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SpiritualNivana β€” Makoto Suiyamatsu-Naruto OC

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Description Wow its been awhile since I've put actual art on. Well it took awhile but here is my Naruto OC Makoto Suiyamatsu.
Height: 5' 10"
Wight: none of you business
Age: 23 (believe it)
Hair: Orange like a pumpkin
Eyes: (normal) Aqua green
(god) mixed
Best line: "You think holding a demon within is hard, try being one with a god!"
She is a complicated character belonging to no village, but a secret academy in the far off land of Time where all that’s is forgotten throughout the ages lie. A world full of demons and legends. It is a small floating continent in the north. Finding it is near impossible without a guide from the country itself. Born to a small farming village in the western part of the country, Makoto, (back then known as Megumi) was a simple little girl, but it would only last the first four years of her life. When she neared her fifth birthday, on a day of rain, Megumi had become lost in a forest searching for her ball. Out of the blue she came across a gruesome scene of a Kirin who had been attacked by a horde of demons. It lay dying on a river side. Megumi had been told by her parents the importance of the Kirin to the existence of the world, she quickly ran to try and help the god, (she was a strong believer in the Kirin). Demon returned to kill the Kirin and Megumi tried to defend it only to become severely injured herself. Her Kirin used the last of his strength to destroy the demons and execute one last request on which he made to Megumi. To bond with him and become the Kirin, for without the Kirin the world cannot exist. She accepted the god's offer and became infused with his, (technically speaking the god is neither girl or boy).
Now in her country, those who bond with demons, (rarely ever a god), are taken from their families forever and placed into an academy where they will strive to master their new powers and to become the best warriors; up holding the balance in their world where that of mortals and immortals collide. Megumi was the youngest ever to enter the academy at the age of five. Not only was she the youngest, but a rare bond; not only that but in entering the school walls her childhood ended. (Oh note those who didn't enter the academy were usually murdered by the villagers or parents. While its desired to bond with a immortal, it needs to be done within the academy walls. Because without the help of the elders at the academy the child usually goes insane and kills everything in sight.)
So she grew up, she became Makoto Suiyamatsu, part of the Suiyamatsu family/academy, one of six family branches. She is known as Oneesan by all within the academy. She is a master of time jutsus, being able to slip from the age of five to 80 years old. She rarely uses her persuasion jutsu as people don't trust her as much. She creates black holes with the help of three other members of the academy; in order to cast off enemies into darkness forever. But her best trick is her ability to steal other people's powers with a simple pressure touch. Exchanging useless energy for valuable jutsu, genjutsus, the works. The affects of her stealing and gaining of the barrowed powers last from 5 days to the rest of her life, depending on how long she stays connected to her source.
Well as time goes on shortly put, shit happens, and she is forced to flee her home land with all the other academy survivors. As protocol of the academy they spread to the winds and wait. Makoto makes her way alone to the main lands of mist, sand, traveling all over the lands till reaching that well known land of fire, home of a certain village, with a certain knuckleheaded ninja we all know, yep Naruto. For now I'll leave off the story/plot there and hopefully with the finishing of another pic of her I will continue where I left off. That’s if you want me to. Well I hope I didn't melt your brains too much, and enjoy Makoto Suiyamatsu of the land of Time.
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Comments: 111

Bman296 [2016-02-03 22:43:05 +0000 UTC]

damn thats a long story XD

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mysterious9girl9 [2014-06-19 12:32:05 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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ahmedalishawish [2013-11-19 00:13:57 +0000 UTC]

wow my oc holds a ancient spirit but a god thats just too much

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ahmedalishawish [2013-09-06 18:26:34 +0000 UTC]

my oc holdes god like wolf spirit within hem giving powerfull boosts from battle to battle even sometimes as powerfull as kyubi but a god arent we the overachiverse - astrid

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silver-bluewind [2013-04-26 16:55:00 +0000 UTC]

While the art is beautiful, dear, I have to say that your OC's background is so completely unrelated to Naruto that it might as well be its own story itself.

It's interesting, but perhaps you could just use her instead as a character for your own story...? Or maybe rework her background so that it's less improbable.

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Manga-Samurai [2013-03-10 17:06:31 +0000 UTC]

If thats a god then it shore is cute

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QKstealthmode [2012-07-10 19:16:59 +0000 UTC]

love the demon. Is that supposed to be a chinese unicorn (Qilin)? i love that legend ^_^
Sorry, i didn't have the time to read all the description

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falconess22 [2012-04-09 21:30:06 +0000 UTC]

It's a pretty picture, but your character is a wee bit of a mary sue xD

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Betneybob [2011-12-14 19:56:04 +0000 UTC]

I do agree with some of the others that have commented that she seems a bit mary suey with the infusion witht the god, but I think that if you make sure that lifve with the god isnt perfect and has some consequences and problems maybe disagreements with the god it may seem a lot less mary suey, it is a great idea and very original

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SpiritualNivana In reply to Betneybob [2011-12-24 00:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Actually she already has alot of issues going on as a character, that I haven't added, I just haven't updated her background for a long time. And quite frankly the marysue comments make me not want to. But thank you for not just commenting but actually giving ideas.

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Betneybob In reply to SpiritualNivana [2011-12-25 12:24:55 +0000 UTC]

oh right, sorry I didn't know
its good to know you've thought of issues for her.
I think it was more the God that made people think marysue,but the storyline is really original and a interesting story line
and I don't like just commenting, I prefere to try and give ideas, its a lot better for the artist

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SpiritualNivana In reply to Betneybob [2012-01-11 04:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Agreed!

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Betneybob In reply to SpiritualNivana [2012-01-11 16:12:21 +0000 UTC]

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cats-r-cool [2011-10-08 19:28:49 +0000 UTC]

is that a real or god you made up?just wondering,awsome shading and textures also luv the oc. :3

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SpiritualNivana In reply to cats-r-cool [2011-10-16 15:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Kirin is a real celestial God, it is otherwise known as a Chinese Unicorn. At times it will be portrayed more like a dragon with dear antlers than what I have done. The only way to tell the difference between a Kirin and a dragon is wether or not they have hooves. Thats how closely they look to a chinese dragon. They are the most gentle of creatures, not even stepping foot on ground for fear or hurting the earth. But cross them and their vengence is unchallenged. They are also known for granting wishes. Hope that answers your question.

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mewpawmika [2011-07-28 18:39:37 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous . I love her design and her backstory <3

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DeviantLilGirl [2011-06-27 19:48:28 +0000 UTC]

shes beautiful!! and i love your shading and lighting style!1

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NarutoOCwiki [2011-06-09 11:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Hey, why don't you check out Naruto OC Wiki? ^_^ We're an official Wikia developed for Naruto Originals. Free to join, you don't even have to register to contribute!

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Izzi1313 [2011-03-02 09:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Cool OC nice drawing!

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paiperaugen [2011-01-31 22:13:47 +0000 UTC]

it is an amazing original character i lover her looks, she is really nice!! i want to read more about her story

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Qeez [2011-01-18 00:47:11 +0000 UTC]

I Love it When people Go in To Detail With Their OCs

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Demonloverbaby [2010-12-10 13:15:20 +0000 UTC]

That is just amazing

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dayianimeaangel [2010-11-29 23:55:42 +0000 UTC]

awesome ^^

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KimaraMew [2010-11-15 18:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Love the beast/god, neat unique design.

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natsuki9surei [2010-07-29 03:14:45 +0000 UTC]

wow. sounded like she could have her own original story until you hit the flee to the mist thing. Eithr way it's amazing. and creative. I like the drawing and story both very much.

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lilyayora [2010-06-20 11:12:05 +0000 UTC]

is it made with copics? if it is, how did you get this wonderful gradient +_+
my coloring never comes out thi smooth, but it might be the paper XD

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SpiritualNivana In reply to lilyayora [2010-09-19 21:16:30 +0000 UTC]

Actually I use prisma colored pencils, I don't do so well with the pens...primsa has an oily texture thats easy to blend together, for me at least.

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NamiBot [2010-04-06 19:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Is it a fanfiction? And if so...where can I find it? ^^ Pretty by the way, I like the way the picture portrays her personality instead of just her figure.

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SpiritualNivana In reply to NamiBot [2010-04-14 00:11:45 +0000 UTC]

In my head yes...written down no...sorry I haven't had a real chance to hack my brain apart and get the story down and out...some day maybe...

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NamiBot In reply to SpiritualNivana [2010-04-14 10:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Okay

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herhinney [2010-02-11 08:34:13 +0000 UTC]

Cool I like the look of the dragon thingy, it's cute, and the hair is pretty. The whole look is pretty cool though I epically love that pose too XD

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hyperHENTAI [2010-01-11 22:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Lol, good!
Probably the best Naruto OC I've seen here (though I have not seen them all, but still a large number)

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DuskNinjaKenji [2010-01-03 11:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow this OC is cool! Say, would you mind looking at this link? I think you may find it interesting. ^_^ :[link]

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TheGoldenlock [2009-12-26 15:07:25 +0000 UTC]

she looks really cool! Likes the pose a lot too

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hyperdark06 [2009-11-07 01:08:15 +0000 UTC]

nice work

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MaruMariMaru09 [2009-09-09 15:07:55 +0000 UTC]

I can see why you didn't include the weight....she must weigh a ton anyway. Its surprising that she even fitted into those clothes.
Hey! Check out mi site at Shizuebluepower...it so totally rox than this shit and besides, I have more pageviews anyways!!*Kisses*

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xKONAHAxFIGHTERx In reply to MaruMariMaru09 [2010-07-16 13:48:15 +0000 UTC]

WAY better than you could ever do.
You're a giant douche. Just thought I'd throw that out there.

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XxxShadow-FoxxX In reply to MaruMariMaru09 [2010-05-25 02:55:44 +0000 UTC]

hey that was very un called for!!!! just because you character looks annorexic doesnt mean hers has to.

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herhinney In reply to MaruMariMaru09 [2010-02-11 08:32:48 +0000 UTC]

What the hell, that was really rude an un-called for. Her character looks cute and has an interesting background and of course she would weigh rather a lot. If she weighed anything under 170lbs. she would be considered annorexic if she was that tall and that muscular. Duh. Don't be such a bitch.

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NobleChinchi [2009-08-23 04:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh Snap Awesome Character!!!O-o I wouldn't mind to meet her in real life. XD Do you rp? if so you should Join ([link] ) Naruto Generation RPG Forum. Rp with your character and friends.:3 Invite them as well and have more fun. Note: The Cannon characters are dead so this is way past their time.

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Zazi-chan [2009-08-17 05:03:31 +0000 UTC]

love your OC , enjoyed reading all about her

way too go

made me wanna redraw my Naruto OC... haven't drawn her for ages - here she is [link]

though I draw my OC a lot, :gigggle:, but not as the nin from Konoha ... your oc made me wanna redraw her again... and add a few years to her age - yup bein g in 20s is coller than beeing a teen -

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SpiritualNivana In reply to Zazi-chan [2009-08-20 04:50:25 +0000 UTC]

cool can't wait to see it...

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Zazi-chan In reply to SpiritualNivana [2009-08-21 14:49:00 +0000 UTC]

I drew just a sketch of it for now
wanna C? [link]

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crescentwolf01 [2009-08-05 21:08:04 +0000 UTC]

awesome OC ^^ I like her mabye she can be a freind of my char 'Crescent Kelsaru' ^^

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mimicetara [2009-08-01 17:24:08 +0000 UTC]

i really like the way you drew her
would you like to join my RPG?

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Onikage01 [2009-06-09 18:10:31 +0000 UTC]

great OC she looks amazing great job

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ita-chan01 [2009-06-03 19:17:23 +0000 UTC]

it like it so kindof makes me think of pirates though but who cares

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uchihaguy [2009-04-20 03:52:10 +0000 UTC]

I swear I've asked you this before: What do you color with?
I think the answer was "prisma color pencils", but I'm just double checking

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MasterBurner [2009-03-15 01:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Woah! NICE! But...
Why does the place she grew up in sound like Gensokyo...?

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SpiritualNivana In reply to MasterBurner [2009-06-22 05:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Really...hm let me get back to you on that, I have to check now...didn't mean to if it sounds like it.

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