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SveZaTe — Key to love part 4

Published: 2012-05-20 14:13:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1795; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 24
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Dysartist [2012-06-01 03:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Okay, that just ruined it

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konics [2012-05-31 23:22:12 +0000 UTC]

what the?!?!? ummm... deroy you kinda interupted at an important part in the story

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LucTheArt [2012-05-22 23:47:23 +0000 UTC]

Odd story-line, you should have begined for example: Dash finished or has paused during her daily chores and than fallen to sleep on a cloud, and than that nightmare/dream, watch couple of MLP:FiM episodes, it would give you some ideas for your comic so that all chars have something they combined are with the MLP:FiM story-line, keep that in mind sugarcube and this Title of this comic don`t have any connection to the plot, but i like the art, comic and your drawing vector skills, so i`m looking forward to see your next comic, keep it up

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LucTheArt In reply to LucTheArt [2012-05-22 23:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Almost forgot, DERPYYYY!!!!!

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YesImDeadpool [2012-05-21 22:22:35 +0000 UTC]

So it was all a nightmare?

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Evilbob0 [2012-05-21 09:01:27 +0000 UTC]

1. GOOD!
2. Haven't seen enough to know what to dislike. Art seems fine and whatnot.
3. Haven't seen enough to know what needs improvement (seems pretty good thus far)
4. YES! (Especially if you have a story sequence in mind)

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bocau97 [2012-05-21 07:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Please...Continue...

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Gexalpha [2012-05-20 20:45:16 +0000 UTC]

oh....
i want a muffin right now
*goes for a muffin in the kitchen*

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MasterghostUnlimited [2012-05-20 20:10:30 +0000 UTC]

thats surprising

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UrpleB3atin [2012-05-20 16:31:56 +0000 UTC]

Was it a dream?

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SveZaTe In reply to UrpleB3atin [2012-05-20 16:57:44 +0000 UTC]

SO... what do you think from the 4 parts of the comic.

1. Is it good?

2. What don't you like about it?

3. Does it need improvement?

4. Should i continue?

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SveZaTe In reply to UrpleB3atin [2012-05-20 16:40:00 +0000 UTC]

yea it was all a bad dream ^^

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Yashmon [2012-05-20 15:58:13 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea what is happening.

Carry on.

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SveZaTe In reply to Yashmon [2012-05-20 16:57:24 +0000 UTC]

SO... what do you think from the 4 parts of the comic.

1. Is it good?

2. What don't you like about it?

3. Does it need improvement?

4. Should i continue?

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Yashmon In reply to SveZaTe [2012-05-20 17:31:49 +0000 UTC]

1. Yeah, I guess
2. The plot (HA!) was a bit confusing :L
3. Have a better story
4. Yeah, why not?

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SveZaTe In reply to Yashmon [2012-05-20 16:41:20 +0000 UTC]

how don't you know whats happening ?

she woke up from a nightmare

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Yashmon In reply to SveZaTe [2012-05-20 17:30:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh... OH!

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