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SpokenMind93 — Past Sins: Revealing Truths P10
Published: 2015-10-09 06:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 18703; Favourites: 218; Downloads: 0
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Past Sins and Nyx (c)
MLPFIM (c) Hasbro,
In honor of because he made a very awesome fancomic after the facts of this story
but he sadly left DA or changed his account
Fill in the story of Rarity yourself... >w<
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SWEETIE BELLE! DON'T EMBARASS ME! NYX! WHY IS YOUR BEAUTIFUL VEST NOT ON!?
Hee hee...
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*scared*
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Nyx comes out of the closet.
CMC: "Oh no, you have been Lawrsoned"
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OH!!! I thought she was gonna show her eyes! not wings, but eyes!
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It's times like this that shows sometimes adults could stand to learn from kids
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Don't be silly, girls. When a unicorn and a pegasus have a foal, the child is born with a wing in place of a horn, not wings and and horn.
(You don't normally see it because it's almost always amputated soon after birth. A head-wing is just as useless as it sounds, the weight can cause neck problems later in life, and they usually have poor circulation which can lead to dangerous blood clots. In rare cases the wing may be so poorly oxygenated that it starts dying, leading to abscesses that invariably become infected and sometimes result in sepsis.)
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What is disturbing is that it is very believable. This is disturbingly disturbing.
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I know, right? I keep accidentally making sense. It's a bad habit.
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This is distrubingly very beliveable
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This does indeed disturb me. I am disturbed that I am regularly at my most convincing when I'm making everything up on the spot.
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Why this is so disturbing and beleiveable
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That was really sweet. Funny...In the episode where the crusaders get their marks, they're shields. Hmm....
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Glad to see they didn't freak out TOO badly upon seeing that she was an alicorn.
I'm anxious to hear Sweetie Belle's story.
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Your use of word bubbles has come a long way! I makes thing's so much easier to read! They could still be a touch smaller but the flow is fine! Good job. ;3
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I'm already trying to make them as small as I can xD
If I make them even smaller then I can't even read it xD
Thanks for the critique ^^
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Really? Cause at normal view they are like three times bigger than most web comics I read.
www.suihira.com/
is readable and is about 60% smaller than what you're showing.
www.skindeepcomic.com/
That there is also the same size, it's kinda standard.
I half wonder if you even notice how HUGE your pages in general are. One row of your panels is half if more than half the size of a normal comic page.
To put it into perspective if you don't mind just to show
i.imgur.com/04sUMzQ.png
If you're finding that size too small, maybe you're not viewing the page full size? Or have whatever you're drawing in and/or monitor set up to show thing's smaller than they really are? Cause that right there is full size and your pages are huge. One line of words is the size of three lines of text in normal comics. Plus even at this huge size, they are still a bit bog for the panel size's even with them being very big as well.
If I shrunk your comic down, we get this
i.imgur.com/uKTz9IJ.png
and the text is still bigger than the standard in most comics.
This is all again aimed to help, as some times it's better to see what's going on, and the fact you say if the text was made smaller than you'd not be able to read it makes me wonder if maybe the view level on your screen is set to show stuff much smaller than it really is, as your text size is over half the width of my index finger. The text in this post is under half the text size.
Something just seems off.
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Yeah but I'm not talking about those small balloons with just one line of text in them -.-
I'm talking about the big balloons...
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But even with the big balloons the text is all the same size? Even smaller I can read it fine. Only issue I'd see is if you're also not sizing down the stroke thickness around the text.
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In the big balloons I already shrunk it down to 4 in some cases.
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I'm glad Nyx only took her vest off at this point, but I'm also Kind of sad. She showed them the truth, but not quite all of it, which led to a misdirected conclusion by her friends. I'm curious as to how they'll react when the rest of Nyx's identity is revealed to them...
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Phew....... Those three really are special......
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Nyx's glasses aren't connected in panel 3.
Anyway, you've done a really great job so far! ^..^
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Finally someone who's looking at the art instead of just reading it and clicking away.
Thank you ^^ I corrected it.
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Wonder if they'd be so sanguine if/when her glasses fall off, revealing her NMM eyes?
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"I sense a disturbance.........
OH NO!!!!!
Sweetie Belle is telling embarrassing stories about me.........AGAIN.
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And Sweetie Belle now shares her sisters secrets...
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...Well they took it well, now back to the story.
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One thing I really like about this comic series is how well the expressions are done.
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Really? If I know someone who's great at expressions it's JaDeDJynX
She's awesome at it, I wouldn't even come close to them ^^"
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While her expressions are indeed great, yours are too.
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Things are going to hit the fan soon.
Something to pick your brain: Why were they never taught only princesses how both wings and horns (according to the story at least.)?
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This Deviation was featured in the following Equestria Daily Post www.equestriadaily.com/2015/10… Thank you for providing pony material for all of us to enjoy 
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one of my favorite parts of the story. Oh man things about to go through a tornado soon.
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It's tough to reveal it, but after all, you can't judge a book by its cover.
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I'm so glad the girls are so understanding.
Oh, I'm gonna love this story! Go on, Sweetie Belle!
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Panel 3 they all react: SHE'S NAKED! Almost as much as we are. Am I supposed to count Applebloom's bow as clothing?
If I was a woman I would be jealous of Nyx. I could never be that cute.
I'm a little disppointed she never mentioned how her wings are uncomfortable under her vest, that struck me as a sign she's going to remove it more often. Oh well.
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Awesome page! One of my favourite parts of 'Past Sins'
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"Oh, you're going to like this..."
So will I... lol
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I wonder what would happen if Applejack would see Nyx' wings. She can't keep a secret after all.
Also Nyx is lucky they didn't ask her who her parents were. I think that would be quite painful.
I think SB is going to tell about a time Rarity really freaked out. Maybe she ate ice for several days and then was hysterical about the 10 pounds she gained when she had calmed down from the problem.
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