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StalkingP — Prize: Vicky-nyan
Published: 2012-03-03 19:48:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1624; Favourites: 79; Downloads: 87
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EDIT: Fixed her leg a bit, will fix definitely when I get my old computer back UvU
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FINALLY!! I finished this about 6 hours ago and didn't have internet to upload it T_T
I had to wait for *maffeloscher to come back from her classes and lend me her phone with internet for a while UvU
Next week I'll get my own internet, I hope!!
Anyway, this is 's prize for winning my contest in second place
It's her OC Fuyuko. I'm pretty pleased with the result, so I hope you like her as well
!There are a couple of things that bug me and I'd like to correct, but I spent about 2 hours touching it up in photoshop BECAUSE IT KEPT LAGGING SO MUCH. UGHHH I got so used to SAI, Photoshop is TOO SLOW!! asldfkjslhk
Anyway, let me know what you think!
Artwork © =Stalking-Pantsu
Fuyuko © =Vicky-Nyan
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Really cute and pretty, I LOVE the overall coloring and background alone with her hair, eyes, expression and pose
My only problems are 1) The shape of her face is weird, 2) Her feet seem a little weird (too small, possibly oddly positioned/placed) and 3) WHY THE FUCK IS SHE WEARING SHORT SHORTS IN THE MIDDLE OF WINTER?!
what, does she think shes too cute to get hypothermia or something?
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Thanks a lot! For the fave as well
And yesssss, I was trying to practice more face angles and it didn't come out quite as expected xD. Her feet are terrible, specially her left foot. It's dislocated (?)
And I was laughing along as I colored it, since no one would dress like that in winter UvU
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you're welcome x2 XDD
It's okay, I know what you mean, I'm not very good with anatomy either XDD
Except an anime girl, maybe XDD (I see that a lot, actually >.>)
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Haha, that was pretty much my excuse xD I actually wanted to practice leg skin a bit; This may not have been the best of chances but oh well!
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Oh yeah, I need to practice that, too. And hey, if you're given an opportunity, why not use it? XDD
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I think this piece is very well done. You're shading is wonderful and creates lots of color, depth, and interest. Snow is usually very difficult to color and create, but you've done a wonderful job. There are a few things that I've noticed though. Her leg (the one that's raised) looks a bit strange. It looks dislocated from the hip, and the foot should be bent downwards a little bit (it just looks a bit unnatural). Apart from that, the only other thing I think should be adjusted is the trees. I live around tons of pines (no seriously). I see this a lot when artists draw pine trees (and I admit, I'm guilty of it too sometimes when I get lazy), they draw them like hair. Pines, evergreens anyways, have forked branches, like an antler with tiny spikes on it. I think that if you shaped the branches a bit, it would look very realistic. Upon second glace, I just realized that only one tree has snow on it! I understand about the whole lagging thing (my computer is a piece of poop so mine does that too) so I'm not picking on you. I'm just telling you what I see. Keep up the good work! This is really cute!
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You're completely right xD
I worked hard on the shading, but I still can do better!
I think I might fix the leg later this week, everyone keeps reminding me how off it is! I could tell in the sketch but I admit I just didn't want to change it ;_;
I regret it now though ;v;
About the pine trees... You got me there xD It's my first time with them and I didn't even look for a proper reference, which was a really bad mistake on my part;
And about the snow, I was planning on making it and I forgot halfway; I should have though, it looks so weird;
Thanks a lot for the critique! I really appreciate it ;v;
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You are very welcome. I hope you keep up the good work! I also hope that your editing program is nice to you!
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Está hermosa! te quedó genial sin línea de contorno. Tiene mucho volúmen y los colores están geniales
Lo único un poquito extraño es la piernita de la chica, la que tiene flexionada. Parece que las medias esas le aprietan un poquito ^^, pero en realidad lo que hace que se vea raro, es que al cortar la línea del muslo tan arriba , la flexión de la pierna parece rara. Si eliminás los pliegues y prolongás la línea hasta casi tocar el extremo de la sombra de la rodilla va a quedar mejor. La parte superior de la pierna por delante de la parte inferior. Y habría que girarle un poquitín el pié, que la punta apunte más hacia el piso.
Ambos detalles myu muy chiquititos ( y solo lo menciono porque pediste crítica del trabajo 
Pero repito, está hermosa!
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Sí, la pierna me re molesta a mí también xD
La hice treinta veces y no quedé satisfecha UvU Muchas gracias
Ah, y sobre la línea de contorno, sí tiene
Muchas gracias profe
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Nueva técnica : Línea oculta! buenisimo. Quedó genial el efecto ^^
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I think it will be nice if you add some atmospheric gradients (just roll a gradient or some soft white tones) so the foreground will be consistent with the back.
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I wanted to give depth to the trees in the back and I think I overdid it a bit xD Thanks a lot for the suggestion! I'll try that next time I work on snow
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Gracias!
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Awww thanks is really cute! thanks!
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