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FlyingGekko774 [2008-01-30 18:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Bwahahahaha... Being Beta is so rewarding!


...until the alpha steps in...

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AlfaFilly [2008-01-27 03:51:07 +0000 UTC]

Oooo someone got in trouble! :'D Ahaha

VERY nice use of shadows and highlights on this page! More so with shadow. The speckled appearance on them in panel 4 looks absolutely fantastic! And very fitting <3

Lawl, I don't really have any constructive crits for you on this one. I really love the text bubble idea and making them color coded. That's totally pimp XD

Um... YAY!

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XxNitallaxX [2008-01-25 03:49:12 +0000 UTC]

I like the characters in this comic! I'm enjoying it already!

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Blent7 [2008-01-20 23:23:34 +0000 UTC]

lol thats funny!! i like this part of the comic!! nice job!! xD

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AnjiruOokami [2008-01-20 22:12:35 +0000 UTC]

My only real critique is the first panel. I think Skar's top jaw is too thin, I'd add a bit more jaw to the jaw. xD

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draconianspirit [2008-01-20 19:43:01 +0000 UTC]

your speech bubbles are great, and it seems like you've really improved your coloring. It looks like you used some kind of gradient on your wolves, and that's cool but it probably would have worked better if there was some kind of dappled/scattered sunlight on them. For the most part it looks like they're out in open field, so they wouldn't have any shading on em XD lol. The grass is beautiful, try leaving some random bits of grass in there that aint smudged. It'll give it more texture. your head anatomy is getting much better. The only one that made me giggle was the first panel. Even for a smiling surprised expression, the mouth wouldnt open down that way. ^^ Look at pictures of dogs panting and you'll see what I mean. But this is really geat ^^ I'm loving the storyline. Great job.

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Jadefuzz [2008-01-20 10:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Sounds just like my PE teacher XD

How the heck can't you like this?! D8 It's so good! The poses are right on target, especially the running and ears-back ones.

Kale could be some kind of rare blackbird? XD Heheh. I dunno.

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AnjiruOokami [2008-01-20 06:14:44 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME! >W<

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KLHart-Creations [2008-01-20 02:38:02 +0000 UTC]

lol they look amazing! i lov ehow detailed ur comics are and the colors are perfect! wonderfully done!! -its his fault!!-

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SlokGreatwolf [2008-01-19 19:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! I really like background on this page,you put on the light and shadow very well.That I can see where is the light source.Great job! I really want to know what happen next.
Well,every time I read or watching cartoons/movies,I'm quite get into in like I'm in the situation.I can feel the breeze in the picture some times.LOL
Oh,and I want to tell you that you missed a New Year picture,I just want to mention that you're in there already,and it's now in my gallery.

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LilGreenTraveler [2008-01-19 19:11:03 +0000 UTC]

'It's his fault!' lolz...I love it!

UI like this one. And ya know what...I see no grammer mistakes (none to obsess over, yay!) except that border is spelled without the a.

(And just a sugestion, but why not put a 'Later...' thing in the corner?)

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lil-twilight-wolf [2008-01-19 18:25:55 +0000 UTC]

oo very nice :3 i like the speehc bubbles ^^ and the bg is very detailed and has lots of neat effects .Heehee that a pretty harsh punishment i would hate to run the territory bounders XD.I liek teh last panels poses awsome job so far ;3 cant wait to see more 8D
i use emotes to much lol.

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Rouka-Raska [2008-01-19 15:34:45 +0000 UTC]

I really like panel 2 as well, along with all of the beautiful colouring in the others.

Oh, thanks for the recent fave btw.

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