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Published: 2010-06-24 08:02:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 485; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 16
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Description Unipin fineliner 0.1, Copic sketch markers, white gel pen

Nothing much to say. Hope you like it and please leave a comment Favs are also always appreciated : )
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Comments: 25

tga-leylo [2010-07-20 15:33:19 +0000 UTC]

I like it! the hair looks really great and that outfit is awesome! You have a real talent with folds and wrinkles. o.o It all looks so natural!!
She's got a really interesting pose, too! I'd say my favorite part is the clothes though.
To me, the legs and feet look a bit awkward. It doesn't really look like she has any toes. Also, one hand is a bit bigger than the other. Other than those two things, I really think you hit this spot on. Nice!

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SuS22222 In reply to tga-leylo [2010-07-21 04:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Thankss I enjoy drawing folds a lot xDD They work wonders!!
My friend said that her waist twists strangely though....and I agree orz.
I'm really bad at drawing toes! The instant I draw it, I had to say eww and erase it...so I seldom draw bare feet. However this time shoes would not look as good as bare feet so I tried. I must reference MORE!
And the hands.....I made such a careless mistake D: will make sure not to make it again!
Thank you again

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tga-leylo In reply to SuS22222 [2010-07-21 04:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you can't go wrong with them unless they look unnatural! And yours are beautiful. XD
THAT'S IT! I was trying to figure this one out, but I now realize it was a hip thing.
Haha, who DOESN'T struggle with toes? Feet are just ugly. :/ Haha!
No problem at all! I really would love to help! ^^

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SuS22222 In reply to tga-leylo [2010-07-21 06:07:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha maybe I'll do some toe practice next time xD

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Haruhi13 [2010-06-30 16:45:03 +0000 UTC]

She's beautiful!!!! I love her pose, and the coloring, and her outfit, and everything else about her!!! Especially her hands~ And the way you made her top translucent and the beads shiny is stunning!!!
... okay... I'll stop being a fangirl now.

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SuS22222 In reply to Haruhi13 [2010-07-15 15:29:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Sorry for such a late reply xD I'm really glad that you like it so much (: It's very encouraging for me

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Haruhi13 In reply to SuS22222 [2010-07-20 21:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, no problem. I love your artwork a lot! It's very inspiring for me, I hope to be as good as you someday.

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SuS22222 In reply to Haruhi13 [2010-07-21 04:02:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you can catch up in no time by practising! (:

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ShootingStarNeo [2010-06-26 03:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Huh. The pose is weird, but I like the lineart and coloring. xD;

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SuS22222 In reply to ShootingStarNeo [2010-06-26 11:08:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks What do you mean weird? is it about the anatomy? I'd like to know what you think so that I can improve.

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ShootingStarNeo In reply to SuS22222 [2010-06-26 19:09:25 +0000 UTC]

It kind of looks like she's falling, but the way her arms are drawn makes the pose look kind of stiff, I guess. xD;

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SuS22222 In reply to ShootingStarNeo [2010-06-28 09:48:45 +0000 UTC]

I see, thanks (: I didn't really intend to make her seem like falling/flying etc just a very random pose that came to my mind.

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sfalco [2010-06-25 21:59:51 +0000 UTC]

i love this!! <3 it would b even better if u added wings cuz she looks like shes flying!!

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SuS22222 In reply to sfalco [2010-06-26 11:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank youu Actually I did think about it but I gave up, seeing that there is not much space xD

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sfalco In reply to SuS22222 [2010-06-26 16:09:54 +0000 UTC]

haha but if u can get just a tiny part of it changes the whole picture.

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SuS22222 In reply to sfalco [2010-06-28 09:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Alright I'll admit it. I'm LAZY *gets smacked* ; p

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DeriothII [2010-06-24 16:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... the only big thing to improve on is the fact that the neck is a bit long... but that's pretty much it.

Regardless, I really, really like it! The design for the clothing is really nice as well!

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SuS22222 In reply to DeriothII [2010-06-26 11:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot Oh I didn't notice about the long neck...probably too much CLAMP influence lol.

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DeriothII In reply to SuS22222 [2010-06-26 20:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, haha. After watching Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles, my drawings became messed up for a while. Hahaha

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SuS22222 In reply to DeriothII [2010-06-28 09:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Actually I really like CLAMP's style....althought the anatomy is quite unrealistic, I think it's beautiful.

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DeriothII In reply to SuS22222 [2010-06-28 19:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, same here! I really like their faces and CLAMP's ability to make really awesome clothing...

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Rayuki [2010-06-24 08:10:33 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifull I like soft coloring, and pose and details : D Fav.

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SuS22222 In reply to Rayuki [2010-06-24 08:21:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm glad that you like it : )

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dakota7861 [2010-06-24 08:03:38 +0000 UTC]

this is really good!
i llove the character design and outfit
you are a very talented artist :3
id like to hear what you think about my work
so you should go check it out

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SuS22222 In reply to dakota7861 [2010-06-24 08:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I've taken a look at your gallery. I think that the basics, such as anatomy, are not bad. It's just that it's not quite stable, meaning sometimes they could be a little bit off. You have no other way to improve it but to practise more, and also look for more reference pictures.
You could also improve on the hair, which is a bit stiff. Try making use of more smooth and curved lines, and a little more details. The others are ok for now. Feel free to ask me questions, I'll try my best to help : )

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