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Published: 2013-02-23 02:54:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 981; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 4
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    Happy 8-Day-Late Valentines Day!

    And to all of those who are like me, Happy 8-Day-Late Single Awareness Day!!!

    ANYWAY! I know the pose is really simple, but I was trying out a new style of soft-ish coloring and I really like it! I wish I could cell shade properly though.

    Critique is much appreciated!
    (I understand that I have lots I need to improve on, but I would like to know WHAT I should look at/do to improve)
    If you could link me to some good cell shading tutorials (or tutorials in general on what I should improve on), I'll send you buckets of love~!

    Arlaena @ *DarthRose
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Comments: 43

Zenoxen [2013-11-07 10:44:51 +0000 UTC]

She looks really pretty. I love the simplicity, yet the complication of her hair ^^

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Stabrina In reply to Zenoxen [2013-11-07 22:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TheJabberCat [2013-02-27 11:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow you've gotten way better! I mean wow this is simply stunning!

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Stabrina In reply to TheJabberCat [2013-03-03 02:14:43 +0000 UTC]

QAQ Thank you so much for that!!! Hopefully this wasn't a lucky try. OTL

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Acerzinha [2013-02-25 04:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Single Awareness Day isn't for a while anyway, no worries: [link]

Anyway, I like how you incorporated the thread, and I think the shading turned out well, especially on the skin.
As for critiques, I'm generally really bad at giving them-- but I can say in the very least looking at some of your older pieces you've definitely been improving a lot, so you're going in the right direction at least so just berieve in yourself...?! /useless sobs

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Stabrina In reply to Acerzinha [2013-02-26 05:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ No one needs to know that.

Pf- I'm so glad you like the skin part~ And, thank you for trying! OTL
I will keep on improving! I swear! QAQ I SHALL BERIEVE!!!!!!

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DarkSagaGemini [2013-02-24 19:19:51 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful!

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Stabrina In reply to DarkSagaGemini [2013-02-25 00:21:08 +0000 UTC]

QAQ thank you so much~! <3

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DarkSagaGemini In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-28 22:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Continue your v good work! d(^3^)b

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xRAMENformee [2013-02-24 06:04:35 +0000 UTC]

...like, seriously, i can't stop staring at it. i look at it for a while, go to another tab and do something for a bit, then come back and bask in the gloriousness of the colors and lines. XD

haha as a critique, the only thing i could really say is maybe the highlights on the hair? it looks like you used the dodge tool (idk if you actually did or not) but maybe just try to work on it so it doesn't get so desaturated? i really love the background though, i think the yellow goes great with it, and the little hearts look like cutouts which is adorable, and the red threads really bring the whole thing together. gahh >.<

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Stabrina In reply to xRAMENformee [2013-02-25 00:23:13 +0000 UTC]

O///A///O Thanks again- but I don't think this is that good to be worthy of such praise!

The highlights? OAO I actually made a different layer and chose the 'luminosity' option because SAI doesn't have a dodge tool. XD But I'll definitely keep that in mind next time!!!!

Thanks again~! QvQ <3

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xRAMENformee In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-25 05:32:40 +0000 UTC]

XD well it is very very pretty, nonetheless.
oh, the luminosity option actually makes a lot more sense now that i look at it, and it really does have a nice glowing look to it, it just looks a bit more grey and desaturated compared to the purplish black of the hair

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Stabrina In reply to xRAMENformee [2013-02-26 15:04:41 +0000 UTC]

QAQ thanks again Lya!!! And thanks for the input!! QvQ <3

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xRAMENformee [2013-02-24 05:56:32 +0000 UTC]

it is gorgeous!!!! i love your coloring, it looks amazinggg!!!! *0* haha great job!

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Stabrina In reply to xRAMENformee [2013-02-25 00:21:18 +0000 UTC]

QAQ!!! Thank you so much!!! <3

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Kihtorii [2013-02-23 17:42:13 +0000 UTC]

*SCREECHES AND SETS MY TABET ALIGHT, FRISBEE-ING IT OUT THE WINDOW INTO OBLIVION* I QUIT WHAAAT

Look at this amazing piece loOK AT THAT GOREGOUS GAL URGGHHH

This looks so beautiful, oh man, the shading is wonderful! I really love how you've done her skin with both softer and harder brushes, you've pulled it off really well. Her eyes look great too and the orange hue highlight makes them stand out *u*
BUT HER HAIR AHHH /lovesforever it looks fantastic TEACH ME
The few lighter strands enhance the whole lot of it really well. I love how you've done her fringe and the darkly shaded part for her parting(?). The little roses break it up nicely too ;v;

I can't think of any crits for this one, but I do see improvement!

Arlaena is such a stunner omg drop-dead gorgeous. I love her features and in general she is such a pretty character QuQ no wonder why the WT has so many men THEY FLOCK TO HER AAHHHH

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Stabrina In reply to Kihtorii [2013-02-24 03:19:32 +0000 UTC]

*THROWS SELF OUT THE WINDOW TO GRAB THE TABLET, TOSSING IT BACK AND THEN FALLING TO OBLIVION* MUST. SAVE. TABLET.

But- thank you so much for that. QAQ!!!! I've been staring at different artists styles that I liked to find similarities!

And aaaaaaaaaah, I'm not really one to teach, BUT I have the tutorial that I used when coloring the hair!!! [link] (I actually didn't do one of the steps in this because I fail so hard. )

Ahahahahahhahaha I think those men are flocking to the sexy beast, Hera! Arla, not so much? XDDD


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Kihtorii In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-24 20:40:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for sharing, I'll give that technique a shot sometime!

fffff flaunt both of them and all the guys will come running =w=

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Stabrina In reply to Kihtorii [2013-02-25 00:25:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem~!

All them boys be coming to the yard---//SHOT

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Mafurako [2013-02-23 09:46:57 +0000 UTC]

And so she bloodbended, and all the men in WT had boners for the rest of the week. (ITS NOT POSSIBLE BUT I DON'T CARE)

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Stabrina In reply to Mafurako [2013-02-24 03:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Mufasa- Pls woman- Week? It's boners for the rest of the month.

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Mafurako In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-25 11:37:57 +0000 UTC]

...Jesus christ n o

nO

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Stabrina In reply to Mafurako [2013-02-26 05:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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iusCogens [2013-02-23 04:19:44 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. /adores the soft colors

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Stabrina In reply to iusCogens [2013-02-24 03:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much- I was trying a new coloring style.

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ScruffyPalmTrees [2013-02-23 04:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Harper: *Keeping composure was something that came second nature to Harper, however Arlaena's attire choice and lovely face was something he couldn't really stay calm about. He hid underneath his collar and blushed a cherry hue, turning his head in order to hide his embarrassment. It didn't work.* You look really pretty girl-I-I mean you're girl pretty- I-I MEAN YOU'RE REALLY PRETTY AT THE MOMENT.

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Stabrina In reply to ScruffyPalmTrees [2013-02-24 03:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Arlaena: *After losing to a bet with Stela, Arlaena soon found herself dressing in rather... fitting, clothing as she greeted her traingoers. One of them ended up being the ever present, Harper Law. Watching his face redden in tone and hearing his naturally quick tongue stumble over itself, she let out a light laugh wondering what on earth could have caused that. In a teasing tone, she spoke as she cocked her hips to the side.* At the moment? Aren't I always pretty? *She grinned cheekily at the cyborg, tossing him a quick wink to boot.*

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Phishythoughts [2013-02-23 04:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Like Rach says.. We all die!

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Stabrina In reply to Phishythoughts [2013-02-24 03:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Phis. Phis. Pls. It's 'Paralyzed for all eternity'.

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Phishythoughts In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-24 03:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh and that's better. stone people: so we are stuck look at her forever

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Stabrina In reply to Phishythoughts [2013-02-24 03:21:40 +0000 UTC]

But- that isn't too bad of a deal now, is it? I mean, she's got two pretty good reasons why it's not too bad~//SHOT

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Phishythoughts In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-24 03:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Unless it's a strip show, watching her do paper work is not fun to watch.

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Stabrina In reply to Phishythoughts [2013-02-24 14:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Phis!

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Phishythoughts In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-24 21:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Someone had to say it

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Rachiedian [2013-02-23 03:13:48 +0000 UTC]

AND THEN EVERYONE JUST DIES BECAUSE THEY CAN SEE HER EYES.

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Stabrina In reply to Rachiedian [2013-02-24 02:59:39 +0000 UTC]

RACH. RACH. PLEASE.

IT'S PARALYZED FOR ALL ETERNITY GIT YO FACTS STRAIGHT WOMAN.

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NemesisJubilee [2013-02-23 03:10:32 +0000 UTC]

WHEN DID YOU GET SO GOOD JESUS GIRL

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Stabrina In reply to NemesisJubilee [2013-02-24 03:00:29 +0000 UTC]

WHO IS THIS GOOD JESUS GIRL YOU SPEAK OF?///SHOT5EVER

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Lunamageice [2013-02-23 03:07:33 +0000 UTC]

pffffft 8 days late?

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Stabrina In reply to Lunamageice [2013-02-24 03:01:13 +0000 UTC]

I would have finished this sooner if I didn't have to keep it hidden from my mom. For two obvious reasons. //SLAPPED

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Lunamageice In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-25 02:49:18 +0000 UTC]

its only a headshot what's to hide? |D the cleavage?

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Stabrina In reply to Lunamageice [2013-02-25 06:51:10 +0000 UTC]

yup.

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Lunamageice In reply to Stabrina [2013-02-26 00:04:45 +0000 UTC]

pffffFFFt

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