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Description I decided to make a female mascot for myself, her name is Shyrei!

Edit: I'm sorry , people are saying my pictures are not showing up at the deviatations?

Nothing explains her character more than the nonsense background! Right? I mean...a big shiny watch in spice surrounded with bubbles? Sure (sorry)
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juanviera22 [2014-08-16 00:59:37 +0000 UTC]

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I don't know how helpfull can i be with mi critique but i guess you ask critique on this work for some reason, so, here i go.

first, the "Bad" things, and for "bad", i mean the things i think should get an eye on:

1) Shadows: the shadows on the shirt, on the arm sides seems to be equal, don't know if the exposure of both sides are the same, but it doesn't fit with the direction of the shadow overall.

2) Shadows: (Yes, again xD) on the surface of the clock, it seems to be a reflection, but the shadows does not seems to affect this, in fact, i think i can see the legs's shadows, but not the left arm's one, if the left arm shadows is the one just behind from the girl, then there is a discrepancy again with the direction of Light/shadow

3) no no, there is no number 3, everything else seems perfect to me, colors have perfect match, the surrealism is great, the expression, the pose, the background, nothing else to care about, just perfect e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

BTW: the two rates without 5 stars corresponds with the "Bad" things XD
sorry if i made some mistakes, english is not my language.

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Ren-chii [2014-08-14 22:56:46 +0000 UTC]

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amazing! you did a really good job. the coloring and whole drawing itself looks great!^^ but there is something about the hand closer to face that's looks a little off, though its only a minor detail. other than that it looks fantastic, I especially like the coloring, its probably my favorite part about the whole thing. the colors you used in the drawing match well together. the bubbles look so pretty as well as the clock. I also like the pose/ position you drew the girl in. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> her facial expression is also nice. anyway, nice job! I cant wait to see your next drawing!

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Mai-Meo [2014-11-10 01:10:33 +0000 UTC]

those bubblesΒ  Β 

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Fragmented-Starr [2014-09-10 23:47:06 +0000 UTC]

The bubbles are really pretty.

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Ruellea [2014-08-15 23:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Cute ~

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BloodyPink-M [2014-08-15 20:17:06 +0000 UTC]

wow you are fast

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GraphiteHeart [2014-08-15 19:01:51 +0000 UTC]

bubbles!

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XandImus [2014-08-15 18:28:05 +0000 UTC]

great look'n ;D!

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marikadaa [2014-08-15 17:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Pretty!

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HUANGXUELI [2014-08-15 15:35:16 +0000 UTC]

It's cute!

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Kamikatamari [2014-08-15 12:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Amazing artwork, love it! <3Β 

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kowai-usagi [2014-08-15 06:06:19 +0000 UTC]

That's a pretty drawing as usual! *w*
I like how contrasted the colors are and how her hair ribbon has the same designs as the rest of the clothes.

Don't worry, pictures will show in the inboxes sooner or later; it's a known delay bug by DA's staff...
support.deviantart.com/entries…

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Miha-Chi [2014-08-15 03:23:54 +0000 UTC]

This looks wonderful!

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Thisnameowns [2014-08-15 03:19:45 +0000 UTC]

I see both deviations. @_@

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Kyoshyu [2014-08-15 03:06:22 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful... but the bubbles have really caught my eyes. Damn they are so perfect.

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Yenni-Vu [2014-08-15 00:08:47 +0000 UTC]

this is cute!^^
awww, i experienced the broken deviations too! >__<
i hope dA will fix it soon.
i found your drawing while browsing through the frontpage.

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RainbowFay [2014-08-14 22:55:46 +0000 UTC]

That's cute. I like that her hair band looks like bunny ears.^^

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aloneordead [2014-08-14 21:15:30 +0000 UTC]

this is realy good art work hereΒ 

you looking for mascot hey what is better then megane school girl for mascot Β 

also good background awesome colour selection and her face i dont understand is she winking at me or look suprised

good name for character as a writer i am realy strugle finding name for characters Β 

shortly i love the character i love the art i love the name and i love the background (sory for bad english )

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apninja2 [2014-08-14 20:55:23 +0000 UTC]

This looks really nice.Β  Β 

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TanoshiiGirl [2014-08-14 20:44:33 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully done!! The bubbles look real.... Β 

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DeadCobra [2014-08-14 19:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty Β 

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PastelFrightmare [2014-08-14 19:18:44 +0000 UTC]

[Also, you're still really awesome and amazing and I really enjoyed our last chat xD]
The drawing is amazing - just like anything else you do!
You have a LOVELY way of coloring things, I can't put my fingers on what exactly, but it's so easy to recognise!
I'd love to give a critique, but I'm afraid of getting my english judged TwT"

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PastelFrightmare [2014-08-14 19:17:05 +0000 UTC]

OMG, I found this on the FRONTPAGE and I thought to myself "This seriously looks like something Squ-chan could've made!", checked it out - turned out it WAS from you!
But it's not shown in my deviations, even thought I'm watching you - how can that be?
It's just luck, that I just found it!

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SquChan In reply to PastelFrightmare [2014-08-14 19:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Ehh I dont know sobb maybe its a bugg

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PastelFrightmare In reply to SquChan [2014-08-14 19:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Huh, I think you might actually be right about that... It seems to be happening quite a lot lately - Sakimichan also uploaded a journal, where she said she encountered the same problem :/
What I SHAME, I usually really look forward to see your new art sooooo much!! :/
Guess I just have to check your gallery for myself every now and then, to see if I've missed something xD

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