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BabyFae [2010-09-20 06:40:46 +0000 UTC]
Wonderfully written
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KaijuusandKryptids [2010-07-15 18:37:09 +0000 UTC]
It is very deeply emotional. The last line is my favourite^^
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sarhar101 [2010-07-03 04:39:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh my word!! this is lovely!
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Sunshine72 In reply to sarhar101 [2010-07-03 05:07:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. (: ♥
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sarhar101 In reply to Sunshine72 [2010-07-03 05:12:24 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome!! ^_^ <3
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starsorwhat [2010-07-02 09:01:43 +0000 UTC]
it's amazing ! <3
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MichaelOrtega [2010-07-02 08:20:37 +0000 UTC]
melencholy melody of heartache...good work
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i-hEaRt-RaN-cHaN [2010-07-02 03:34:09 +0000 UTC]
This is a beautiful poem! Love the last two lines, so sad but I still like it
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SadisticParadise [2010-07-01 23:49:49 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't have to make sense for it to hold meaning. Does that even make sense? 2 days without sleep and I'm one step closer to deciphering the meaning of something that cannot be touched or seen.
Eh.
Anyways, good one, very free and loose, it fits my mindset. Keep it up.
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Sunshine72 In reply to SadisticParadise [2010-07-02 01:15:39 +0000 UTC]
Yes it does make sense. (:
Sleep-deprivation=best time to write and think.
And thank you. ♥
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kyrcakes [2010-07-01 23:28:33 +0000 UTC]
this... makes perfect sense. I ADORE this poem... it's so beautifully written and explains how i feel as well. AMAZING job.
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Sunshine72 In reply to kyrcakes [2010-07-02 01:15:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so so so so much! It means a lot. (:
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kyrcakes In reply to Sunshine72 [2010-07-02 06:34:59 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all :] Than ks for writing such a great poem!
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