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Published: 2010-01-04 12:34:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1674; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 18
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I put A LOT of attention into detail for this page I practically accomplished one panel per day for about a week of Christmas break. (then again, part of those days were spent hanging with family, or playing Sims3/Assassin's Creed/Spore)

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I'm quite happy about this page. I think I managed to show that it's sunset obviously enough And I tried to hint that it's autumn... dunno if it's that obvious though. What y'all think?

No, Ferox was NOT out cold for ages. Just several hours. And my rationalization for failing to show the right season in pages 9 to 12 is that... er... it's... some areas weren't bitten by the changing season yet. And it's only the start of autumn. The general area where Ferox is in now is more... autumn-y... that the grassland place where the moose were earlier. (fail xP)

I'm surprisingly cool with the background here. (Usually, I hate the bgs I come up with XD)

Aaaand... I'm done rambling

Wait last-- who can guess the identity of the nutcase that startled Ferox?

Edit: Took the advice of and in laying out the text
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Comments: 32

xXxtaintedlovexXx [2010-02-09 21:14:49 +0000 UTC]

it looks great ^^
XD I love the expression Ferox has in the last panel... haha priceless

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Stefi-Delly In reply to xXxtaintedlovexXx [2010-02-10 02:02:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch

Haha

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xXxtaintedlovexXx In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-02-10 04:56:32 +0000 UTC]

no problem xD

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angelkiss112 [2010-01-12 20:12:07 +0000 UTC]

luff ur comic but one nitice ur wolfie in the last panel looks really like a griffon xD dunno wai xD but still i like it ^^

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Stefi-Delly In reply to angelkiss112 [2010-01-13 09:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

lolololol I think it's the paw/spread out toes

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angelkiss112 In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-01-13 17:33:05 +0000 UTC]

welcome ^^
and the color to xD

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Stefi-Delly In reply to angelkiss112 [2010-01-14 10:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah

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angelkiss112 In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-01-14 10:20:52 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Forests-n-Foxes [2010-01-07 00:02:32 +0000 UTC]

really awsome ^^ cant wait to see more i like your colouring methods too ^^

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Stefi-Delly In reply to Forests-n-Foxes [2010-01-10 02:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch

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Forests-n-Foxes In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-01-10 23:30:21 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Vargyl [2010-01-06 12:03:43 +0000 UTC]

I love panel 5!

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Stefi-Delly In reply to Vargyl [2010-01-10 02:27:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad ya do I put as much detail into it as I could

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kkid210 [2010-01-06 03:10:53 +0000 UTC]

coll

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Stefi-Delly In reply to kkid210 [2010-01-10 02:26:52 +0000 UTC]

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kkid210 In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-01-10 06:33:07 +0000 UTC]

XP

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Inarigamer [2010-01-06 01:11:26 +0000 UTC]

HELLO?!?!
oh it was just the joices in my head
that was funny!

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Stefi-Delly In reply to Inarigamer [2010-01-10 02:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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shikafreekv [2010-01-05 11:50:33 +0000 UTC]

My first guess would be the moose coming back for more, because other than that I have no clue what would scare Ferox so badly

Also, I have definately got to say that your backgrounds are getting alot better . Just looking at all the pages so far, you had a really nice first page, then you can gradually see each of them afterwards slowly get that little more detail, whether it be that you decide to add a sky into the picture or are just getting that much better

They also seem to be getting darker, but there's nothing wrong with that, they look great

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Stefi-Delly In reply to shikafreekv [2010-01-10 02:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Lol, no, not the moose He's far away with his family by now xD

Thanks! I started adding skies because someone said it'd look better if people could see the sky and tell what time of day it is. I found was right xD

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shikafreekv In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-01-11 01:37:09 +0000 UTC]

Aw.. not the moose lol... he was a good character for a timeskip. Lol i could see that, every other chapter, ferox gets rammed, next page its a week later lol

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Stefi-Delly In reply to shikafreekv [2010-01-11 10:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha, really? Lol, I only remember getting Ferox rammed once

Haha, but I think the character who spoke will be just as cool to meet. Though in a different way xD

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shikafreekv In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-01-11 22:44:16 +0000 UTC]

I'll bet. Can't wait for the next page

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Stefi-Delly In reply to shikafreekv [2010-01-12 09:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm workin' on it

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RedwllWrrior [2010-01-05 07:43:37 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous! The time you put into this page really shows. =3 But I do have to agree with TheArcticRedFox on the speech bubbles in the 3rd panel.

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Stefi-Delly In reply to RedwllWrrior [2010-01-05 10:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks And I rearranged the text, is it better?

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RedwllWrrior In reply to Stefi-Delly [2010-01-06 06:02:44 +0000 UTC]

Much.

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Stefi-Delly In reply to RedwllWrrior [2010-01-06 10:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks

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SilverSteel-Alchemis [2010-01-04 22:18:23 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, ferox sure does look startled xDDD luv the detail, it sure does show you really put so much effort in it stef!!

can't wait for the next page C:

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Stefi-Delly In reply to SilverSteel-Alchemis [2010-01-10 02:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah Awwww... thanks so much, Silver

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TheArticRedFox [2010-01-04 20:34:05 +0000 UTC]

oo the sunsetty colors are so pretty! it gives a kinda warm-yet-cold feeling, perfect for an autumn setting i also really like how you did the fur in the first panel! 8D only thing i'd say is in the 3rd panel you might want to switch around the two wordboxes, because since it's read left to right theyre a little out of order n__n'

butyeah! i love this page ffff <3

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Stefi-Delly In reply to TheArticRedFox [2010-01-05 09:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, you're right. I was pretty unsure about how to lay the boxes out. I put that box to the left in an effort to guide the eye away from the "startled Ferox" panel while the one on the right would be where the eye goes next after reading the "Life as a loner isn't easy" box. Maybe I'll just move the upper right box to the left, put it above the other box...

I used the word "box" too much

Thanks a bunch, Arf

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