Comments: 31
StatsMann [2014-01-08 02:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Totally worth the read, appart from some typos here and there, the story was epic.
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Spin-T In reply to StatsMann [2014-01-12 11:34:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much !
there are not many people who actually read the whole story^^
thanks for commenting !
for the typos, errr, I'm actually learning english in school, and I'm sorry if I still make mistakes
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bieber90pink [2013-09-17 19:36:16 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! Congrats on winning the Grand Prize!
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Charlene-Art [2013-09-08 13:06:13 +0000 UTC]
Whoa. Excellent concept man!
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Spin-T In reply to Charlene-Art [2013-09-08 14:04:09 +0000 UTC]
ghehe... thank you bro
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rydi1689 [2013-09-06 23:45:35 +0000 UTC]
Is your OC based or related to Slenderman?
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Spin-T In reply to rydi1689 [2013-09-07 09:09:58 +0000 UTC]
as you can see in this drawing's description spinoza1996.deviantart.com/art… , I firstly created Corpswar as a Slender related Oc, but on this one spinoza1996.deviantart.com/art… , he is a half-zombified alien who has taken some DNA to other species to become stronger.
I entirely created the universe he comes from before going to Earth. he has always been a scientist, but now we know How he becomes a monster. notice that this Oc has been created on april 4th ( as you can see here : spinoza1996.deviantart.com/art… ) only the planet he comes from has been created after ( mentioned on the "freaky corpswar" drawing ). basically, corpswar is an extra-terrestrial. but after he left his planet, we can make him interact with any species/other peoples Oc's/universes. As you saw, I'm a creepypasta fan, so I
He still has a face, but he hides it under this zombie-skin-made coat ( Yeh, I know, his coat has a very ugly color ).
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Spin-T In reply to rydi1689 [2013-09-07 17:08:19 +0000 UTC]
*see the comment*
*read that I actually won that contest *
*start dancing and singing "weee are the champions!!!!"*
*see that I may not win*
*trun to a livid color and faint
Ok. how can I prove that Corpswar is not a fan character?
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Spin-T In reply to rydi1689 [2013-09-07 17:36:19 +0000 UTC]
his design is quite similar to slenderman, for the face-covering coat and the two tendrils, but his design is more based on myself : I usually wear the same coat ( but not covering my face ), the same boots, and I'm not very tall, as him. I love everything related to blades, so I made blades spout out of his body ( here you can see three of them on his back ) he can make them spout out of any part of his body ( he doesn't mind of pain ).
I'll make my possible to prove that he's not a fan character cause he is NOT. I put him in a creepypasta Oc contest because they asked for an Oc in my entries, but as you know, creepypastas are more mysterious stories/characters that could exist in our world ( like Jeff the killer or BEN, a corrupted copy of the legend of Zelda game ) or could exist if you believe in paranormal, like pictures that can change peoples's fate, like Hasard.png, or the slenderman that is a tall faceless man that appears on children photos ==> before the game Slender was created, this was the concept of the slenderman.
Corpswar is a Zombie, and has a story. is absolutely not mysterious, and couldn't exist for real even for people who believe in paranormal. So He can't belong to creepypasta universe.
A last thing : now, if you decide to kick this work out of the contest, please, please just DON'T TELL IT TO ME. I don't want to know it, it is too much for me : to believe I won, and then I don't win.
however, I hope I convinced you
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missnene1 [2013-09-04 09:52:51 +0000 UTC]
Awesome pic, I like it!
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Spin-T In reply to missnene1 [2013-09-04 17:55:34 +0000 UTC]
oww, thank you ! I'm glad you like it !
as you can see, I did it for the turning tables contest. can't wait for the results !!
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missnene1 In reply to Spin-T [2013-09-04 21:05:51 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome my friend!
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rydi1689 [2013-09-03 14:24:35 +0000 UTC]
I got chills
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Spin-T In reply to rydi1689 [2013-09-06 16:21:00 +0000 UTC]
oww, I'm if glad you liked the story ( It is a bit weird if I say that I'm glad you cried, isn't it?
Maybe if corpswar and I met, he would be very very glad to kill me.
Spinoza :
Corpswar : LOOK WHAT YOU DID TO MY LIFE YOU BITCH !
Spinoza : Ok. I admit it. I deserved it. But I have cookies.
Corpswar : Cookies? Do you really think I'm gonna forgive you with your F∂®†≈◊ng cookies??!!
Spinoza : and the complete collection of Game of Thrones DvD's.
Corpswar : Wait... what?
Spinoza : The collector edition.
Corpswar : ... Ok, I let you go, but next time I'll KIll You I PROMISE !
Spinoza : I created him with a weakness. he's a huge game of thrones fan. I'll be back when a new collector Dvd will be published.
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rydi1689 In reply to Spin-T [2013-09-06 16:24:56 +0000 UTC]
xDDDDDDDD Now that's how you tame your wildest of creations!
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Spin-T In reply to rydi1689 [2013-09-06 17:57:05 +0000 UTC]
Spinoza : 'Caught you like a pokemon, Corpswar !!
Corpswar : *ignores spinoza and watches tv while eating pizza*
Spinoza : My. Pizza. Mine. my OWN meal. eaten by a half-zombie Setharian. LEAVE MY PIZZA ALONE SORT OF A BITCH !!
Corpswar : *still ignores spinoza and continue watching tv while eating pizza*
Spinoza : What..?
Corpswar : You made my life suck. I'll spam yours during FIVE MORE DECADES !
Spinoza : Get out of my house or I DELETE ALL YOUR DATA ! You'll never exist Again !!
corpswar : I know you can't.
spinoza : oh, and why?
corpswar : 'cuz you love me too much, and even a bitch like you has a soul.
spinoza : ...
corpswar : Did my scientific mind make a wrong analysis of your way of thinking?
Spinoza : *starts crying* Nooo ! please forgive meeeh !
corpswar "that's how you can get money to buy ALL game of thrones DvD's ! *I'm a genius*
spinoza : "that's how you keep an own character at home to finish outdated food and participate to contests *I'm a genius !*
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AlianaSugars [2013-09-01 20:14:44 +0000 UTC]
i dnt know where its from but i like it.
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Spin-T In reply to Djelectriczone [2013-08-31 18:09:46 +0000 UTC]
aww, thank you, dude, err, chick^^
I'm glad you keep commenting ( I really love when people comment on my work )
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Djelectriczone In reply to Spin-T [2013-08-31 18:17:02 +0000 UTC]
Shure who doesn't like
Ewwww want to ask you for something could you ask Evara my Enderman OC something.....
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Biku--Chan [2013-08-31 17:54:09 +0000 UTC]
O-O wow that's sad
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jjartstudio [2013-08-31 17:48:45 +0000 UTC]
wow
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