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Published: 2012-05-17 19:02:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1076; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 8
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I haven't posted anything for quite a while, my bad >.<As you probably know by now, It is because I have been working on this picture, I tried to make it better than all my previous paintings.
Fullmoon Wo Sagashite is one of my favorite Anime of all times, I really love that show, it was a matter of time before I make a fan art of it.
I hope you like it ^^
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Uhm.. i like ur style.. but u need still work to ur techinique .. i mean 75% of proportion are alright but.. looks to the left leg.. is shorty thn the right 1.. and ...the fingers of her hand.. ... the big finger looks like it's broken. a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/h/s… " alt=" " title="ShyPlz" /> . . .
and her eyes.. looks cute but.. are some rules to draw theyr to.. i mean when u are drawing a char .. u need have a space like 000(<--3 eyes) and u need del one 0 0 *(like this)
srry if i will mad u.. and i hope i heleped u..
* btw srry idk verry good english a.deviantart.net/avatars/h/o/h… " alt=" " title="hopeplz" />
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Hello PsychoTotal, thank you so much for criticizing my work, and don't worry about me getting mad at all, I am all open to any kind of critique, which is why I enable it in my arts :3
But I really really disagree with almost all of what you said, I mean, her left leg is a bit slanted, so it should be a bit shorter, specially seeing that she is actually walking on the clouds.
Speaking of the fingers, I admit they are not the best since fingers is the thing I am very bad at, but I think the thumb itself is alright, it lacks proper details, but I think it is anatomically correct.
As for the eyes, while it may be too wide for most of the Anime styles out there, having eyes that take as much as 2/3 of the face width is totally the norm in Shoujo-styled ones.
I am sorry if my reply seemed harsh or anything, so please don't hate me for it, I am just trying to be objective here. I hope to hear your opinion on my drawings in the near future, when they get much better(since I plan to practice more). : )
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dun wory i am not mad.. but i wanted just for help.. for me critiques aren't bad things.. i think is a way to learn wht u dun know yet.. and dun matter wht kind of style is.. the proportion matters in all styles 
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That's very good to hear, I think the same way about critiques, I made good strides in the quality of my art because of them, I quite like them
I agree with you about the important of proportions, but styles tend to skew them a little bit, these styles may not be realistic at times, but that's how they are.
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>w< another person that draw on a cute/sweet style!! 
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Merci, and thanks for the compliment
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I have like volume 1, but I haven't read more.. I really need to xD
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I only read part of Volume I too, but the Anime was too good, I loved it^^
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Yeah, she's ascending from the moon to attending a prestigious party where she shines with her simple elegance^^
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I hope she enjoy herself at the party.
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The sweet full moon could be a silver jawbreaker or a sweet mint
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Merci Shiroi! Glad you liked it
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Indeed, I spent more time on this than the previous ones :3
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Tehee~ my next one will be even better :>
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