trichelle [2003-09-08 19:26:47 +0000 UTC]
I love the flow of this poem as well as the subject. This is really good. The word choice in this kicks ass. I like this alot. It elaborates on your feeling, to the point that you can't help but get what the writer wanted to be gotten. The last line, Just really get's me. I'm a sucker for the last line of a poem, and this one is one of my favorites. Great job!
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steihl In reply to trichelle [2003-09-08 19:28:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I've posted my poetry to a lot of sites, but was never able to get any feedback. In just a few hours I've gotten so much. Thank you, I'll have to check out your site.
trichelle In reply to steihl [2003-09-08 19:30:22 +0000 UTC]
no prob! this was a good poem that deserved to be commented on.
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