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RenaRules [2009-03-11 09:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Great so far! Love your drawing style, and the personalities of the characters.

Keep it up.

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LilGreenTraveler [2009-01-18 00:26:30 +0000 UTC]

*horrible person for not being on xP*

Okay, my usual crits and comments coming right up! For one... yus, spelling error: 'Happened' instead of 'Happent'.

Hmm... I like how the story's starting to come along, although I am severly depressed Dante's being abducted!
But anyway, I reeeaaally like that picture of... um... Mr. Snarlz. XD When he's all demanding and defensive. Poor dude!
Just as a suggestion, maybe you should do more close-up pics rather than the farther-off ones? Or try different perspectives? I see you try to do dramatic effects by just showing the muzzle or some such thing like that, and it's a neat trick.

On a totally different note... you can hit me now for being so inactive.

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LilGreenTraveler [2009-01-18 00:25:56 +0000 UTC]

*horrible person for not being on xP*

Okay, my usual crits and comments coming right up! For one... yus, spelling error: 'Happened' instead of 'Happent'.

Hmm... I like how the story's starting to come along, although I am severly depressed Dante's being abducted!
But anyway, I reeeaaally like that picture of... um... Mr. Snarlz. XD When he's all demanding and defensive. Poor dude!
Just as a suggestion, maybe you should do more close-up pics rather than the farther-off ones? Or try different perspectives? I see you try to do dramatic effects by just showing the muzzle or some such thing like that, and it's a neat trick.

On a totally different note... you can hit me now for being so inactive.

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crazy-crazy-monkey [2009-01-12 21:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Your wolves get better and better on each page! Keep up the good work

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TheFowlWitch [2009-01-11 21:47:10 +0000 UTC]

OMG ITS AWSOME!!!

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Nick-Husky [2009-01-11 08:47:42 +0000 UTC]

wow all I can say is a damm awesome storyline and an impressive art O.o

Great job my friend (if you still are.. LOL)

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draconianspirit [2009-01-10 23:45:27 +0000 UTC]

GACKK!!! TEH BIRDIE!!! TEH BIRDIE OKZ?!??!!


AWWW BIRDIE!!!...

lol....good page. The close up of th eye is REALL nice. You should blur the outside rim of it though, so that the color against the white of the eye doesnt look so sharp. ^^

Nice work.

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AlfaFilly [2009-01-10 22:27:29 +0000 UTC]

ooh yay! More pages for the WIN! <8D *flail*

I dunno if I mentioned it previously, but did I say I love your shading? Because I really do. xD It always comes out so clean and it fits the characters and the over all style perfectly.

The panel arrangements are also very interesting. Not sure if it looks too well on slow-paced parts of the story, but on dramatic climactic parts such as this it works fantastic.

Aww, poor birdy D: He needs a band-aid.

Love the snarl/angry face in the *counts* 9th (?) panel. What's that guy's name again? Sorry, a little slow when it comes to names

I can see you're taking your time and making everything as good as it can get. Keep doin' whatcha doin'!

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Windshade888 [2009-01-10 16:36:31 +0000 UTC]

hi there, nice to see you are still working with wolf comics ^^

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Slixen [2009-01-10 14:24:34 +0000 UTC]

It's so beautiful You get better on anatomy too Very cute expressions too xD Good job

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MetaSelene [2009-01-10 11:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Great page^^ I've been wating for this^^

First of all I want to say that the eyes are absolutly great, and the anatomy is just getting better and better^^
I have nothing to critisice exept the things that have already been said, so keep up the good work^^

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Rinzydings [2009-01-10 01:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Yay next page ^^.

Your backgrounds turned out amazing. And your anatomy has impored a lot, it looks so good . I really love the eye shot, it's really fantastic .

The only thing that's odd is the "happent" in the first panel. I believe you meant happened or happen ? Great overall ^^.

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iamPURPLE [2009-01-10 00:39:53 +0000 UTC]

Gwah! The eyes are hypnotizing and so shiny!
Especailly that big eye shot- the colors just leave me amused and at awe.
Aw, poor Kale. Such a beauty, too- he better be alright. DX
Anatomy is amazing and improving at stunning speed.
May I ask if the rocky background was a pain?
Hmm...nothing really to critique except the spelling error on panel 1 (already caught, though)- everything appears spot on. Keep it up! Next page!

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Rouka-Raska [2009-01-10 00:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Woohoo, new page! This is beeeautiful. :3
Thanks so much for including Solpik, he looks brilliant. ^^
I think your anatomy has really improved, it's noticeable. I especially like panel 10 (well, the one with Xhal snarling).
Lol, not that I'm great at anatomy myself, but I like how this looks.

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Jadefuzz [2009-01-10 00:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh no! Poor Kale! I hope he's okay...

I really like the expressions in this page! Especially the snarling one -- it looks really professional. Xhal's worried expression in the third-last panel also looks exceptional, it really captures the emotional mood!

Now for the crit.
First of all -- on the first panel, Xhal's final word is 'happent', the correct spelling being 'happened' Don't worry -- easy mistake to make!
That is, literally, the only crit I can think of! Everything about this page is perfect -- all anatomy is spot-on, and all of the shading looks perfect. Great job, Jade!

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