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Blueghostflower016 [2008-05-08 20:57:30 +0000 UTC]

that's weird on my deviantions I could'nt see this until I went on someones favorites to see this but good job!
I like it

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kanna99 [2008-05-02 04:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Ah ha, That reminds me of Manon Rheume, the first ever and only woman goalie and player in the NHL. xD How wonderful. <3

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aFlawedDesign [2008-05-01 20:57:34 +0000 UTC]

I'd squeal, but my mom might guestion my sanity so I'll refrain. But really, it looks awesome! I personally like it the way it is. I'd be afraid that bulking them up would take away from the fact that they are girls and just because they're hockey players, it doesn't mean they have to be all tomboy-ish.

The gloves look good and so does Temari's C. It's okay for Hinata to go barehanded, they dump all their equipment during celebrations anyway.

And, I never actually gave the girl's team a name. I couldn't come up with a good one, so I gave up, heh. But the windbreaker described in chapter 4 was, I believe, a forest green. I think I picked green because I was thinking "leafy" at the time. So green would be my best bet. You can add whichever other colour(s) looks good, like stripes and such in the appropriate areas. For team name and emblem, you could always make it easy on yourself and have it just say 'Konoha' and have the swirly leaf symbol underneath or something.

I'm totally open to your interpretation. I actually hadn't spent much time describing or put much thought into what they look like, and it won't be like I'll be coming back and describing them later on. They're season's over wth their last win, so they won't be adorning team jerseys anymore.

Anyway, it looks wonderful and I can't wait to see the finished product!

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RaiderRix [2008-05-01 05:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see it finished, looks great.

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