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Published: 2011-05-18 00:19:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 694; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 0
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Edit: Removed the light, it was weird.1/2 Icon Commission for
of his character, Moonsong. (Non-Animated)
Next will be a rapeface Moonsong
Hope ya like it!
Art © *SweetLhuna
Moonsong © ~DarethWinterstone
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Comments: 41
AWWWW SOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!! beautyful!
Your pics are amazing!
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np ^^
I love the night and the moon ^^
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Thats very cute! I can't wait to see the rape face one!
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Yep 
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No, I think I've figured it out.... Yeah, maybe her eyes are slightly big, but her head is also somewhat large. (Her forehead.) Without seeing her hair or horns, she just seems more... Not bald or reptilian, but.... Making her 'shorter' in the next ones would help a bit, I think. It's okay! The rest will look a lot better, I know it! Just think of this as the 'control' to make the others even better! 
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Alright!
Well, at first, when I drew her, her horns and everything was on it, but I was seeing nothing when it was 50x50, that's why I zoomed xD!
I'm working on the other one, I put her horn
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And hair please! (And her chest is Plum, not blue. Just noticed and checked! XD)
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Dang. Alright, I'll re-do her chest when I'll have time
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XD It's okay. We'll talk about it later! I can always commission you to do her again! XD
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I'm just really disapointed that she's not okay :/ I'll send you the lineart of rapeface to let you see if it's okay xD
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Here: [link]
I have a bad feeling about this one, my first time I do a rapeface o.O!
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Hmmm.... Well, I think it would be better if the neck was only diagonal/ at a slight slant, rather than entirely from the side. I'd say to have her showing her teeth, but it doesn't look that bad.... Mind if I ask a friend for input as well? I have it open on another tab, so you could still hide the comment!
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I can always redo her neck
Well, at first she was showing her teeth, but she looked weird xD
I can give her a little smile, like a little one on the corner of her mouth?
I dunno what input means o.O
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No, I think that a small part of it is you should make her snout/muzzle/nose a little smaller, as it hides a bit of her face.
Sure, that sounds good, I guess!
And input means opinions from others. Like getting some more opinions from others. (In my case, by best friend, Lycramosa, who loves Moonsong almost as much as I do! (Since she kept bugging me about Moonsong icons! XD
Maybe it would help if she was looking straight at us? (Sorry for all of this work! 
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It's okay. You pay for it, you need to be satisfied. Wait a little bit' I'll try to rectify everything on her face. ;3
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Okay! Thank you for understanding! (If she keeps giving you trouble, feel free to move on to someone else for a little bit! 
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Here ! - [link]
Snout is smaller now, and I added a little corner smile, and rectified a little bit the neck
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Ohhhh yeah! That looks a LOT better! Still a couple of small things that could be tweaked to look better, but I'm not a good enough artist to be able to tell you what! XD Thanks! I would be satisfied with that now! Thanks a bunch! (Not sure what to recommend for the bg, since it IS a rapeface.....)
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Alright! I'll work on it tomorrow, I need to go to bed :3
If you find any ideas for the bg, just tell me :3!
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Thank you! (Something seems off, but I don't know what.....)
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Maybeh her eyes are waaaay too big, I'm really sorry if you don't like it 
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No the shading was fine! I think it was mostly perspective. (Too much face and not enough hair and horns. She didn't look THAT pretty, no offense.... Don't get too discouraged please! I mean, no one did perfectly in EVERYTHING they did! I mean, when Edison made the lightbulb, and was asked about it, he said 'I didn't fail. I just found 1000 ways how not to make a lightbulb.'
So try to think possitively! You still have three more pics to do!
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Yeah, I hope I won't destroy Moonsong on them .. x3
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I'll send you the lineart really soon
Like in some minutes xD
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Okay, thanks! (Via note, or email?)
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Via comment! ^^' That'll hide later
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Okay, that's fine! Thanks!
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And I posted it to your other account xD
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