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sureya — mystery girl... page 01
Published: 2010-09-28 06:52:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 7333; Favourites: 105; Downloads: 0
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next...it's been a while since i posted one of my mangas here... so here it is... 1 of my most recent comics...
the original manuscript is oredy with my editor... with luck it'll b out in 1 of the gempakstarz magazines in a few months time...
the title's kinda cheesy... but then it's a 1-shot & the story is only 6 pages long so the title doesn't need 2 b too fancy...
it's a simple comedy... about a boy that bumped in2 a vampire girl... & got his blood sucked... & what happens next...? stay with the story & u'll find out... ^^
sorry if the text is not ll that good... english is not really my best language... but i've given it my best... i hope u can understand the story...
my editor said that my drawings have improved a lot lately... & in this comic he didn't say anything about the background so i guess it's okay... i tried 2 do as much backgrounds as i'm able 2 do 4 the time being... the only critique i got was that i should try 2 do add more dimensions & try out different angles...
hait boss... i will do my best... ><
this is drawn with pilot DR drawing pen ( felt-tip ) 0.1... unipin 0.1 & 0.8... & marker... in about 5 hours...
( would b smiling all the way in US right now... she had been trying 2 get me 2 use unipins 4 years... )
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Comments: 72
Hahaha!
Sya pun sudah baca kat Gempak!
best lah komik kak Nut'z!
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biar la masuk gempak! saya tak suke beli utopia~ T__T"
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Oh, you're really good 
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thanx... glad u like it... XD
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you have really cute yet detailed drawing style, cool!
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the text is fine and easy to read 
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i sure hope it is... i'm not really used 2 putting my own text in2 my comics... thanx...
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this would be in gempakstarz?! ahhh baru je balik dri malaysia..
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it's already in the hands of the editor if u want 2 know... it'll b out in 1 of the magazines... although i'm not sure which 1...
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well I won't be able to get any now since I've moved.. 
nvm, I'll try and get a magazine with your work when I go for a holiday.
By the way, are you malay?
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Is much hard?? >u👍: 0 ⏩: 1
the background was a bit hard 2 do... proving that i still have a lot 2 learn... thanx...^^
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I really looooove your architecture ideas, sureya~
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ehehe... exactly... thanx... i still 2 learn more on drawing buildings though...
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I think you're definately improving!
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The backgrounds and inking are really solid
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oh... i guess i 4got 2 mention that this comic is read from left 2 right... like ordinary comics... sorry... 
i may draw manga... but i'm not japanese...
thanx... i still need 2 learn more though... glad u like it though... ^^
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I figured it was left to right, since I assume that with everything in English unless otherwise stated, but I think it could be made better with some changes to the balloon placements. It looks like you drew the picture and THEN decided where to put the dialogue. I'm not perfect either, heh, and you're really really good with art, but that's something to think about. Good luck
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i kinda 4got 2 mention that...
well... i decide the panel arrangements & pictures & bubbles during the drafting... but i do consider the bubbles last... r they still confusing...
looks like i still need 2 brush up more on that... thanx 4 the comment though... i'll keep that in mind the next time i draw... ^^
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oh... i guess i 4got 2 mention that this comic is read from left 2 right... like ordinary comics... sorry...
i may draw manga... but i'm not japanese...
thanx... i still need 2 learn more though... glad u like it... ^^
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This is really cute! I can't wait to read the rest!
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oh my godness!!!!!!
soooo cuuteee!!
it's really great!
love it!
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thanx... i love drawing cute characters... ^^
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oh my godness!!!!!!
soooo cuuteee!!
it's really great!
love it!
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nah... i still have a lot 2 learn... but thanx... i will do my best 2 draw better in the future... XD
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I love it, the art is so lovely!
I'd love to read all of it >3<
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thanx... glad u like it... i will b posting the whole story here... XD
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Awesome background!!!! 
Ha ha, I just got my pilot drawing pen and it's great!
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my lighting is still far from being realistic... but i'm doing my best 2 learn... thanx...
yeah... aren't they...? that's y i love it so much... XD XD
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Ooh, what's going to happen next? I love the little character!
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juz keep reading & u'll find out... ^^
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I sure will!
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ntah... bila boss decide nak terbitkan dlm majalah leh la baca... ^^
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Will you be posting the next 5 pages?? this looks really interesting!!
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of course i will... thanx 4 the support... XD
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