Comments: 95
YaoiWillKillMe [2014-03-30 10:16:03 +0000 UTC]
OGLOB THIS IS AWESOME
can i have a link to fanfiction? thankyou ^_^
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tomholl [2013-06-03 00:32:10 +0000 UTC]
awsome
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kevakmt [2013-05-13 04:31:28 +0000 UTC]
i love this story, seems like marshall is actually a real sweetheart
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msimanij [2013-04-15 09:51:55 +0000 UTC]
the link is what i must have kind soul. it's really good. your imagery is very sensational and the commentary for characters are really realistic.
in other words..
it rocked
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Stelera In reply to msimanij [2013-04-15 15:06:31 +0000 UTC]
link sent
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xXChuibyChuXx [2013-03-03 05:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Can I have the link to Fanfiction.net? Plz :3 (p.s I lovvve this)
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TerquoiceXnailpolish [2013-01-22 05:51:27 +0000 UTC]
Is there going to be some smut? Oh please let there be some smut.
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Stelera In reply to TerquoiceXnailpolish [2013-01-22 05:52:46 +0000 UTC]
There are two full chapters worth of smut... nearly 40 pages of nothing but smut... but it's all only available on Fan Fiction.
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Stelera In reply to Luno97 [2013-02-28 03:09:17 +0000 UTC]
link sent
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Luno97 In reply to Stelera [2013-03-02 17:55:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ^_^
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TerquoiceXnailpolish In reply to Stelera [2013-01-23 13:16:36 +0000 UTC]
ohh ok i will make sure ti read it thanks for the amazing story btw
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Stelera In reply to siathedragon [2012-11-13 21:02:34 +0000 UTC]
You kidding? This fic is all about shipping!
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siathedragon In reply to Stelera [2012-11-14 19:09:16 +0000 UTC]
sorry i had just reached that chapter
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hotrobin99 [2012-09-01 06:26:07 +0000 UTC]
I see bromance
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REMMI-CHAN [2012-01-18 02:48:40 +0000 UTC]
this story is coming along wonderfully! i must read the rest!!!
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DrasticAsian [2011-12-29 23:51:24 +0000 UTC]
Good so far, I approve of you guys taking your time. Makes the story much better later on in my opinion. But I hope the editing gets better later. Most things are fixed but some things are missed. Triple check!
And do you ever find it strange to to refer to marshall as a teen even though he's hundreds of years old?
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Stelera In reply to DrasticAsian [2011-12-30 06:50:02 +0000 UTC]
Chapter two is also raw... I don't think we got a beta until chapter four...
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DrasticAsian In reply to Stelera [2011-12-30 16:00:29 +0000 UTC]
Raw? But this one said it had a beta in the description...and i thought you guys would have gone back and fix things for a story as popular as yours.
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DrasticAsian In reply to Stelera [2011-12-31 08:30:11 +0000 UTC]
English is not my best subject but I've read enough stories to know when something doesn't seem right...I'll be your guys triple check!
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Stelera In reply to DrasticAsian [2011-12-31 08:30:55 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! Sending the doc to your gmail now!
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DrasticAsian In reply to Stelera [2011-12-31 08:33:41 +0000 UTC]
Hold up are you sending all of them?! o.O Hoooo shiiiiit!
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DrasticAsian In reply to Stelera [2011-12-31 08:36:14 +0000 UTC]
Guess I'll edit while i read them then. So many words...
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DrasticAsian In reply to Stelera [2011-12-31 08:44:28 +0000 UTC]
Impressive...now what level of smut are we talking about here in chp 6 and 11?
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Stelera In reply to DrasticAsian [2011-12-31 08:47:35 +0000 UTC]
well chapter 6 does pussy-foot around it a lot, I think we captured the nervousness of first-time-lovers quite well actually, but in both cases the entire action is described in full detail... it's not raunchy though, it's written as tastefully as possible... and there is actual plot leading into the smut of chapter 6 and plot leading out of the smut of chapter 11...
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DrasticAsian In reply to Stelera [2011-12-31 08:50:37 +0000 UTC]
I'll see how far I can make it.
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Stelera In reply to DrasticAsian [2011-12-31 08:52:17 +0000 UTC]
proceed with caution my friend.
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DrasticAsian In reply to Stelera [2011-12-31 08:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Proceeding like a bomb squad.
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Monichan2291 [2011-12-13 03:05:35 +0000 UTC]
Omg i love this ^^ it is excellent!! You have a gift for writing and i envy you but I'm soo glad i found this >< wonderful reading material
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Monichan2291 In reply to Stelera [2011-12-13 03:28:12 +0000 UTC]
I will gives all the loves to the people who created the story ^^ it truly is awesome
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NevinSlate [2011-12-10 07:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Love the flow on this chapter. I kinda forgot about Fionna... But that's a good thing, cuz it bugs me when I remember a character or event that was supposed to be there, but wasn't. Very good writing over all! On to the next chapter!!!
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rinodino [2011-12-08 16:31:06 +0000 UTC]
omg this is so addicting... but it's so loooooong(not that that's a bad thing, not at all! more to read hehe)! i don't think i have time for this!! forget that. i will MAKE time for this.
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Stelera In reply to rinodino [2011-12-08 16:54:05 +0000 UTC]
Apparently a lot of people have foregone doing homework and sleeping to read this fanfic...
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annabell22 [2011-10-06 21:55:23 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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Stelera In reply to UlrichLover98 [2011-09-26 20:08:09 +0000 UTC]
Chapter 3 going up sometime today!
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Momo-senpi In reply to Stelera [2011-09-26 21:04:26 +0000 UTC]
This story has and will always make me happy that i cry so much
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Stelera In reply to Momo-senpi [2011-09-26 21:33:09 +0000 UTC]
I have a feeling you're going to love chapter 3
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Momo-senpi In reply to Stelera [2011-09-26 21:38:25 +0000 UTC]
I've been waiting for chapter 3 ALL DAY LONG.
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