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Welcome to the Miracleverse! AKA, the Disliked Ships AU, but I don't use this as a platform for hate. While the universe is slightly... twisted, they are all options that could have happened in the main TFIMverse. They're a chance to do things with the... standard ships that people have, and using them in new ways, as well as a platform for interesting characters. I want to do some different things with the designs, so I may note the standard designs I tried to avoid with each design. These designs have been done for... an embarrassing amount of time, so expect a lot of the designs at once, I finally decided to upload them. This girl was made on January ‎14, ‎2017!
Now onto design notes that define her and how I tried to make her different; I don't know why, because I quite like a lot of Starburst fanfoals, I find something that I can't really pin down... off? Not bad, just something I feel doesn't work quite.. all together. I don't know why the orange tones don't work for me, but sometimes they just mess with me. The theme for her has always been 'toylike' or 'teddy bear', with a dash of 'G3 pony'. I wanted to give her a look that felt like she was toylike, and her colors highly feel like G3 ponies, which is why she has a heart on her hoof; one of the main theme tying G3 ponies together. The teddy bear elements are her belly and nose being colored, toylike features including her colored horn, like something stuck on later of a different material than the rest of the fabric. Her colors come from overlaying Sunburst's mane on Starlight's coat and merging them to make them more strawberry-ish, and Sunburst's mane hueshifted to the darkest purple on Starlight's hair, mixed with blue, Sunburst's father's eye, and her cutie mark is Starlight's cutie mark colors and Sunburst's colors for the moon and sun, respectively.
This girl? While Miracle and Claystone are the deuteragonists of the story, Stitchwork... Ironically for her name, is going to be the one who unravels the beginning of this plot. I'll be drawing more character building scenes and stuff, and eventually work my way up to telling the story of it. This won't mean the end of minor character designs either! Nor does it mean I'm unveiling any endgame stuff. It just means that you're finally going to know, at least a bit, why the Miracleverse is the way it is; what started this. Now, I've laid out the clues for it in a few of the various bios, and at least one person has some kind of clue, at least a tiny bit, of what it might be. I'll lay out the clues I've given at the bottom of her bio!
Stitchwork Shine is the daughter of Sunburst and Starlight Glimmer, a neurotic mare, inheriting her mother's anxiety attacks as well as her father's social anxiety, along with some minor traumas in her childhood all coming together to form this bundle of pure anxiety in a very fluffy cuddly package. She's quite cuddly, in fact; her appearance does not lie, her fur is exceptionally soft and fuzzy... it's a shame that she has a lot of issues with physical contact, not liking the way other ponies fur feels rubbing against hers or the usual way it's uninvited, most ponies are relatively social creatures with a tendency to touch others casually, but even the slightest un-warned touch can cause her to jump in fright. She's not in any way a mean or unfriendly mare, she just doesn't have a particularly small personal space bubble and has a tendency to try to avoid being close to others in conversation, which makes her feel distant to most others. The only thing she feels comfortable touching her skin is her scarf, which she fiddles with obsessively when under stress, which is almost always.
Her best friend is Princess Accordance , meeting her when Starlight first took over living in the Friendship Castle when Twilight moved in with her husband, which she put off until her son was born. Accordance kept sending response letters to Twilight's (constant) letters to the castle, and Stitchwork finally answered one with 'you have the wrong address'. They were both like, 5-6. And yes, both of them already had decided to take on their various neurotic duties. Celestia couldn't stop Accordance while still keeping an eye on Cackle and her husband AND her kingdom, and Starlight kind of just tossed the mail out and it landed in Stitchwork's general direction. Celestia was grateful for Accordance to have a friend, but still really wanted to stop her five year old daughter from turning into a workaholic. It didn't work, in case you were guessing.
Stitchwork is very fascinated by the friendship map in the front of her house, once she stopped drawing on it after her mom threw a few fits, and now is trying to figure out why it stopped working, since her mother fixed it and it was sending the Mane  6 after the incident with time travel. She's not any closer to unraveling the secret than she was when she started, but she's determined to figure it out. Patience is the key. She can't run diagnostics, she is, after all, technically still a seamstress, but she's also the daughter of two very powerful unicorns, and with an access to a really big library. A really, really big library. She'll figure it out. She just has to have a little more coffee and sleepless nights with her face pressed onto the map because she passed out again.
The rest of this bio is both devoted to Starlight and Sunburst's relationship, but also... the big reveal.

Starlight and Sunburst met under some... interesting circumstances. Similar to canon, but, well, this is where you learn why the Miracleverse exists. Starlight was preparing for her first friendship lesson, or rather, doing everything she could to not get assigned one, to anxiety ridden to think she could do it,rejecting every one and having anxiety attacks while Twilight wasn't looking her way. Of course, opportunity knocked when Twilight received a snowflake on the wind from the Crystal Empire, inviting her to come. Twilight would have much more preferred that opportunity stayed behind that day... and never, ever came back, when she read what she thought would be an invitation to meet Shining Armor and Cadance's foal. There was a single word that hit her first.
Stillborn
It was, technically, an invitation to meet her niece/nephew, but also to say goodbye. She had died before she was born. Nobody knew why, besides that the little alicorn was gone before she arrived. Twilight and her friends, originally expecting to bring gifts that were quickly abandoned, took the train to the Crystal Empire, Twilight trying to cover up her sadness and anxiety, protecting Spike, even though he already knew, she asked him to do something special for her, so he wouldn't have to see the baby gone, to take Starlight on the only friendship lesson she had in the Crystal Empire... seeing her childhood friend Sunburst.
It wasn't hard to find, and for once, Spike wasn't mobbed by the Crystal Ponies... they were all in their houses or crowding the entrance to the palace, coming to pay their respects to the baby princess. Sunburst was home, and... well, they talked. Starlight couldn't tell how long they talked, but it was awkward and silent, with a cloud of grief literally hanging over the Empire, the two of them not sure what to say. It was only when there was a sharp knock on the door, after Spike had fallen asleep, informing them that it was morning already, that they realized they had sat there until the next day.
The funeral was at dawn. The princess was buried without a name; Princess Cadance and Shining Armor had not yet decided on a name, intending to name their foal when they met her... but... well, it wasn't going to happen. The foal was buried at the highest rolling green hill in the Empire, under a beautiful crystal tree, with only an image of her in flight and the words 'The Baby Princess' written on it, her date of birth and death the same. Everyone in the Empire was there, and nearly every pony, even those who were simply random ponies who lived in the Empire, paid their respects to the child. Princess Celestia and Luna were there, wings draped over one another as they participated in a moment of history no one wished to repeat. There was no speech from the mother nor the father, Twilight had made her way to the pedestal to say something to the niece she never met, but broke down when she tried. In the end, the silence spoke more to everyone than anything anyone could have said. Pinkie Pie attempted to say something, being the first pony to know of the foal's birth, she was the most prepared. Even though she tried her best, there simply wasn't anything that could make the situation any less painful. Spike was almost forced to speak, being the Empire's hero, the second the Empire ponies realized their savior was there, they were certain he could do something, say something.
When he said goodbye to his cousin, unsure of what to say beyond that, something shattered. The collective grief, the misery of every pony in the empire had done something that seemed impossible up to that point; the Crystal Heart had shattered. The jewel was powered by emotions, but could not handle the grief and mourning of an entire empire.
There was nothing anyone could do, no time, Starlight, Twilight, Celestia and Luna tried their best to hold off the cold, but there was no restoring the hope and joy needed to fix the Crystal Heart. All they could do was keep the clouds at bay until everypony in the Empire had evacuated. No house was left unturned, and it was only when the last ponies had been brought onto the train, that they realized that Cadance had not left her daughter's grave. Shining Armor, who had been ferrying ponies to and fro, went to find his wife, but the empire froze over before he could return. Twilight had lost her niece, her sister in law, and her brother that day.
Sunburst, being homeless, like most of the Crystal Empire, was invited to stay with Twilight and Starlight, since Starlight had not completed her friendship lesson and Sunburst was the only friend she had; she was... well, they didn't know what to do, but eventually, spending enough time awkwardly living in the same space, you grow together, especially as Twilight became more unstable, finding a husband in Big Macintosh, Starlight was put in charge of the castle, and eventually Sunburst and her tied the knot, partially over convenience and shared friendship, and.. something else. But it wasn't easy to tell what was wrong.
And that's how the Miracleverse began.
I've laid out several hints, which I'll list here
  • The first mention of something that had happened was in Pink Sparkle/Galaxy Gazer's bio ; "[Twilight and Big Mac] bonded over Big Macintosh's return of Smarty Pants when Twilight was going through an emotionally trying time, and they bonded further from there." This is fairly self explanatory. Big Macintosh returned Smarty Pants when he heard what had happened, figuring she needed the comfort more than he ever could, and Twilight latched onto him.
  • The second was in Prince Halfpint Moon's bio ; "even though [Pipsqueak] is in the royal guard (captain of Luna's guard, even), he's not nearly as protective of his son as Luna is. It's kind of strange, but... to be expected. They weren't sure what to expect or how to feel when Luna was pregnant... they worried, or at least... Luna did. What if the foal was an alicorn? Part of her was hopeful... but there was worry... would an alicorn foal have.... complications?" Luna feared that the simple fact that the baby princess was an alicorn was the reason that she had died before she was born; these fears were unfounded.
  •  The biggest and first thing that told you guys that something was WRONG was Twilight's bio ; "Twilight has some maternal issues. It was rather obvious that she'd been shaken up by what happened, and her obsessive following of Rarity's pregnancy with Miracle is proof of that, but she's just fine. Really, just fine. No problems at all. She has a lovely husband to help her out, and comfort her, if she needed it." Obviously, Twilight is a barely held together wreck with maternal issues up the wazoo.
  • It was continued in a reference to Twilight's bio in Rarity's own ; ". Rarity's pregnancy was fraught with complications and she was suddenly besieged by a distraught Twilight, who... for her own reasons, was instantly at Rarity's side and refused to leave it, to an unhealthy extent, concerned over near every single complication, even buying an incubator for dragon eggs during Rarity's baby shower... just in case it turned out there might be an egg laid (there wasn't). Rarity found herself almost in belief that Twilight was more worried about Miracle's birth than she was... but Miracle was born." Obviously, Twilight was TERRIFIED of her friend having a miscarriage just like her sister in law's daughter was stillborn.
  • The most cryptic clue comes from Bashful Bluebelle's bio ; "What if, like, the world can be changed... like... if I wasn't born, or you, what if we were like, super important and like, not having us around bucks up the universe?..." She's somewhat of a stoned prophet, some things she says are more than just rambling, but genuine insights into the universe. Most are stoner thoughts, but not all.
  • The final clue was in Accordance's bio; "... mostly this means Celestia asks her to deal with letters coming from Twilight, since... well, Celestia would never say this about her beloved student, but Twilight has become somewhat... overly obsessed, much like she was before she became a Princess, and it's not exactly easy to keep up with both her daughter Cackle, her husband Discord, and Twilight's obsessive letter writing" As constantly mentioned, Twilight is the most broken up by what happened for obvious reasons, and it was made clear.
  • So now you know.
    AND NOW IT CAN BEGIN.

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    Comments: 119

    SilverRomance [2019-03-04 01:21:40 +0000 UTC]

    Hey there! Your OC here has been nominated by a secret admirer for my OC of the Month for March! If they win, they'll get featured on my profile for the rest of the month! You can read about the OC of the Month rules and such here; www.deviantart.com/silverroman…

    And you can track your OCs progress in the polls here; www.deviantart.com/silverroman…

    Just be sure not to advertise anywhere that your OC is in the running or they might get disqualified! Everyone needs to have their fair chance. <3 When the polling is finished you'll get to see what kind soul nominated your character. ^.^

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    StarryOak In reply to SilverRomance [2019-03-04 18:50:26 +0000 UTC]

    cool!

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    SilverRomance In reply to StarryOak [2019-03-04 18:52:00 +0000 UTC]

    <3

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    Herowebcomics [2018-03-24 03:24:23 +0000 UTC]

    Poor stressed out pony!
    I hope things get better for her!

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    StarryOak In reply to Herowebcomics [2018-03-26 02:25:01 +0000 UTC]

    Things are gonna get worse before they get better.

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    MysticSunrise87 [2017-12-22 20:52:39 +0000 UTC]

    As, crazy as the Miracleverse is, I do like how the Crystal Ponies weren't so self-obsessed with Spike visiting that they wouldn't do anything else in a time like that (some people take it way too much sometimes).

    As for the Crystal Heart, I like to think that it wasn't just the grief of the entire empire that made it shatter. It was grieving too and the release at the funeral was the final straw.

    So too speak.

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    chiaotzulover In reply to MysticSunrise87 [2021-10-05 21:39:43 +0000 UTC]

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    twidashfan1234 [2017-12-19 15:53:47 +0000 UTC]

    Hidden by Owner

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    StarryOak In reply to twidashfan1234 [2017-12-19 18:58:48 +0000 UTC]

    go away no.
    And don't recolor other people's work.
    Also don't advertise on my art.

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    twidashfan1234 In reply to StarryOak [2017-12-19 19:16:06 +0000 UTC]

    Hidden by Commenter

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    StarryOak In reply to twidashfan1234 [2017-12-19 19:58:10 +0000 UTC]

    Good lord, you're insufferable.
    But I assume you're also like, 12, I hope to god I'm not like you when I'm 20 if you didn't lie when you signed up... but I'll operate under the assumption that you're just misguided, so I'm just gonna say that you're not doing art a certain way if you're recoloring; you're taking other people's art who do it their own way and pretending it's yours. I don't allow anyone to advertise on my art anyway.
    Haters aren't the same as people who say not recolor other people's work. They're people who have respect for other's works and understand stealing is wrong.
    People who say no to requests aren't haters. They're people who don't want to do something for you and there's nothing wrong with that.
    People who ask you not to comment on their art if you're going to advertise aren't haters. They're people who only wanted comments for feedback, not for random people they don't know to beg for art.

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    twidashfan1234 In reply to StarryOak [2017-12-19 20:45:16 +0000 UTC]

    Hidden by Commenter

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    ThatRandomUser01 In reply to twidashfan1234 [2021-07-16 07:33:02 +0000 UTC]

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    StarryOak In reply to twidashfan1234 [2017-12-19 21:20:29 +0000 UTC]

    ... I'm sorry for calling you insufferable, that was uncalled for.
    its just that when you recolor something, the person you recolored it from never gave you permission, and that's not nice. If you asked and they said it was fine, that's one thing, but... It's not hating to want you to respect that recoloring without permission is not nice. if I took your character and said she was mine, would you like it because you're a true fan who appreciates any art, or would you feel hurt that someone took your art? That's how recoloring makes others feel.
    i don't hate you and you're not a bad person. I was callous and rude, but I'm trying to talk to you so you understand what I mean, now. without any hate, I am being calm and honest and nothing I say right now is an attack on you, do you understand?
    i don't hate your art. and considering this is a drawing of somepony not on the show, i can't see why you'd think I hate non canon things.
    when i say advertise, i mean that you commented not with interest in my work, but to ask for me to draw something for you. i have been asked that so many times that I get upset.
    your hand drawn work is great and you should keep it up.
    but you have to understand that it's great because you made it
    not someone else.
    please calm down, I'm not hating you, I just want to have a calm discussion. there is nothing wrong with talking and I admit I was rude. 

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    TheCortexSimp01 In reply to StarryOak [2018-03-06 00:29:40 +0000 UTC]

    ignore her, she's being immature & she has NO right to talk to you in this manner, by the way she literally blocked me just for calling her out on her behavior (I literally felt like crying just by finding out), I might do a journal about this person pretty soon

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    StarryOak In reply to TheCortexSimp01 [2018-03-06 01:02:54 +0000 UTC]

    i apologize chronically

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    TheCortexSimp01 In reply to StarryOak [2018-03-06 01:09:39 +0000 UTC]

    guys, I need your helpso I was just browsing through for some good pics to look at until I stumbled across this-

    why am I telling you to look at a picture? well go to it & look at the comments section & look for someone named 'twidashfan1234', look at the way she's behaving towards the creator of the picture with the 'over used caps', of course I was NOT impressed when I saw this & looked through some of her pictures to see if she talked to anyone else this way, surely I did-

    the first person commented something (but I don't know what because she hid it & probably blocked them), so I replied to her to tell her that her behavior is unacceptable, the next day (which is today) to see if she replied, & oh boy she did (which you can see in her picture above), so I was about to reply to her, but when I tried to submit the comment, it said that she had blocked me, I didn't get it, I was confused, so I went to her profile, she had blocked me (a
    just did the journal about her, could you try & talk to her about how inappropriate her behavior to others is? (if she didn't decide to pussy out & block you that is), still a bit shaken up by this

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    StarryOak In reply to TheCortexSimp01 [2018-03-06 22:26:22 +0000 UTC]

    blocked me.

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    TheCortexSimp01 In reply to StarryOak [2018-03-07 00:24:55 +0000 UTC]

    hopefully something can be done about her (really, she needs to man up & quit blocking people like this)

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    Koalalova122 [2017-10-25 12:28:03 +0000 UTC]

    Since I can't be bothered to read the description, what's going on and why's she worried?

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    StarryOak In reply to Koalalova122 [2017-10-25 13:36:00 +0000 UTC]

    Since you can't be bothered, I can't be bothered to explain it.

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    Kukiie [2017-08-26 01:07:45 +0000 UTC]

    So...AU where Flurry dies>

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    StarryOak In reply to Kukiie [2017-08-26 01:13:55 +0000 UTC]

    Yes. Not because I hate her, she's a precious winged bean who I love with all my heart, but plot point.

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    chiaotzulover In reply to StarryOak [2021-10-05 21:41:12 +0000 UTC]

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    Kukiie In reply to StarryOak [2017-08-26 01:14:43 +0000 UTC]

    Like the Lightningverse, one single event changed it all...and what if Shining and Cadence just adopted?

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    StarryOak In reply to Kukiie [2017-08-26 03:21:35 +0000 UTC]

    Well, she was stillborn, there's a difference between being infertile and having a child come out dead on arrival, the grief shattered the heart just like Flurry's own shriek of grief, but... no one was prepared to figure it out, it was strictly evacuation.

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    chiaotzulover In reply to StarryOak [2021-10-05 21:42:42 +0000 UTC]

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    CharPonyVA [2017-05-21 02:41:56 +0000 UTC]

    Having a stillborn is one of my biggest fears, so this really hit me. Wonderful job, love her colors. <3 

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    MightyMewtron In reply to CharPonyVA [2017-07-15 23:06:22 +0000 UTC]

    rlly interested in the backstory here of course (its dark but not trying to be edgy for the sake of it like some mlp aus) but aside from that I love how her scarf and messy hair gives me the hyper fangirl vibe. (sorry i rlly like nostalgia critic)

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    StarryOak In reply to CharPonyVA [2017-05-21 02:43:58 +0000 UTC]

    death in general scares me the idea of coming into the world dead... oh god.

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    CharPonyVA In reply to StarryOak [2017-05-21 02:49:26 +0000 UTC]

    exactly o.o it's terrifying 

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    Hope-of-morning [2017-05-12 00:25:14 +0000 UTC]

    Also,I realized,I said earlier in one of my comments,I asked why all of the ,WHY are all of the many six (excluding rarity and,probably Starlight,we need to see how she's really doing)are bucking broken in some way,that's why the map doesent work anymore,that why it's broken,because the mane six are,and There's no one that cant fix it,because,their children are broken as well in very twisted ways,a depressive emo,a phycopath,a control freak,a stoner,an critic a####le ,and.....and.......well at least the rarity family isn't ,well;broken,I wonder why though,now that I think about it'Miracle is the only NG child in this universe that isn't either Depreseed ,Anxious,rude or a combination or all of the above.
    ps.I totally forgot about of that Cherrymac girl that I cant even rememeber her name ,but she's not broken,she could be the new element of laugther 

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    StarryOak In reply to Hope-of-morning [2017-05-12 00:51:30 +0000 UTC]

    Depressed assholes can save the world too.

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    Hope-of-morning In reply to StarryOak [2017-05-12 01:02:44 +0000 UTC]

    I have hope in you ,and miracle ,and probably stichwork

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    StarryOak In reply to Hope-of-morning [2017-05-12 01:47:07 +0000 UTC]

    You don't even know what they're up against yet!

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    Hope-of-morning In reply to StarryOak [2017-05-12 02:05:54 +0000 UTC]

     

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    Miss-Barker [2017-05-10 11:06:35 +0000 UTC]

    Gee, I wonder why Shining Armor's family hasn't been mentioned in the Miracleverse yet?

    *reads the description*

    Oh...OOOOOOHHHHHHH.........I don't even know what to say.

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    StarryOak In reply to Miss-Barker [2017-05-10 18:36:33 +0000 UTC]

    tsok

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    lexi02 [2017-05-10 00:57:05 +0000 UTC]

    She's beautiful! I love her design! It's so original!           

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    chiaotzulover In reply to lexi02 [2021-10-05 21:44:30 +0000 UTC]

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    StarryOak In reply to lexi02 [2017-05-10 01:42:24 +0000 UTC]

    Thankies.

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    lexi02 In reply to StarryOak [2017-05-10 02:51:00 +0000 UTC]

    No prob!   

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    HayStarlight [2017-05-09 22:42:46 +0000 UTC]

    at least they're with their daughter now... they're with their... oh my Celestia
                     

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    StarryOak In reply to HayStarlight [2017-05-09 22:43:41 +0000 UTC]

    *awkward pat* It's ok, it'll be ok, *pat pat*

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    HayStarlight In reply to StarryOak [2017-05-09 22:49:43 +0000 UTC]

    heh thanks. hey how did you decide you wanted to kill them off? if you don't mind my asking that is

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    StarryOak In reply to HayStarlight [2017-05-10 01:28:23 +0000 UTC]

    It was more like a story necessity, under any normal circumstances, the goddess of love would never let such misery run rampant.

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    HayStarlight In reply to StarryOak [2017-05-10 01:44:00 +0000 UTC]

    hehe okay

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    CometStarlightPony [2017-05-09 20:21:33 +0000 UTC]

    Miracleverse: The AU where everyone needs a hug.

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    StarryOak In reply to CometStarlightPony [2017-05-09 20:21:55 +0000 UTC]

    ... That is actually 100% accurate.

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    Chairuchi [2017-05-09 18:26:35 +0000 UTC]

    she's so pretty!! and she has a very original design for a starburst kid tbh



    also, the backstory actually hit me really hard, i didn't expect it to be THAT dark (it's still amazing tho, don't get me wrong)

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