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spiritdaughter — Father and Son meet again
Published: 2012-08-08 19:43:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1051; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 9
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Shiro and Riki came as spirits to help Gin and Weed in a harsh battle..Its just another mangs try I hope you enjoy it!^^
Ups..forgot to say thats that my imagine how the final battle in Summer Fangs [link] could run out!
Ginga: Yoshihiro Takahashi
Art: (c) Me
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Aw man, that would be so coool! Maybe I can still write that in!
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REALLY? Fantastic! 8D
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Your canine anatomy overall is pretty good for a manga style, but I recommend practicing more with jaw anatomy. The errors are hard to miss, especially in the first panel (I'm reading left to right). But I do like how you have drawn the spirits, though I think maybe making them lighter/more faded like they are the manga would be a good touch.
Also, I don't know if this is just a spelling error or if English is not your first language, but in the last panel (one again left to right), it should be I'm proud 'of' you instead of 'at you'. Hope I helped, and didn't offend you.
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Its ok and thank you. English isnt my first language and I dont got the remendy to make the spirits lighter in the moment. I want to download soon a manga programm. And it would help me more if you would say what is wrong with the anatomy!^^
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Well, the jaws in profile are not so much a problem as the one panel I mentioned earlier. I feel it is too square, and the lower jaw is smaller than the upper jaw. The dental anatomy and the position of the muzzle is right, though. But you'll notice in Ginga style that the muzzle curves, Like in this image of Gin .
Also, looking at Weed's eye in that panel, I think it is positioned at the wrong angle.Notice Here and Here how Gin's eyes are positioned at a titled angle, and how the eye shape changes slightly at the bottom, curving to follow the line of his jaw.
Hope that helped, since it's hard to explain without using the pictures to compare.
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Yes, it did. You have to know that Weeds eye is made that way in the Manga "Summer Fangs". Thank you so much for ya help!^^
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Oh merci!!^^ Thats nice from you!
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my pleasure!! i love all your work!
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Thank you so much!
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you're very welcome!!
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Lol I just made a Valid point! >
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I wanna Cry now DX Idk why Riki could of stayed in the series as a character 
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You mean stay forever as ghost at gins and Weeds side?
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