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Published: 2018-12-18 00:25:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 456; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description This was the last of all of my delayed requests that were completed just two years ago.  My sincere apologies for both and for such a long wait as so much stuff's been happening lately, including that of the weather, hot and cold.

Anyway, here it is at long last.  On to the upper right is 's FC Lady reading a book to a sleepy Rayman on one of the Snoring Tree's branches. 

The bottom left is 's FC Rayxim (if I got the character's name right as it's been very long) playing or greeting the Yellow Lums.  I did a couple of alterations on him based on the critiques by the debunked RaymanFCCritique group I could remember back then; such as Rayxim sporting Rayman's hairstyle (or at least too similar) and some of the color choices were a bit too saturated.  That's the closest of the critiques that I could recall.  I stylized his hair in the form of butterfly wings instead of the angel wings the character actually has, placed the wings on the shoes (a little tribute to the messenger of the Grecian gods, Hermes) and tone down the colors to make the character a little easy to the eye.

If the changes are either unsatisfying or done without your permission (even through request), then I sincerely apologize for these minor changes.

Anyways, after such a long wait, I hope the two of you enjoy this request.

Rayman (c) Michel Ancel/Ubisoft
Lady (c)
Rayxim (c)     
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Comments: 4

Rayxim [2018-12-18 17:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for finishing this old request. I almost forgot at this request that I asked you in the past. But thank you that you didn't forgot at it and finished it. 

Well about design, that butterfly hair design is for me a quite weird, it looks too crazy for Rayxim's personality.(Rayxim is mostly shy and quiet.)
But I understand that hair of original design is pretty same to Rayman (That hair is just longer ) and you wanted to make Rayxim to look more original.

The rest is good. And the wings on shoes are also good idea...well rayxim at the total beginning has also wings on shoes but it was changed.
But mostly I love how scarf looks. I really like it.

Picture of development of Rayxim design: Evolution of Rayxim

At least you showed how Rayxim should look like in your artstyle and design.

And about "RaymanFCCritique" group. Where I should read review?
In last half of the year I'm not much active here on DA and I don't know if it's some new group or that Tumbrl website that critised Rayman characters in the past. 
I just want to see just feedback at rayxim from other people. 

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AmytheRaytendoFan [2018-12-18 02:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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InvisibleCreatures [2018-12-18 01:06:25 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you drew this. The characters look great, and I love the dynamic going on here! I can totally see this scenario playing out at the Snoring Tree!

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Skull-gum [2018-12-18 00:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh it was wroth the wait. I do not mind the minor change of her collar and the add nose. Honestly it's quite cute, hehe.

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