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step-into-darkness — C.L.H. Chapter 2, page 2
Published: 2010-02-12 03:08:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 730; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 15
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An original story.Title: Castle in the Light of Hyiero.
Chapter 2: "The Final Battle"
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Ok.. so this is what i really imagined for this page, not the other version i did... The other one took me so long to do the hand and the guys face getting burned that i just rushed and uploaded the unfinished version.... This isnt as good as i would like but its waaaay better than the other version... added some dialog also...
Page summary:
A heated battle.
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ha, yeah.. .i was trying to do something kinda shocking in the beginning of this chapter so ppl know this isnt some talkative comic...a couple ppl actually thought this was too graphic...i mean, sure his face is being melted through and you can see his lip being severed, but at least there wont be much blood... these wounds should be cauterize right?
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me, I don't think it's too graphic, but it may be an idea to tone it down a bit. I'm not attacking your work, but a little less graphic may open the doors to a greater audience, or ask around. If more people say it's too graphic, then not, tone it down. If more people prefer the graphic, run with it!
As artists, we can't make everyone love our works, but we can try and adjust our focus for what the audience wants...
I would probably go with the cauterize, yes
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yeah it is kinda gory haha.. it was declined from a group because its not pg13...maaan, i think 13 year olds can handle this...
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wow this page is so cool!
sorry for not commenting until now, but Ive not been home xP
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not a problem.. .comments arent mandatory anyway...im just glad i finished these dang pages and u like them...took almost 3 weeks to do... i wish i was super fast at this so i could get more done..
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I wish I had time to draw comics at all D:
I feel like I barely got time to do anything... school, homework, chores, friends..
really dont get much time to draw D:
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