nucks [2010-10-02 15:58:26 +0000 UTC]
model looks really good (although personally I hate watermarks plastered all over the main subject).
One critique, I see there are shadows on the bench, yet she still looks flat against it - what you need is further shadow beneath her (particularly under her butt where it meets the green bench) - there's the least amount of light there, in fact any part of her body that touches the bench should have shadow - it'll help to add depth to your image.
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Supro3D In reply to nucks [2010-10-02 18:31:35 +0000 UTC]
I only put the watermark on commission works since someone had paid for it. They deserve the complete uninterrupted picture that they can do whatever they want with (except say they did it themselves). Otherwise, any works I do that is non-commission work has no watermark. Just the little logo in one of the corners.
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