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Published: 2006-04-19 18:46:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description Through the watery glass
I see what I desire
But yours is a world
Into which I can never pass

It would turn me upside down
Destroy what I thought was real
If I was to take your hand
And pass into oblivion

Some see a reflection
Other see their conscience
I see nothing
Other than the blackness of my soul

Sharpened pane I see what I desire
But as I reach it fades into shadow
And the broken shards of my
Heart appear to me in my reflection

I try to grasp at the last remanents
Of sanity, but the shards of glass
Rip open my chest
And reveal the thing I feared all along

In the mirror there is nothing
Just shaddow and blood stained
Memories of those who I have
Destroyed in my path
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Comments: 11

tcisf2f [2006-04-22 11:43:19 +0000 UTC]

awww wicked this is an awesome poem, very strong and lots of images in here thankies for postin this! instant fav!

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StarofEternity In reply to tcisf2f [2006-04-22 17:17:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun..really tried to capture raw emotion in this one

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tcisf2f In reply to StarofEternity [2006-04-22 17:37:26 +0000 UTC]

well it worked! x x

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StarofEternity In reply to tcisf2f [2006-04-22 18:27:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks...working on a collab with chicken at the mo...which hopefully should be finished 2morra

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tcisf2f In reply to StarofEternity [2006-04-22 20:05:08 +0000 UTC]

nice one!

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IcyBlade [2006-04-20 03:22:40 +0000 UTC]

i like the last stanza! You always have good endings!

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StarofEternity In reply to IcyBlade [2006-04-20 08:22:51 +0000 UTC]

why thank you

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rachelcomotto [2006-04-19 19:32:49 +0000 UTC]

I like it... it's heavy and detail goes a long way Nice one!

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StarofEternity In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-04-20 08:24:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks...lol..

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Leliz [2006-04-19 19:11:35 +0000 UTC]

wow, beautiful imagery here

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StarofEternity In reply to Leliz [2006-04-20 08:25:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you..and thanks for the fav!

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