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Kitsune-juusan [2009-06-04 19:18:32 +0000 UTC]

i like this, it's really good. my only problem is that the largeer image is to small for the print to get bigger, it's hard for me to read
it sounds interesting though. i'll keep reading.

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AnjiruOokami [2008-01-20 22:01:04 +0000 UTC]

OK! Time to critique each box<3
Box 1: OK. Not much to critique here, I'd mainly say it's more appealing to the eyes if you had your characters' mouths open when they spoke. It seems you don't do that enough.

Box 2: Well my only two critiques for this box is that one...Skar's ear is too flat, I'd say try to give it some more depth by making the rims a bit thicker and more shaply. And two, I'd say his bottom jaw is way too thick in this box compared to the rest of the boxes.

Box 3: All in all it's very nice, my only critique for this is that Frost's other front leg doesn't show, so it gives the impression he only has three legs. And that he's too thin at his chest, and too 'fat' at his groin area. :3 Don't forget most wolves have a bigger build than that.

Box 4: My only critique is that Xhal's head is turned a little too far back, it looks awkward.

Box 5: In this one my only critique is that Frost's bottom jaw is too sharp, and Frost's neck is too short.

Box 6: In box 6 I'd like to see some teeth in Xhal's mouth, and once again, some more depth in the ears. And I also think the ear placement on Skar is off, it seems too high on Skar's head.

Box 7: My only critique for this one is once again, that Frost would look SO much better with the mouth open. :3

Box 8: See last critique comment. :3


Overall: I personally really love this. You've come a long way since I first saw your gallery, and seeing how this is kind of old in itself, you can imagine how much I like your newer stuff. ;3

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BaroqueWolfie [2008-01-05 14:39:28 +0000 UTC]

I think the sunset backround looks really terrific, also the fur designs as well.

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SkyShipColonel [2007-12-18 03:57:43 +0000 UTC]

I like it, yer good.

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lightnight24 [2007-12-08 20:37:44 +0000 UTC]

congrates jades another sweet looking pic. your sky is awesome!!:3

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kitty-ko [2007-12-08 00:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Fabulous art and coloring, but I'd try going for more dynamic paneling.

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lil-twilight-wolf [2007-12-03 10:55:29 +0000 UTC]

oo amazing job my freind ^^ love the coloring good personialties too :3

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AlfaFilly [2007-12-03 07:02:54 +0000 UTC]

ooh! Great work with the backgrounds! Very beautiful and uplifting <3
The story looks like it's coming along quite nicely. Definitely an improvement from before, if I recall.

Anatomy looks quite nice on these and the expressions are pricelss <83 Coloring and shading is fabulous as well. Your work with lighting is FANTASTIC in my opinion.

I did manage to find a grammar mistake I believe in the last panel...
"...I'll deal with the hag myself I don't think she'll be so bad..."
Sounds a bit like a run on sentence. Perhaps adding in a comma between "myself" and "I".

But yeah, really looking foward to this comic as it progresses!

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Blent7 [2007-12-03 02:19:55 +0000 UTC]

I like the red wolf the best!!! you did a good job on him!!

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draconianspirit [2007-12-02 23:36:53 +0000 UTC]

This looks really great. Your body anatomy has improved SO much, and it looks absolutly wonderful. ^^ The only thing that seems off now are the heads. I don't know how to explain it though. The eyes look too big, maybe if you made the tops of the heads a little bit bigger it would look more porportionate. Also, wolves have rounded snouts, not pointy ones, which gives it a bit of a fox look.

But this is really really good. I had to look really hard to see the errors I did. ^^ Great job on this. Really improving. ^^

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BloodyKillOokami [2007-12-02 23:27:14 +0000 UTC]

OMG hilarious! I wish I could make comics like this! *rolling on floor laughing*

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crazy-crazy-monkey [2007-12-02 16:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Well I can't really say anything that no one else hasn't already said. You're improving a lot, just keep practising and practising.

(Lovin' Skarkaxe & Xhal )

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KLHart-Creations [2007-12-01 22:26:24 +0000 UTC]

ooo very nicley done! it came out amzing!!
poses and anatomy are getting alot looser instead of all straight lines ur improving every time!! and awsome shading! love the bg's ^^

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ChosenWolf1 [2007-12-01 21:21:33 +0000 UTC]

its very nice ^^ the coloring is amazing and soo far the plot is great ^^

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AnjiruOokami [2007-12-01 19:22:53 +0000 UTC]

OOO! Me likey! <333

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KimmenWolf [2007-12-01 19:18:05 +0000 UTC]

That's great done Jade, Love the backgrounds. But they could have been less smoothed.. or how I should explain that xD
The shading is good but.. In some of the pics.. they don't really follows the light.. I mean.. I don't get where the lights is coming from.. If you know what I mean. And you should try to make the panels in other forms. you know like circles etc.
But I really like your comic, so awesome!

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Blue-Storm-Spirit [2007-12-01 19:12:32 +0000 UTC]

I am in awe of your shweet background skillz
and your new shading style X3

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