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standard-misfit — Come, Take It..
Published: 2006-06-13 10:23:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I'm offering
Take it, oh wont you please
Give me the feeling of life
Run it through my veins
A reason to live
A reason to love

Come tear my heart out..

I want you to.
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Comments: 10

beautifultruth [2007-04-02 18:25:11 +0000 UTC]

I like the honesty of this.
I'm liking your writing. I want to add you now!

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standard-misfit In reply to beautifultruth [2007-04-02 23:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah haha. Thanks very muchly.
I love your Astrid story. I can't wait to read more!

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beautifultruth In reply to standard-misfit [2007-04-03 19:28:50 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.
and thank you, I will write more soon.

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a-james-t [2006-06-16 08:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Wicked sensationalism - this would be awesome as part of a photographic piece or sketch

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standard-misfit In reply to a-james-t [2006-06-16 09:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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fuchsia-ocelot [2006-06-15 07:23:20 +0000 UTC]

It has definite potential...perhaps as a song...

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salemsgirl [2006-06-13 11:28:43 +0000 UTC]

a good start, seems like you could create a few more verses in the same vain... maybe a bridge and a musical interlude...maybe a drum solo...

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standard-misfit In reply to salemsgirl [2006-06-14 07:23:36 +0000 UTC]

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salemsgirl In reply to standard-misfit [2006-06-16 05:01:43 +0000 UTC]

what?

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Torchling [2006-06-13 11:24:59 +0000 UTC]

its a good start, work on it more, and it will be pretty cool

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