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StrixVanAllen — My Little Nocturne - Movement 3 END
Published: 2013-02-19 23:58:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 899; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 8
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I love those weird things pegasus do with their wings. xDDo = C in musical notation, if you are wondering.
People, like I said in my last journal, I'll have to slow down a little after that page. I have many other projects to tend to, and they are being neglected to make me go as far as possible in this comic. Don't worry, though, I've reached a point in which I'm motivated enough to go on. I guess you will see the end of Do's adventures and misadventures before the end of the year.
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INDEX
Part 1: [link]
>> Movement 1: [link]
>> Intermezzo 1: [link]
>> Movement 2: [link]
>> Intermezzo 2: [link]
>> Movement 3: [link]
>> Intermezzo 3: [link]
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Angry faces. Angry faces everywhere. xD
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Doesn't whether or not vampires can read minds depend on how bad the owner of the mind's penmanship is?
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Well, it's what she will discover. Or not. >:3
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They are so similar in design that I HAD to do that. xD
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HE MUST BE A VAMPIRE THERE IS NO OTHER EXPLANATON!!!!! It not like he just has red eye, kinda cold, and a normal guy er stallion
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She met Sol in a place known for having vampire ponies, maybe lots of them, it's difficult not to think it when she looks to a pony that has shown all the vampirism signs she knows from her uncle. Do is being paranoid, of course, but we can barely blame her for it. Of course, it's just an assumption. Better being wrong and discovering that he is just a silly guy than NOT assuming and having him in her neck, I guess.
The "memory lock" here is the memory lock spell that she suffered as a child. I forgot to add "spell" in the balloon, I guess it's because it's small. I'll correct it As for what is the nonsense her mother is complaining about, I will show in the next page, don't worry. xD
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You have never mentioned vampires in the entire saga. This is the first. And im just saying the way she said that quote wasn't good.
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Which quote? The lock one or the vampire one?
I just tried to show you what was behind each thing, so you can help me to fix them, if I can't figure out a way on my own.
...There is a page with a fanged stallion with bright red eyes. I thought it was enough. D: And I thought I was more specific in the letter that opens part one, but I changed it in the translation to "danger creatures" in general. I guess I'll have to edit it later and put the paragraph I cut.
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yes build up is needed but maybe edit out the fact that she thinks he is a vampire now and simply have her surprised or something like that was so obvious or some such. The memory lock is just nhandled poorly here
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I'll see what will fit better. Thanks. ^^
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