is an interesting image. So, it's an A.I.? I say it because it's an automative machine. I wonder what else it has in store? It sort of reminds me of the mechanism in the music video to The World is Not Enough. If you could slap a human skin over the machine, it would look completely human. What's the engine its sitting on? Is it in some sort of factory or warehouse?

Here we go.

Vision: Everything is distinct in this. The angles, depth, and shading are perfect, looking like something out of DC and Marvel. This character could qualify for those worlds (or so I hope).

Originality: Overall I like it, but it has some flaws. The purple hues, the androgyny, and the oversized gun: It's reminding me of Frieza from DBZ, something which one should avoid. I see how it isn't. Also, these types of machines have been kind of done to death. It's not too bad.

Technique: My three requirements-Angles, Depth, and Shading-are skillful. Why does it need a purple hue? Again, it's making me think of Frieza. In fact, the figure very much resembles Frieza's final form.

Impact: It strikes me as a good drawing only in the artistic sense. If I just treat it as pure art for arts sake, then it would rank higher. Unfortunately, the things it reminds me of detract from it. Therefore, I rank this lower.

This drawing has some subtle flaws. I can't quite add it to my List, although you've given me something that is beautiful to look at from a distance. Good job. Keep it up!

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Rosebud1773 [2018-01-28 14:31:06 +0000 UTC]

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I like this and have added it to my favs list. That being said, this is a very well done piece. The humanoid proportions are right on the money. The background retains just enough of a brush stroke look to allow the focal point of the painting to stand out from the rest. The details of gun cartridges about her feet, along with the expression on her face imply that she means business and will do what she must to survive. The expression itself is nicely done and conveys a no nonsenses attitude that works for this particular character. Overall, this piece screams for some sort of fictional work, fanfic or otherwise to complement it. Love it, keep up the great work.

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ariya-sacca [2019-11-19 20:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Looks really cool!

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rainbowjoyner456 [2018-08-08 17:20:08 +0000 UTC]

hey everyone its just a robot's long lost girlfriend

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williamtoaoftrash [2018-01-30 16:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Cybernipples.

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Momo-The-Unknown [2018-01-29 03:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm from ProjectComment !
First off, let me say that this is absolutely beautiful! Almost everything in this picture is done right, from the breathtaking lighting to the immensely detailed background!
I can't see much flaw in the anatomy, except her upper body might need just a little more height to balance out the thickness? I can see a few flaws with the shading,
though. First, along her right leg that is bent over her knee, the straight line of shading there doesn't seem to suit the surroundings. It makes the leg seem 
one-dimensional and just "pasted on". A way to fix this, In my opinion, would be to break up the shading. first, some shading along the metal thing she's sitting on, then
a curved shade along her left knee. Other than that, the shading seems fine. It's just good to have consistency so that it doesn't throw off the image! The last thing that
bothers me is the flatness of her plates. The sections just look like lines drawn on her body, and lack the dimensionality you'd expect them to have. A way I'd fix this is
by maybe adding some bolder white highlights and some more sections that "stick out" on the edges of her outline. Some of the sections look fine though, like the ones
on her left thigh, calf, and shoulder. Other than that, I can't see any more problems. Most of these aren't noticeable on first glance, but it's a good thing to keep in mind 
for the future. I can't stop marveling at the super-detailed background, too!

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theJfluffy [2018-01-28 21:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Magnificent! 

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ProtoTEnterprise [2018-01-28 18:50:34 +0000 UTC]

I´m from

Undoubtedly, this idea is one of the retailers I've seen in my life.

Seriously: The amount of details impregnated in the drawing is so bestial, that even takes a few moments to contemplate them all. In addition to anatomically and visually, the girl is excellently accomplished. He even has a human expression that contrasts with his machine-warlike appearance.

It also feels like a futuristic drawing with touches Punk.and this very well defined

It's one of the most detailed drawings I've seen in my life ... For now, of course

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crystalmonsterBATIM [2018-01-28 14:37:55 +0000 UTC]

wow! awesome job!!

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Neferu [2018-01-20 16:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Hah, sowas ist cool. Ich hoffe, dass unsere Lieblings-Künstliche-Intelligenz bei SR auch irgendwann in so einen Körper umzieht.
Habt ihr sowas in der Richtung im Regelwerk gefunden? Wir waren nämlich mal am Suchen und waren dann recht enttäuscht, als wir Androiden und Vergleichbares nicht wirklich gefunden haben.

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Enoa79 [2018-01-20 13:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Very nice

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CanRay [2018-01-18 01:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully done!

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SATAMfanFF [2018-01-17 19:08:30 +0000 UTC]

It's actually quite breath taking very well done.

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TigrisAlbo [2018-01-17 18:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Is Fantastic!!

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PenciltipWorkshop [2018-01-17 05:32:06 +0000 UTC]

the background and the character look cool.

Nice bio-mechanical sleekness

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JericaWinters [2018-01-01 20:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Love the detail in this!

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robogirls [2017-12-31 19:59:00 +0000 UTC]

i like it

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