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sweetFairy — There it is
Published: 2006-02-02 00:57:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description The roof
      leaked
  the colour
         of s l e e p . . .

    There it is!

A pretty face
   lips sewn shut
g o i n g  c r a z y . . .
       dancing around
  in this crazy purple sand

He didn't love
  to be without
the   o l d   n e w  shoes
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Comments: 3

Ni-Vi [2006-02-07 20:21:46 +0000 UTC]

I don't like poetry, but this is interesting

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SoCStarling [2006-02-02 02:44:15 +0000 UTC]

I like this a lot; "this crazy purple sand" is a very nice line. The erratic form of the word placing and the diction also speaks to some of the recurring themes- very cool way to work that in there. Hopefully you're taking some sweet English classes wherever you go to school

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sweetFairy In reply to SoCStarling [2006-02-02 03:31:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much. yeah i did creative writing last semester, poetry this. not sure what ill take next but the teachers are amazing

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