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StoryTellerNamedDusk — Atmosphir The Novel Chapter 14

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Penutz woke up in his bed. Two ladies were standing beside his bed "Penutz, more fun?". He got up "Can't, I'm busy. I have an appointment tonight. The two ladies hugged him "Aww". Penutz smiled and slid from them "I gotta go" he ran outside the room. He quickly dashed into his penthouse and locked the door. "Holy crap! Last night was-".

BANG

Something was in his penthouse. He grabbed a knife from his kitchen and searched the place. "Hello Penutz... Long time no see...". Penutz turned around and saw Exius. "Exius!?". He laughed "Yes, it's me.". He smirked. Penutz quickly threw the knife a side and knelt "I'm sorry I left you! No one was there! I WAS- "Penutz stood up and shouted "FOREVER ALONE!". Exius widened his eyes "Erm, uh. Penutz, I know your a good friend of me but um.. You're not forever alone, are you?". He looked at his penthouse. Penutz slammed the door to a room "N-N-No! I am alone! Emo! FOREVER..... ALONE!". A dark hand grabbed Penutz and dragged him aside. Exius walked towards the room. "NO NO NO! DON'T OPEN THAT-". Too late. Exius opened the door and saw 7 ladies inside. All crowded on the bed. It seems that they were saving a spot for someone. Exius jaw-dropped "What the f-". Penutz put his hand on his mouth "Now now Exius! Don't swear!". Exius stared at the room. The ladies looked at Exius and then at Penutz "oooo, Double Treat tonight ladies!". They squealed. The ladies jumped on Exius. "Damnit! I'm married! I'm married!". Penutz pushed the ladies back inside and slammed the door. He put 6 locks on the it. Exius shivered on the floor. "You okay, buddy?". Exius frowned at Penutz.

"No, no I get touched by women everyday- OF COURSE I'M NOT!" Exius was petrified. Penutz frowned "Don't you have Lauria? You would get used to it, right?". Exius got up, he was still shivering. "Used to what?". Penutz laughed and blushed "You know..." he looked outside his window. King Exius was confused "erm.. I don't get you". Penutz whispered something in his ear. Exius jumped and hit his head "OH GOODNESS! NO!". He patted Exius's shoulder "But, didn't you-". He shivered more "Yeah okay, I did it before but what! It was me and Lauria's honeymoon!". Penutz laughed harshly. "Exius, so how was it?".

They stared at each other "How was what?" Exius asked
"....That night"Penutz said with a perverted face
"What night?"
".....With Lauria"
"..Where?" Exius was really really REALLY curious
"....In bed" Penutz giggled

Exius's face was completed red. "I rather not talk about it". Penutz elbowed him "C'Mon Exius! Tell me! Penutz is the bestest Cupid in town!". Exius paused. He scratched his head and kept quiet. "Erm...uh". He looked up. Penutz's face was waiting for his answer. "uh..It was..erm..". He gritted his teeth. "...Pleasurable...". Exius's face was even more red. Penutz was laughing his lungs out. He fell backwards and landed on the couch. He was holding his stomach "HAHA! PRICELESS!". King Exius frowned "Wh-What's priceless!?!". Penutz popped his head from behind the couch "Your face when you told me the feeling, HAHA!". Penutz fell off the couch and he was banging his fist on the floor. He ROFL'd. Exius was trying to lose the memory of him and Lauria in bed. He grabbed the sides of a door and kept banging his head. "Why am I acting like an idiot around you?!?". Penutz told him "BECAUSE I'M CUPID!".

After hours of trying to cool King Exius down, Penutz sat on the couch with him. "See Exius? It's good to have other feelings than just... Anger and Hatred....". King Exius agreed with him. "Anyway, Exius. Why ARE you here?". King Exius explained to Penutz.
"I need you back Penutz. I've captured Nazmus and his friends. Currently, one of my hired assassins are capturing the Abraiders Guild members. I need an executioner."

Penutz jumped up and his eye lit up. "I love to kill people as must as I love to-". King Exius opened his mouth "NAH AH AH! NOT A WORD ABOUT-". Penutz tilted his head and told him

"I actually wanted to say 'Hunting Squirrels' "
Exius kept quiet.
"... I KNEW IT! EXIUS IS A PERVERT!"
"NO I'M NOT!"
"EVERYONE'S A PERVERT, EXIUS!"
"....... True that ....... Anyway Penutz,do you accept the job?"

Penutz shook hands with Exius "Of course! We both DO have something in common!". King Exius tilted his head "What would that be?". "....Well, the both of us aren't virgins" he stick his tongue out. Exius's face turned red again, he fainted. Penutz sighed "I have GOT to start lowering my adult language."

Amazing woke up in chains. He saw POTaTOS beside him. He tunred to his right and saw Desdemona. "Des! Des! Wake up!" he rattled the chains to make some noise. Desdemona slowly opened her eyes and saw Amazing. "Amazing..? Wh...Where are...we...?" she gasped "WHERE ARE WE?!". She turned to her right and saw Plasticfunnel, next to him is Cheung, then Faith and Darkstar and so on. "Wh...What are the AG Members doing here?!?". A dark figure jumped down from a hole. It came into the light. It was Nadiae. "You're a dumb as ever, aren't you Desdemona...". She smirked. Desdemona growled at her and tried to break free from the chains. Nadiae laughed again "You can't escape.... These chains can't break...". She tried breaking free again. Nadiae grunted "Stop trying, you KNOW that you can't break free yet you still try to.". Desdemona looked up at her. "Just do the right thing and give up. Looking at your face makes me want to punch kittens.... but since you're all chained up..". Nadiae swung a kick at Desdemona. It hit her hard. She bled from her mouth. Amazing watched in horror as Nadiae beats her up. What could he do? He was chained up. Just like the others. Is this the end? The other members woke up too. Plastic turned to his left and saw Nadiae pulled Desdemona's hair. "You don't deserve to be in this world! So why don't I send you to hell right now?". She grabbed her head and banged it against the wall behind her. Desdemona leaned there. Did she die? Blood dripped from her mouth. She began to cry but tears didn't come out. Blood did. She was covered in it. The other members shed a tear watching the torture. Nazmus shouted from the other side "STOP IT!". Nadiae turned to him. "Why should I?". She held Desdemona's head "I can snap her neck RIGHT here, RIGHT now if I want to...". Plastic got angry at her "How DARE you torture her like that! When these chains are off me, I swear to god that I'll tear you to SHREDS!". She ignored his threat and smirked "Oh, how heroic..yet so idiotic..". Amazing began chewing his arm. Nadiae looked at Amazing and then at the ceiling "hmp... Chewing your arm off will only-".
"Kill me?" Nadiae turned around and saw Amazing. His right arm was still chained up. His left arm was still on him. "IMPOSSIBLE!". "Nothing is impossible if your a zombie" and with that, Amazing launched a kick at her. He freed Plastic. "There, go have your revenge". Amazing began freeing the others. Plastic glared at Nadiae. He was about to punch her when Desdemona pushed him back.

She dashed toward her and grabbed her head. She threw her body. Nadiae landed on her feet. She jumped in the air and launched a kick at Desdemona's face. "I'm not going to fall for that again!". She grabbed Nadiae's leg and twisted it. Nadiae swung her other leg at her but she grabbed it before it could touch her face. She pushed her away and she tumbled. Nadiae disappeared and reappeared behind Desdemona. She kicked her back and Desdemona hit the wall. Nadiae got out her torpedo launcher. She launched a Torpedo at Desdemona and rocks fell on her. Nadiae blew the top of the launcher " Piece of cake..".

"THE CAKE IS A LIE!!" screamed a little girl. Plastic and Amazing tried to remove the rocks. The girl jumped down. It was Gillian. "Oh, the cake is SO a lie..." another voice said. Totaldile jumped down followed by Karra and Caine. "You're ours!". Nadiae laughed "BRING IT ON!". Gillian used her ninja smoke ability. Nadiae just ran into it. Karra jumped into the air and flipped. She got out her bandages. She hurled them at Nadiae and it wrapped around her waist. Nadiae slipped from it and Gillian hit her with her Heyora Branch. Caine helped her. Nadiae just kept dodging all of the moves. Totaldile launched her Water Gun at Nadiae. It hit her hard and she flew right into Karra's trap. Her bandages wrapped around her. Nadiae tried to slip away again but Karra was smart. She held it tighter. Everyone surrounded her.

Suddenly, Penutz and King Exius came through the door. King Exius gave Penutz the power of Revengeful Flames. Penutz wore a black cloak and a black hat. It seems that he coloured his hair red. He smirked. King Exius snarled at Nazmus. Nazmus glared at him.

Plastic and Amazing finally dug Desdemona out. But it was too late. She's not moving. She was covered in blood. She wasn't moving. Plastic tried to feel her pulse, but he felt nothing. Amazing stood up "...D..Des..?". Plastic carried her and shed a tear. He spoke slowly.

"....Desdemona's... Dead..."
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Comments: 6

ZeroSwordsMaster [2011-11-30 00:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Penutz woke up in his bed. Two ladies were standing beside his bed "Penutz, more fun?"
CONTEXT
It can save lives

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StoryTellerNamedDusk In reply to ZeroSwordsMaster [2011-11-30 09:53:30 +0000 UTC]

LOOOL!
Penutz= Pimp XD

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moonmusic2222 [2011-08-28 20:47:49 +0000 UTC]

da, du, DUNH! plot twist for the win!

i'm glad you took what i said into consideration, cuz i saw a definite improvement, good job!

Des, nuuuuuuu! D:

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StoryTellerNamedDusk In reply to moonmusic2222 [2011-08-29 11:59:04 +0000 UTC]

XoX

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moonmusic2222 In reply to StoryTellerNamedDusk [2011-08-29 15:50:13 +0000 UTC]

reads later chapters, yay! Dessy's back!

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StoryTellerNamedDusk In reply to moonmusic2222 [2011-08-30 00:37:17 +0000 UTC]

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