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SuirenShinju — Elle and Mias: Chapter 1
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Description Elle felt her body being pulled swiftly through nothingness by an unseen force. Still unable to scream, the only sound she heard was her own heart beating wildly. A blast of air halted the pulling sensation and before she knew it, her bottom came to rest on something soft.

The veil of blackness lifted as her surrounding came into focus. She looked down to find herself seated on the edge of a king sized mattress complete with a four post bed frame, canopy, and matching curtains. Several large pillows lay in front of the headboard and gladly welcomed Elle's spinning head as she collapsed backward.

To the right side of the bed was a white marble table adorned with a decorative vase filled with fresh roses. She could tell they had only recently been picked from the sweet scent they wafted into the room. It was a welcoming and calming scent that soothed her jumbled mind.

To the left was a large window that let it bright starlight and moonlight alike. The sky itself was a velvety dark blue and each celestial body sparkled so clearly against the dark backdrop, like tiny gems sewn onto the night goddess's cloak. It held the sort of beauty that wasn't visible from the streets of a bustling city.

As for the rest of the room's decor, a large trunk lay at the foot of the bed, against the wall in front of the trunk stood a wardrobe, and covering the floor was a large, intricately woven area rug. Everything in the room had an air of refinement, each piece boasting its master craftsmanship in a way nothing from Elle's dinky one bedroom apartment could.

Elle found it strange to be surrounded by such well cared for antiques. She hadn't recalled any shops or museums near her apartment that carried such furniture, so she doubted she had accidentally wandered into such a place. Still, it was the only probable conclusion she arrived at.

She crawled off the bed and approached the door. She pressed down on the old fashioned handle and in vain tried to open it. It was locked.

Disheartened, but not defeated, she left the door and approached the window. She unlatched the two panes and opened them. A warm breeze fluttered the curtains behind her and blew her hair back as Elle placed her hands on the sill and leaned her head outside. Spread out in front of her was a vast sea of greenery; well attended gardens surrounded the building and out further a dense forest encased the castle-like abode.

Now the looming fear in her chest that she wasn't anywhere near home sunk in. She couldn't see the glow of city lights from any direction.

"Oh…" Her voice trembled and tears welled in her blue eyes as they gazed out toward the horizon. Even if she could escape, she had absolutely no idea where to run.

Needing a moment to think, she stepped back from the window and let the wind soothe her cheeks and hair. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes, allowing the air to calm her until her eyes dried and her spirit calmed. There was no use in getting upset, it would only weaken her and in a situation like this, she knew she had to remain strong.

"Have you had enough time to acclimate yourself my dear?" A deep voice interrupted Elle's thoughts.

She whirled around quickly and stared wide-eyed on the figure that had entered the room without making a sound.

A man stood before her clad in elegant black clothing and wearing a devilish grin across his face. His raven black hair was swept neatly back and his dark eyes watched her intently.

"Who are you?" She asked nervously, slightly wary of anyone who wore all their clothing in the same color regardless of how good they looked it in.

"Mias," he said as he continued grinning at her. "And you?"

"Elle," she responded.

His mouth widened even further, delighted by the sound of her name.

Elle gathered her courage and stepped forward with more questions. "Where am I? Are you the one who brought me here?"

"Yes, I brought you here," he answered calmly. "As to where "here" is, I doubt you'd be able to place yourself even if I told you."

"What do you mean by that?" Elle asked slowly.

Mias chuckled. "Let's just say you're worlds away from the lands you know."

His response brought more dread than comfort to her, and that only annoyed Elle more than it depressed her. She clenched her fists in frustration and scowled at him. "Take me back."

"Hm?" Mias pretended he hadn't heard her.

"Take me back this instant!" Elle demanded.

He raised an eyebrow with intrigue and took a step forward. "You're quite brazen to address me in such a manner."

Elle stood her ground as Mias approached her. Her glare didn't weaken and thankfully neither did her courage. It didn't help that her brain kept imagining the worst case scenario: Mias being the incarnation of Jack the Ripper. He very well could be for all she knew. He had no conscious when it came to kidnapping after all.

"I intend to address you with no manner at all," she retorted. "Take me back and you will have my thanks though."

Mias shook his head. "This isn't up for negotiation my dear Elle," he said as he ensnared her waist with his arms.

Elle raised her clenched hands and hit her fists against his chest as hard as she could. "Let go!"

Slightly annoyed, Mias took one hand off Elle's waist and grabbed both her wrists.

Elle struggled to free herself, but Mias' grip was solid and growing tighter. Her heart beat increased as he pulled her form up against his and ran his one hand up her back until it cradled the back of her head. Her eyes widened in shock as Mias leaned his head down, his mouth hovering just above hers. Her mind was screaming for her to knee him in the crotch and run, yet her body had already begun to accept the seduction.

Mias savored the sweet puff of breath that escaped from Elle's lips before his own enveloped them. His mouth pressed firmly over hers and smiled into the kiss as he tasted her for the first time.

Elle squirmed the very instant their lips came into contact. Shaking away the confusion between her body and mind, she bit down on Mias' lower lip as hard as she could, breaking both the skin and the mood.

The darkly clothed man jumped back and held his lip in shock as drops of blood trickled from the wound. "You bit me," he said in surprise.

"You kissed me!" Elle argued, her voice still sounding startled.

Mias grinned, licking the blood droplet from his hand. His eyes scanned over her for a moment, before he chuckled and turned toward the door. "I shall take my leave then."

"Take me home first," she said as she stubbornly clung to the edge of his cloak. "I'll make you regret keeping me here if you don't."

He just continued grinning. "Good thing I'm not the kind of man who regrets his decisions."

Elle's fingers weakened and let the material fall from her hand. She watched him leave the room looking far more confident in his words than she was in hers. The lock clicked shut and Elle slowly sunk to her knees, having no idea what to do once again.
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Comments: 44

cartoonistforchrist [2015-08-31 04:00:39 +0000 UTC]

I liked the art of Mias and Elle, and thought I'd check out their story. Are you interested in corrections? These are the errors that I found:
4th paragraph 1st sentence it should be in
15th paragraph 2nd sentence it in should be in it
My mind automatically corrects as I read, so I thought I'd pass it on to you. If you're not interested, then I won't post them then.

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SuirenShinju In reply to cartoonistforchrist [2015-08-31 04:13:34 +0000 UTC]

If it were more recent writing I wouldn't mind the extra set of eyes, but as this version is a couple years old now, correcting it at this point isn't a high prioirty.

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ImagineCloudNine [2015-07-13 01:33:52 +0000 UTC]

I like this story thou awesomeness.

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ImagineCloudNine [2015-07-13 01:33:30 +0000 UTC]

what are these characters from originally? 

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Swanbreeze [2015-04-28 09:05:35 +0000 UTC]

All Mias and Elle fanfics seem to include Elle being kidnapped by Mias, then somehow getting wronged by Elias, and saved by a team of Abernos and Mias! Whew...

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merupuri2583 [2013-09-03 23:30:33 +0000 UTC]

Your story is so awesome!


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SuirenShinju In reply to merupuri2583 [2013-09-03 23:42:37 +0000 UTC]

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merupuri2583 In reply to SuirenShinju [2013-09-03 23:44:05 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe You're welcome!

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Orbins [2013-06-30 15:06:58 +0000 UTC]

what would you do if you were trapped by a mystical pervert

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zachani In reply to Orbins [2015-10-28 21:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Escape Bond style yo

The way you worded that was absolutely amazing
(you just made my day, in other words)

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SuirenShinju In reply to Orbins [2013-06-30 16:06:57 +0000 UTC]

I dunno XD I'd probably be hesitant at first, but given that I'm lonely and often sexually frustrated, I'd go for it

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snoopgirl55 [2013-04-28 20:47:16 +0000 UTC]

OMG XD I love this! Epic writing you deffo put me to shame lol

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Emilyrose2245 [2012-12-09 02:08:17 +0000 UTC]

that was amazing your such a great writer!

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LyraSilverfors [2012-06-22 12:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Uh... I just found this because I accidentally stumbled over it reading another Mias and Elle fan fiction. Now I am totally hooked to those characters and another story about them. When am I supposed to sleep??

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redflowerblooming [2012-02-18 18:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Hurry Elle!! A mystical pervert has trapped you!! You must escape!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aragirl [2012-02-10 02:58:52 +0000 UTC]

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Aragirl [2012-02-10 02:57:59 +0000 UTC]

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startraveller776 [2011-12-07 02:26:18 +0000 UTC]

Yay for Elle biting him!

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DreamsOfHim [2011-11-03 04:35:59 +0000 UTC]

At first i saw a picture you had drawn and i got hooked on the Characters. When i looked at your profile and saw that you had a story i damn near died of excitement and man after this chapter im already hooked. I love it.

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qingthing [2011-10-28 14:05:18 +0000 UTC]

aaaaah the supsense! the excitement! i'm hooked :')

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kittycat32110 [2011-10-11 21:31:36 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much!

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SuirenShinju In reply to kittycat32110 [2011-10-11 21:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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StressedJenny [2011-10-09 18:24:46 +0000 UTC]

I love your writing style so much, this is so well written! Oh goodness I need more of this XD I especially liked how you described Elle arriving in the room and the build up to her taking it all in. And Mias not wasting any time and his confidence is so great! Thank you so much for writing this! I'd love to see more!

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SuirenShinju In reply to StressedJenny [2011-10-09 22:12:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh Miss Jenny, your compliments could make me swoon. XD I shall do my best to continue spinning my own version of your wonderful tale. Thank you very much for taking the time to read it. I truly appreciate it.

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Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 09:40:35 +0000 UTC]

More!!!!!!!! I hate cliffhangers!!!!!!

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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 15:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. Hopefully inspiration for chapter 2 shall strike quickly. Usually when I'm on a obsession with a certain pairing I can write an entire story in a matter of a couple days. Knowing I have people waiting for more is even further motivation so please be patient for now. X3

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 15:30:01 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel. I'm writing my own Mias and Elle story but it feels awkward cos I'm 16

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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 15:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Well I've been writing fan fictions since I was in middle school. I'm 21 now and still not sure about half of what I write. Most of it has always been for my own personal satisfaction, but what's the point of writing and creating fantastic adventures and interesting characters if you can't share it? You aren't going to get better at something without practice and feedback. I've gotten so little feedback though. If it helps, I'd be willing to read your story and give you some pointers. English classes were my specialty after art so I know at least a few things.

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 16:05:58 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to that. I started writing when I was 11 but stopped cos of my dumbass english teacher, started again at 12 but stopped again for the same reason and started again at 14. English is my best subject too, I'm studying it at sixth form.
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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I guess I never had a problem with a English teacher... probably because my mom is one and I had connections XD But I know certain teachers can just ruin a subject. While I do believe you need to have a natural talent for writing, hard work and determination can get you far if you're willing to work at it. I'll read through your fic a bit later and see if I can give you any advice. Until then, hang in there. If it's something you really enjoy, you can't let anyone detour you from it. As long as you don't give up, you'll be fine. ^^

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 22:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks that means alot.
People have been telling me I've got the skills but the half time I'm like: "WTF have I just written?!"

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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 22:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Your harshest critic is always yourself hun. I struggle with confidence issues in just about every aspect of my life, aside from my love for a boy <3 *giggles* Your love for anything can take you far, even in writing. Don't give up!

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 22:44:26 +0000 UTC]


I have to say, I had a lot of trouble with school and the teachers never gave me the kind of encouragement your giving me,

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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 23:11:18 +0000 UTC]

You're*

Aww, that's sweet of you. Just out of curiosity, do you have large sized English classes? I know that's a problem here in the states. There's not enough one on one time with the teacher and students and English is one of the most complicated subjects simply because there's no one answer like their is in math and such.

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 23:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Not really. Not many people chose English language in sixth form.

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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 23:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Not to sound like an ignorant American, but what do you mean by sixth form? ^^'

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 23:31:19 +0000 UTC]

*ignorant -_-'

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 23:30:59 +0000 UTC]

and you don't sound arrogant btw

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 23:30:38 +0000 UTC]

In England after we leave school at 16 we can either go to college or sixth form to choose subjects we want to study.
Sixth form is more like school but its not compulsary education so we can go home earlier and have free periods.

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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-09 23:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay. Uh... I never claimed I was arrogant, just ignorant and I did spell it right. You have now confused me XD

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 23:56:29 +0000 UTC]

I put arrogant instead of ignorant -_-' I need to pay attention more!

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SuirenShinju In reply to Bunny-Tune-94 [2011-10-10 00:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Puppies!

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-10 00:05:43 +0000 UTC]

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Bunny-Tune-94 In reply to SuirenShinju [2011-10-09 15:30:00 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel. I'm writing my own Mias and Elle story but it feels awkward cos I'm 16

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