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Published: 2013-04-21 05:33:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1538; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 8
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I am glad I am finally able to present Lily to you guys, she is a sweet character I fall in love with her myself, even when I am her author, nihaha~Pose note:- Lolita runs into Lily and hugs her, Lily is yet to wrap her hands around her sister, which is why it is still behind.
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Hello RedSwordman, thank you for criticizing my artwork, it wasn't bad for a first time~
I think you mixed between Lily & Lolita, Lolita is the little girl and Lily is the older, but I can still understand what you said.
I agree about Lolita's leg, I felt a bit awkward drawing that, but I will become better there the more I practice anatomy, I think the dress looks nice, but it would look more 3D if I added more details to it.
I am glad you liked the hairs of the girls, I plan to draw more hairs like that in the future :3
Will do!
And your grammar isn't that bad by the way.
I hope to see more critiques from you in the future~
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thanks.
it seems I mixed between Lily & Lolita because I ever saw a picture where Lolita had a short hair & wear a pink gown.....
thanks for the comment!
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You are welcome! And yeah, I changed the hairstyle of Lolita in each picture, it gives her some refreshing look. :3
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I had a right to be excited for this! a.deviantart.net/avatars/y/e/yā¦ " alt=" " title="yea-plz" />
As usual, I'll put the bad stuff first:
Lily looks kind of stiff, and Lolita's right leg looks a little awkward (which I understand, because I also have trouble with poses).
There will be more good things than bad things:
I like their very somewhat vibrant clothing and how their outfits somehow contrast with Lolita's schoolgirl outfit with the loafers (or whatever they're called) and Lily's fancy dress with the pretty high heels and hair accessories.
Their hair is also very beautiful and detailed! Teach me.
Overall, this is an amazing picture and I hope to see even more! a.deviantart.net/avatars/g/o/gā¦ " alt=" " title="goodjobplz" />
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You surely had :3
What do you mean by stiff? And I agree with you about Lolita's leg, I think you meant her left leg
I am really glad I like their clothes, Lolita is not wearing a school uniform by the way, but it is okay since she is wearing loafers(and yes, that's the name for it).
>>>> And so, how did you like Lily's hairpin? :3
Ahaha~ This is one of the best parts I like about your critique, I put an extra effort to make the hairs especially wonderful, it is the key improvement in this artwork^^
As always, I appreciate your critique, and I am gladly informing you that I started working on my next one, if my plans went right, it won't take that much long before I release it, merci for your time & efforts~
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Hehehe.
What I mean by stiff is that Lily's left leg is only a bit awkward.
Oh, her left leg. Sorry about that.
Lolita's clothes looked sort of like one of those gakuen uniforms in the summer. Ehehe.
>>>> It was fabulous!
Yep!
I'll be waiting!
De rien!
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I see, but does it being wrong & awkward make the whole body stiff?
It is okay, I will be even more careful about these things from now on.
Um, yes, they look a little bit like them, specially that she is wearing school loafers, the same ones you see in Anime.
Yaaaaay^^
Good, and just in case, there is a status line on my profile, I update it every once in a while, though not everyday or anything like that, feel free to check it out from time to time~
Je vous en prie
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It's kind of hard to explain it in words... 
There's a really awesome person here who posts pose references. Check it out:
Hehehe.
Yessssssss.
You know I will!
Oui.
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It is totally okay, I just wanted to know, since I keep hearing the word "Stiff" when describing bad poses,but I don't really understand what it means :S
Awesome! That can be useful for me in the future, thank you for sharing it with me :3
Good!
:3
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No problem at all!
Ehehe.
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Tehee :3
And by the way, I am almost done with drawing my next artwork, and I am about to start coloring it sooooooon :3
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Except for Lolita's foot being the wrong way, and the leg thing it's a really beautiful Pic. Great art, I'll be subscribing
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Merci for the watch Pandamonium! And I am pretty glad you liked this artwork specifically, I quite enjoyed making this one and I am quite proud of it. In a matter of time, you will never see awkward legs like that again :3
Merci again~
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Hi,
I just want to say that were backwards feet are important to fix in artworks. You don't always have to be perfect in anatomy. The artwork can always be beautiful and wonderful without having the perfect leg shape, or hand. Its how the art makes you feel.
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I agree with you to some extent, artwork can look quite lovely without a perfect anatomy, though I think it can look even better when the anatomy is perfect, mainly because bad anatomy can be distracting in a way.
But at the end, feelings are all what matter
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I suppose I can agree about the distraction part, yeah. I think it depends how the anatomy is wrong, i've seen some that's cutely wrong. Some definitely distract from the art.
True 
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mhmm, they are some of the cutest sisters I ever knew :3
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From "The World Only God Knows"
Shiori <3
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absolute fantastic drawing u done really good at art and u much talented artist...i like ur work my friend well done ^^
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Merci, that was very nice of you, I will do my best to make even beter art in the future
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thanks and again nice art ^^
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You are welcome^^
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Merci Sakura-chan!! :3
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Meri Sakura!!! And which one is cuter? Lily or Lolita?
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BOTH ARE SO CUTE ><
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I agree, and I like both :3
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Awwww, merci :3
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Sure, no problem
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Its really cute! But one of the legs or rather the shoe kinda irks me in an unrealistic sort of way. I think its backwards...
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I don't think it is backward, but I agree it doesn't look that good(I am assuming you are talking about Lolita here).
And merci Dear! I am glad the artwork was to your liking :3
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You're ever so welcome and my word choice wasnt that good, i believe Lolita's foot is upside down not backwards. When the foot rises the heel is up and the arch inverted mostly. But thats all, the colours you chose were very nice as well
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Ahhhh, yeah, I thought about that while I was working on the picture, but I made a calculating mistake in it, I will be careful with that in the future...
I am glad you like my colors choice, many people told me they look nice :3
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:3
How do you post cute icons like that one?
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