CharPonyVA [2016-01-30 15:19:51 +0000 UTC]
Just a suggestion, but you might want to separate the story into different paragraphs. It's kind of hard on my eyes to follow ^^'''' But I love his design ^w^
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SwordSparks [2016-01-04 06:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Man, that's terrible.
Coming from a different town to your home, only to find that your parent is dead.
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AmrasFelagund [2016-01-04 03:34:32 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's easy to see where Big Mac got his bulk from, and his reticence. Passed on his coat colour to one daughter, and practically passed his mane colour down to the other. Those freckles, though~...!
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